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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: jigs_b

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii shona.....🤗

hey nima🤗🤗🤗
ohhh soo finally after soooo long time.... yup after a very long time...
thanks so much dear..arre vaapas aate hi tumne update kar diya next part🤗....first of all sorry for the late reply.. i thought its been ages and decided to update soon after getting back....dont be sorry...better l8 than never😊
ok so now my comments of this part..
so veer n vishva has returned to Aryanagar...ohhh so it means no vinisha..now vishva😆...vini...did u read this??shona abb tumhara kya hoga??🤣..vini ka gussa jhelna hogaa🤣 lol never thought that vini will be cross wid that...dont worry there are more missions to cum where code name will be vinisha😳
so every one ws very happy to see them..dhaam,sia,...yh everyones glad to see VV
arre ye kya??parth n sachi ki luv story bhi chal rahi hai!!😳..hmm..vishva ne bhi aate hi puchhna nahi chuka pratap se😆 yup parth n sanchi have a chakar going on n vishva rani is very fond of their jodi...see vishva wants to get to work and know abt pratap singh
ohhh nivi shocked to hear pratap singh's name...y??😕 she has a past wid this guy too....n its not very pleasent
but gud that veer n vishva both noticed it...👏..they both r very clever..yup they are very smart
i like the way vishva made veer understand that this is very important matter so if maa knows something they shud ask her right away...gud going vishva👏👏yh veer isnt too keen on bothering nivi n he is glad to back in aryanagar he feels kinda relaxed abt it and thats where vishva guides him and tells him he needs to put the happiness of his ppl b4 his....n the mission n pratap singh are important...she's the ideal wife for veer
so fially they met nivi..ohh poor nivi..first denied to say anything...but gud after some time dhe said everything abt her past n patapsing n how he ws mad abt her n tried to destroy rajgarh...😡😡😡
n now he wants to make veer unsuccessfull king😡 yh this pratap singh is a nasty piece of work but thats true he doesnt know veer is sumone to never accepts defeat
but he doesnt know veer...veer kabhi haar nahi maaanega!!!😳
chalo finally the reason came out of pratap singh's enemy with rajgarh👏...now veer will surely manage everythng..ofcourse vishva jo hai saath me!!!😳😳😳 yes
so sweet of u shona....nice update...lovely,fantastic,awesome as usual👏🤗😳
me waiting for the next update....pls post it soon😊

thank u so much hun for reading and commenting 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aandhanika

Hey Shona, hey aandhanika Welcome back buddy after such a long time.... we missed you very much and your story parts too. ( But now your back and we're very happy) thx...aww me missed u too Okay on to the story =>

I'm so happy that VV and DSN finally met.... but i feel kinda sad for nivitri that she is stressing now about the topic that veer isn't her real son and also about the problem she had with that maharaj Pratap (man he got guts doing all these mean things)
need not worry for nivi coz she will be fine and as for stressing abt veer not being her son...she dont care if thats the truth coz she beleives veer is her son and thats all there is to it!
But now i don't have to worry cause i know veer & vishva will solve this matter forever 😃
yh these two will sort everything out!
Shona this was a really good part 👍🏼
do update soon..
thanks
im glad u liked this part n hope u will like the following one too

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy_kiran

wooow very nice update shona, pls dont keep us waiting too long for the next part, ur story is coming up superb

thanks kiran
im glad u liked it
i wont keep u waiting very long 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Vishvaas2 Part 6

