Vishvaas2-The End-Page 46 Part 16

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Shona

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: CutieA
realli gd Fanfic...cheers 😉

thanks hun!

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Shona

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Posted: 17 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT
Awww shona...happy to see ur update...!!! lol yh finally i posted it!!

Wooo nao another get up..kewll...VEER olwayz takes brilliant decisions......maan na padhega...!!!lol yh a new dusguise this time of a rich married couple...yh veer takes the best decisions...aftera ll he is veer!!
VV stopped wid other yatris...no palace 4 dem..or any other facalities...huh...!!! lol this is the best place for them if they want to stay in disguise n make food together 😆 😆

LOlz....VEER making chapatis......truly funny...VEER noes hw 2 make chapatis...!!lol i realli want to see him making food n that why i brought a scene in vishvaas and now in vishvaas 2 as well...n yh i thought in vishvaas one it was more funny though last tym in vishwas 1...once dV wz making food...remember yh i remeber but so do u n that was soooo long ago...wow u remembered!!!......and dun think dat wz even a bit successful...!!! lol then it wasnt successful n complete fiasco from DV's side but after that veer has learnt how to cook decently n is trying to do so...unlike last time he is getting somewhere...last time he had more flour on himself than in the bowl in which he was making the chappatti in 😆

Aww...vishwa cant c her hubby doin ol such thing wen she's der.......Lolz.. yup pati pati ka pyar 😆 VEER finally agreed bt jus to let Vishwa help him......nt 2 do d whole work......kewl...!!! yup they share the work n that way have alot more fun rather than just one of them doing all the work n the other doing all the aram

Lolz..wen u wrote vishwa get some floor...i thought Vishwa got sum floor...{ to throw dat on VEER...jus lyk a fun...!!!} lol i wanted to include flour fite between VV but then taht wud seem a lil tooo immature for them nah?

''Mil gaya,mil gaya...!!!''...lolz..finally dey gt d door to find out der enemy...!!! yh they found their enemy

20 men on one syd n VV on other...hw unfair......bt when VEER iz der no fear......finally ol men killed na..!yh 20 on 2 but VV are like literally invincable wen they're up for a fite 😆

Wooo enmity n dat olso soo old...n VEER has 2 pay 4 it......wats hiz fault...poor VEER...!!! yh enemity is very old n veer is going to pay for it...but Veer is veer naa he will get to the bottom of it all n resolve it...alot of past will be revealed...abt nivi n veer's dad n all that

Ohhh okies...nao RAJgardh n ujjain...enemies...!!! ooo inteeting twist in a story...! yh Ujjain has alot of hatred for Rajgardh n it is to be seen how Veer clears the hatred

finally dharam get 2 noe everything bout VV's mission...!!!yh parth told dharam n now dharam finds out why Veer hasnt reached there yet

Ohhh so vrinds exchanged d babies......bt shudnt cum nao .......wen she wz havin only few dayz left..shud hav left peacefully n died...nao ol will b tensed......!!! lol yh vrinda exchanged the babies n now nivi realises veer isnt her biological son...as for tension then nivi is wont care much that veer is not her biological son...he is her son n that enuf for her....but someone else finds out that veer isnt nivi's son n wants to bring this out to the world and destroy nivi's life

Hmmmm...nao nivi nt goin to reveal d truth...dats 4 sure...bt wat wud b her nxt step.....hmmm........!!!nivi loves veer greatly n will try to keep secret hidden from the world but it will be out infront of the world n veer also n what happens next is left to be seen

Dis tym it wz a long one...huh...!!! yh this part was pretty long.....

Greatttt update shona...!!! im glad u liked it Rki ji-dekha thank u meine nahin bola 😆 n no codes either

M waitin 4 d july......lolz...n den mid august.....!!! lol yh wen i'll be bak wid more VV scenes lol afterall the drama there is to follow a bit of romance as well will come

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Rashmi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#113

Hey shona amazing update once again... your really good in your work 👏 👏 👏 and please do contineu soon 😉

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tejasvi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#114

great update 👏 \

omg.........can't imagine veer making chapati for vishwa😆 😆

nivrti knows the truth..........

