Vishvaas2-The End-Page 46 Part 16

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nadia

@xoxcuddlesxox

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Posted: 16 years ago

#121

wow this is good cant wait for the next part

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Shona

@shona.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: meghaparti
after a long time shona...great work once again....I really enjoyed reading it..Pls. post the next part soon

yh its been ages

im glad u liked my work n enjoyed reading it

will post next part soon

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Shona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: xoxcuddlesxox
wow this is good cant wait for the next part

thank u

im glad u liked it!

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esha

@bunny007

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#124

i loved it yaar plz cont...

esha

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Ams

@CutieA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#125

wooow awsome update...its good to read ur ff again! mishd dem sooooooooo much hehe...update soon xxx

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Shona

@shona.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: hiri
i loved it yaar plz cont...

esha

thx esha

im glad u liked it hun!

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Shona

@shona.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: CutieA
wooow awsome update...its good to read ur ff again! mishd dem sooooooooo much hehe...update soon xxx

thx

im glad u liked the update

yh it feels gr8 to update this story after so long

will update soon!

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Nima

@nims23

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#128

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii shona.....🤗

ohhh soo finally after soooo long time....

thanks so much dear..arre vaapas aate hi tumne update kar diya next part🤗....first of all sorry for the late reply..

ok so now my comments of this part..

so veer n vishva has returned to Aryanagar...ohhh so it means no vinisha..now vishva😆...vini...did u read this??shona abb tumhara kya hoga??🤣..vini ka gussa jhelna hogaa🤣

so every one ws very happy to see them..dhaam,sia,...

arre ye kya??parth n sachi ki luv story bhi chal rahi hai!!😳..hmm..vishva ne bhi aate hi puchhna nahi chuka pratap se😆

ohhh nivi shocked to hear pratap singh's name...y??😕

but gud that veer n vishva both noticed it...👏..they both r very clever..

i like the way vishva made veer understand that this is very important matter so if maa knows something they shud ask her right away...gud going vishva👏👏

so fially they met nivi..ohh poor nivi..first denied to say anything...but gud after some time dhe said everything abt her past n patapsing n how he ws mad abt her n tried to destroy rajgarh...😡😡😡

n now he wants to make veer unsuccessfull king😡

but he doesnt know veer...veer kabhi haar nahi maaanega!!!😳

chalo finally the reason came out of pratap singh's enemy with rajgarh👏...now veer will surely manage everythng..ofcourse vishva jo hai saath me!!!😳😳😳

so sweet of u shona....nice update...lovely,fantastic,awesome as usual👏🤗😳

me waiting for the next update....pls post it soon😊

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#129

Hey Shona, Welcome back buddy after such a long time.... we missed you very much and your story parts too. ( But now your back and we're very happy) Okay on to the story =>
I'm so happy that VV and DSN finally met.... but i feel kinda sad for nivitri that she is stressing now about the topic that veer isn't her real son and also about the problem she had with that maharaj Pratap (man he got guts doing all these mean things)

But now i don't have to worry cause i know veer & vishva will solve this matter forever 😃

Shona this was a really good part 👍🏼

do update soon..

Edited by aandhanika - 16 years ago