Veer and Vishva make their way back to their chamber
Veer walks to the balcony and stand there looking outside at the kingdom...Vishva sees this and walks over to him, she places her hand on his shoulders...he feels warmth and comfort spread through him...whenever Vishva was so close to him Veer felt as though nothing can go wrong...he closed his eyes
Vishva: kya baat hai (she whispered into his ear)
Veer: kya mein iss bar bhi jeet jaunga?
Vishva: jahan hum jaante hai ap ek behtar khiladi he nahin balke behtar raja bhi hai...hum jante hai ke ek pratap singh kya agar aise soh aur aajay toh bhi apki he jeet hogi kyunki ap Veer hai
Veer looked around to face her...her eyes had a blazing look in them which reflected her unconditional love and faith in him. Veer couldnt stop himself and took her into a tight embrace
Cold raindrops fell down on the couple as they broke apart
Vishva: yaad hai...woh barish...woh raat
Veer moved a little closer to her
Veer: woh pal...woh ehsaas
Vishva: tab aur aaj mein kitna fark hai
Veer: sirf itna fark ke tab mera tum pe koi hak nahin tha par aaj hai
He moves even close...then slowly kisses vishva under the moonlit sky
The following morning:
Parth had some news from Rajgardh that he wanted his king to know and made his way to VV's room. VV had woken up and were ready to go for breakfast when a maid enter saying Parth wanted to meet them immediatly
Veer: Usse bejdo
Parth enters
Parth:maharaj Rajgardh ke khabar hai...Ujjain ke 5 khaas guptachar jo Ashtik main murti loot ne aye teh woh mardiye gaye hai...humare guptachar ne unko khatam kar diya hai...abhi tak maharaj pratap singh ko ye khabar nahin
Veer and Vishva had filled Parth in abt Ujjain and Pratap singh post dinner but Parth didnt know the reason for enemity for veer hadnt got round to telling anyone that
Veer: khabar bilkul paaki hai
Parth:agar galat ho toh meri jaan le lijiye ga
Veer gave a smile...he could stay in aryanagar a little longer as the guptachars were caught and killed...he knew the fight with pratap singh hadnt ended but he had time now
Vishva: Parth tum jayo hum aur maharaj bas ateh hai
Parth made his exit
on the otherhand Sanchi was walking towards the chamber with jewellery for vishva
Parth n Sanchi: Ahh
they had both collided and Sanchi fell to the floor but Parth stood there staring at the woman for whom he cherished a soft spot
Parth held put a hand to help Sanchi up...still gazing at her who's eyes were transfixed on him.
Slowly she took his hand and got up but saw the jewellery on the floor and bent down to pick it up
Parth also kneeled down to help her
Parth:bohat sundar lag rahi ho aaj
Sanchi:ji?
Parth: woh...ye abhusan aur shringar
Sanchi: acha mein chalti hoon
Parth: shukriya toh kahiye
Sanchi: kis liye..humse takra ne ke liye? there was an air of mocking in her voice
Parth:galti apki hai...apko dekh kar chalna chahiye
Sanchi: ye agar mein apse kahoon toh?
Parth: toh kahiye
Sanchi blushes slightly then remembering why she was there
Sanchi: humare pas in fisul ki baaton ke liye waqt nain hai
She trys to leave but Parth blocks her way...She trys to go from the other side but Parth blocks her again...She looks at Parth..he takes a step closer...she looks down...he was so close to her he cud hear her heart racing
Parth smiles to himself and walks away
Sanchi slowly moves into Vishva's chamber and watches her as she puts on the jewellery
they were both in conversation about Rajgardh and thinking that its the right moment to ask Vishva question
Vishva: waise Parth bohat acha hai...tum usse mili...
Sanchi: umm ji
Vishva: kaisa laga...mera matlab ke kab..mili
Sanchi: woh mein bas ....app kyon...kyon puch rahi hai
Vishva: nahin aise hi...
Vishva remembered Parth really like the colour red and sees a red diamond necklace with matching earrings
Vishva: sanchi ye haar aur jhumke tum rakh lo
Sanchi: hum kaise
Vishva: ek dost ka tofa..aur tum janti ho mujhe lal rang pasand nahin...tum par ye bohat acha lage ga
Sanchi and Vishva hug...all thoughts of status forgotten...seeing this veer smiles
Precap: Sia's hand is burnt n so Dharam helps her
Enjoy,
Shona
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Posted: 16 years ago
veryyy nice partt
i like veer and vishwa moment
plz update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
hmmmmlovely update shona...what a romantic moment between VV ...Pls. continue If possible add some more fun moments between VV & DS👏😳😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

hmmmmlovely update shona...what a romantic moment between VV ...Pls. continue If possible add some more fun moments between VV & DS👏😳😃

im glad u liked this part
hopefully more DS n VV masti will follow
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg...dts so romantic...VV...wow. lool...wonderful update...PS r such a cute couple to-be lool xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh shona at last after such a long time
anyways very niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee
thanx
plz cont soon😃
Edited by ektay11 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Comment On paRT -5...
Ummm....mai toh srry b nai bol sakti...else tum dhamki bhare/blackmailing msgs bhejogi....😆

Finally VV Reached aryanagar...😛😛😛...WoOo Grand meeting Huh...😳...Bt Bt wait a min...it means no mission...and finally it means no vinisha....😲😭....ab VEER vinisha nai bolega...😭😭..shona tumhe toh mai dekh lungi...😡...Lolz..!

Hmmm...Vishwa n VEER...der mind runz equally...😎😆...

WoOo...ab whu'z dis Pratap singh...he'z too bad...😡...OoO pratap singh loved Nivi...😲😲😲...Wat huh shona...Yew staRTed giving us shocks after watching kekta's stuff...nao itz used to...😆
Huh...it means pratap singh can b a threat to nivi in near future...specially if he getz to noe d truth bout VEER...😕😕😕...Gosh...this pratap singh..😡...!!!!

Hw dare he...😡...prposed nivi after VEER'z dad wz dead...

Lolz..Yew shud Include more n more mission...😉...coz wen eva think f a mission dey look in each other eyes...😆...n yups most important VEER will give d name vinisha to vishwa...😆




RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever😍😍😍

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