Nivi: veer mera beta hai....koi sach...koi insaan...koi bhagwan ye nahin baadal sakta...Veer mera beta hai...sirf mera!!!

ek dialogue reh gaya.....veer sirf mera beta usse mujhse koi chin nahi sakta.......(which she tells in dv hamesha)😆😆

will dharam sia join veer vishwa?????????

TEJASVI**

RAJAT TOKAS -TOKEN OF LOVE &FRIENDSHIP

U R SO cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeee RAJAT

ur smile makes my day..so keep smiling

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Shona

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Posted: 17 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: aandhanika
Hey shona amazing update once again... your really good in your work 👏 👏 👏 and please do contineu soon 😉

thank u aandhanika
im realli pleased taht u like my work 😊

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Shona

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Posted: 17 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: teju
great update thank u teju!

omg.........can't imagine veer making chapati for vishwa lol he is a very dutiful hubby n has learnt to make chappatis after the fiasco in kitchen in vishvaas 1

nivrti knows the truth..........yup

Nivi: veer mera beta hai....koi sach...koi insaan...koi bhagwan ye nahin baadal sakta...Veer mera beta hai...sirf mera!!!

ek dialogue reh gaya.....veer sirf mera beta usse mujhse koi chin nahi sakta.......(which she tells in dv hamesha) lol 😆 never thought of that...n i dont think in vishvaas she fears that she will ever lose him...or not as much as she fears in the show

will dharam sia join veer vishwa????????? umm i dont think so...this is veer's problem n he will sort it along with vishva....dharam will have a problem of his own soon

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Vishvaas 2 Part5:

Firstly sorry everyone for taking such a long break and not being able to update anyways now im back with the next part but heres a small recap of what happen previously:

Sambha and Parth get to aryanagar and tell Dharam about Veer and Vishva's mission. Veer and Vishva get to know that their enemy is the king of Ujjain,Pratap Singh, on the otherhand Niviriti is told that Veer is not her biological son by Vrinda.

heres next:

Veer: humme lagta hai humme Aryanagar jaldi ja kar maa se sab puch na chahiye, iss bahane Dharam aur Sia bhabhi se bhi mil lenge

Vishva: zara socho maa ka chehra kaisa hoga jab unki bahu unke samne aise jayegi

She gestured at her getup...her clothes had been torn in many places due to all the fighting...veer clothes too were torn and dirty.

Both get themselves fresh clothes and head for Aryanagar. Veer and Vishva were very adventurous and this was the reason why they knew all the shortcuts around the district. After cutting through a jungle and cutting out 5 hrs of excess travelling VV arrive in Aryanagar

Sia: Veer...Vishva

Dharam also greets them as they arrive

Apparently Dharam and Sia were planning to go to a mandir to pray for VV success and wellbeing but called it off as VV were there

DV hug and Vishva and Sia hug

Veer: Dharam maa kahan hai

Dharam: pata nahin humne bua ko aaj nahin dekha...Sia apko pata hai

Sia: nahin toh hum kisiko bhej te hai bua ko dhundhne

Nivi: koi zaroorat nahin maharani sia hum yahin hai

She walks across the corridor to the four and hugs immediately chanting in her mind "veer sirf mera beta hai sirf mera"

VV take her blessings

Sia insists its dinner time and that they shud go for dinner and talk later when Veer says he wants to tlk to nivi privately

All go down for dinner where they have been joined by Parth

Parth: Pranam maharaj...pranam maharani

Vishva whispers in Parths ear: Parth Sanchi se mil liye

Parth shakes his head

Parth and Vishva shared a brother-sister relationship as well...Vishva was keen on setting up Parth with her friend and maid Sanchi who was serving sia at the moment...she knew Parth cherished a soft spot for Sanchi

Parth: maharaj kya kuch pata chala

Veer: bohat nahin...vaise Parth tumne ujjain ke raja Pratap Singh ka naam suna hai

Niviriti froze in her chair...Vishva saw this from teh corner of her eye and shot a quick look at Veer who blink to indicate that he had seen the sme

Parth: umm...suna hai par mein bohat unke bare mein nahin janta...kuch pata lagana hai...

Vishva replied instead of Veer

Vishva: nahin...kuch nahin aise he...maa apko aur roti chahiye

Nivi was lost in her own thoughts of Pratap Singh

Sia: bua...bua

Nivi: huh?

