Samyukta Pt12 -What misunderstanding? ;) - Page 5

hey weren't you supposed to put up the review??I see only empty space! 😛

@ sara

awwww 😳 thank you so much sara... we dont like lambaa MUs and lambaa faansis you see 😆 thats why MU for only 4 episodes... 😊 waise i am also progressing with the story faster than sagars na.. so i dont want to kheench... if God permits and i am appreciated then i might and would like to go the whole circle i.e. till the end of the war etc... with a happy ending.. [;i loved the dialogue and looks like everyone loved the dialogue "She is imperfectly perfect" 😳 awwww... me happy...

yes Veer is my favourite too 😆 sab ka favourite hai woh...😆 thank you for the complement on shera.. 😳
thank you sara...

@ minnoooooo

thank you pumpkin.. thanks for following it...😳 and replying

@ poonam

thank you so much for your reply... all these replies keep me going.. warna its tough work.. and i am really not one of the most tenacious people around 😆

@ piyu

what an honour to have you here madam... 😳 awww and you read all of it at one go... 😕 awww so sweet of you... really piyu being a writer yourself, your comments mean a lot to me.. as you would understand character depth and story.. and i am very happy that you enjoyed reading this.. 😳 looool i think me going to copywright that imperfectly perfect waala dialogue 😆 and siya is innocent and childish but she has a heart of gold.. i think dharam fell for her innocence more than anything else.. 😊 awww bless thank you piyu...

hee hee daksha ka to kyaa kahein.. she is very tomboyish fullto (forgive my horrible mumbaiyya😆) kind of girl...itna bhi mat rona uske liye.. woh khud bhi dukhi hona nahin jaanti... 😛 both bhalla and daksha are characters i felt that if added to the sagars version would make for more entertaining reading.. 😊

i will try and show agni and jai of equal intellectual abilities like D and V.... 😊 i will definitely try my best.. thank you so much for your comments..

this complement really touched me -> I loved the way you proceeded the story with same pace, without letting readers get bore. Each sentence is artistically written man.👏 Waiting for next parts😃.

@ sonu

sonuuuuuuuu me didnt know you read this and follow this too.. thank you so much for your comments.. ekdam kal nahaa dhoke fresh hone ke baad padi kyaa (pertaining to our gutter convo) 😆 just pulling your leg hun...

awwww yes MU cleared... but there is war ahead... 😊 hopefully readers would be as interested in it as in all other aspects..

@ abhy

abhy -> preview?

lashy -> *gulp*

Lashyyyy dii....Preview plz!!....😆 (thnxx Abhyyy)

Cant wait till Tmrww!!... 😭

Lashyy di.,...juss saww ur Siggy!!!👏👏OOOOUUSUM!!!!

Shera is lookin marvellozz!!!Sia toor Reallyyyyyy good!!!😃

nahin nahi lashy i love reading....oh that was last night and i read your story this morning vo bhi naha dho kar😆 today is my chutti (mahaveer jayanti holiday)...nahane ki bimari mujhe kuch zada hai😆.....but i must tell u that u r a very good writer and paintings u use in your story are beautiful😳.....

ok.. girls here is a brief and rough draft of a preview (dialogues may change slightly as I haven't typed it yet)😳

Veer frowns deeply, as her cart slowly disappears into the sunset.

Dharam notices Veer's grim expressions and nods his head unhappily "Veer… off late, you have started behaving very strangely with girls…it is very embarrassing…"

Not minding Dharam's complaints, Veer suddenly remembers the parcel of sweets handed over to him by Daksha and runs to their belongings to search for it. Finding no sign of it anywhere, he speaks up triumphantly "Yes…I was right…I knew it...she steals things off people… my sweets are missing…I told you…she is a thief…"

Frightened by Veer's temper, Bhalla stares at him silently...

wowow lovely update, now i am so greedy, can sat be made into fri night 😆 😆 😆

"Veer… off late, you have started behaving very strangely with girls…it is very embarrassing…" 😆 oh god that before the start of the epi i wont be able to watch the epi with a straight face and then everyone will complain u twist everything, but why cant they show scenes and dia between dv as u do then no one will take there relationship in a wrong way 😊

Veer suddenly remembers the parcel of sweets handed over to him by Daksha and runs to their belongings to search for it. Finding no sign of it anywhere, he speaks up triumphantly "Yes…I was right…I knew it...she steals things off people… my sweets are missing…I told you…she is a thief…"

on bro goes completely shy and tounge tied in front of his lady the others temper rises 😆 😆 what chara contrast 😛

Wow!!!!😃

Amazin preview Lashy di! 🤗

so shera is a stealer! 😆 wow!...😆tat too Swweetzzz!!....😛 Me too happyyyyy!!! 🥳even if i wzz in her place (as a dakoo) i would hvv done the same thing!!...😆

Noww..hopefulyyy Veer will go to find her!!!😛aww!!..thn fightzz!!....Me too eagerlyyyy Waitin!!...😃 😍 😍

aww...Cant wait to see Veer so much lost in her thoughts!!! 😛

Donno,whyy but i am lovin this Shera soo much!!....😆hehe...taatss the wayyyy she has to be!!...😳

Waitin Imaptiently
Minzy 😳

Loved the preview... Veer mad at Shera 😍😍😍 OMG .. I shall love to see that.. hope he hits her hard 😆 Can't u post tonite itself ?? 😳

ooooh i loved the preview chech!!! cant wait for tomorrow's update... 😃

omg... 😆 mujhe nahin lagaa sab preview main itne interested honge..

esp after a such nice episode today on TV *sigh* 😳

minzy... dont double read into everything ok? 😆
and you love shera - she has hardly even started speaking yet... 😆

bhuvi why do you always want the hero to slap the heroine chi chi... 😆 waise bahut saari things aa rahe hain dimaag main.. but i will keep quiet for now...

ooo junior chech... howz u doing hun.. 😳 thankoo...

ok now hope the epi turns out worth waiting for.. 😕