Sia: roti

Nivi: a..nahin..nahin

DV then chatted about their experience with handling teh throne

Veer: vaise is baat ko toh koi tal nahin sakta ke tum ke behtar bhai ho par behtar raja toh Veer he hai

All chuckled at this apart from Nivi whom seemed to put on a false smile to hide the tension on her face which was noticed by Vishva and Veer

Nivi went to her room to rest while Veer and Vishva went into the room which still belonged to Veer even after leaving aryanagar

Vishva: ek baat toh tay hai...maa iss pratap singh ke bare mein bohat janti hai...humme unse baat karni chahiye...abhi

Veer: woh aram kar rahi hai

Vishva: Veer hum yahan dil behlane nahin aye...hum yahan Pratap singh ke bare mein jaan ne aye hai...Veer hum waqt nahin gava sakte...baat samajiye

Veer: chaliye...maa ke pass

Both left for Nivi's room

A maid stops them

maid: rani maa aram kar rahi hai

veer seemed satisfied with the annswered but Vishva took matters in hand

Vishva: unse kahiye unka beta veer aur bahu vishva aye hai...

The maid bows and leaves onli to cum bak moments later with nivi's consent for VV to come into her chamber

Nivi: kya hua veer...is waqt kya kaam hai...kaal subha baat nahin ho sakti....kya baat hai Vishva

Veer: maa woh...humme Pratap singh ke bare mein jaan na tha

Nivi: kaun pratap singh

her voice was unconvincing

Veer looked at Vishva for support

Vishva: maa hum apke bache hai...ap humse jhooth nahin bol sakti...hum jante hai ap pratap singh ko janti hai

Nivi: nahin!...tum log aisa kyun puch rahe ho

Vishva: kyunki Pratap singh Rajgarh ke kilaf saazish rach raha hai.....humme uske bare mein jaan na hai...

Nivi looks shaken

Veer: maa mein jaan na chahta hoon ke pratap singh ki kya dushmani hai Rajgardh se

Nivi paces the room for a while and VV look at her and each other

Nivi: Pratap singh humse pehli bar mila tha shiv mandir ki yatra mein...us waqt halat he kuch aise teh ke humme teen din saath guzare teh aur un teen din mein pratap singh ko...ko humse pyar hogaya...

humari taraf se aisa kuch nahin tha....kuch waqt badh unke pitaahji aye teh humara haath mangne par humne saaf mana kardiya kyun hum apke pitah se pyar karte teh....humme kya pata ke humme pana pratap singh ka junoon ban chuka tha...

in english the above dialogue:

Pratap singh first met nivi in a shiv mandir yatra. Due to circumstances Nivi and Pratap singh ended up spending 3 whole days alone together during which Pratap singh fell in love with nivi. However nivi didnt feel the sme way. some time afterwards Pratap singh's father came to ask for nivi's hand in marriage but nivi refused as she loved Veer's father. Pratap singh became absesses about nivi

nivi was shaking as she recalled her past

Pratap singh did everything in his power to damage Rajgardh and hurt nivi on every opportunity available...he even prposed to her after her husband expired

.....everything seemed to fit into place thought Veer

Pratap singh wants to make Veer seem an unsuccessful king....hurt the people of rajgargh...hurt veer and all this will hurt Nivi....Pratap singh knows veer has alot of neighbouring friends and allias and he will overpower pratap singh in war so pratap singh was trying to make rajgardh's public go against Veer....

Vishva and Veer comfort nivi and look into one anotehr eyes...determined to avenge Pratap singh for the trouble he was giving nivi and them

Precap: Veer confronts Pratap singh

Hope u liked it

plz leave comments and feedback😊

Shona

Edited by **Shona** - 16 years ago

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seema

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Posted: 16 years ago

#118

Woow shona that was realli good.welcum bk 🤗 as well. missed..

i liked the wai u put pratap singh in his place n showed who he was n wah relationship he had with nivi..to good

wens ure next update??😊

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Megha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#119

after a long time shona...great work once again....I really enjoyed reading it..Pls. post the next part soon

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: heaven princess
Woow shona that was realli good.welcum bk 🤗 as well. missed..

i liked the wai u put pratap singh in his place n showed who he was n wah relationship he had with nivi..to good

wens ure next update??😊

thank u seema

yh pratap singh has history wid nivi n rajgardh n more will be revealed in the following parts

next update...today ya tommorrow