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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thtz realli funny! I jst started reading it !!😊 U r a talented Person!😳

@ Kirannn..wo Imagainationz 4 next week thread pe aana aur Thumhaari imaginationz zara batha dena plzzz! 😉 😉 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

@ aashi

awww thank you for mentioning the continuity.. me was overjoyed with that comment because a lot of things happened within the episode and i didnt know what to leave and what to let alone... Really...There was a certain continuity in dis part dat i enjoyedd the most...and yes the MU has been solved... though i must say the MU was more a silly-sweet one than an unpleasant one.. Lashyy...dis is the best part...its just the start n I am glad u kept the MU soo short n sweet...nuthing very serious or heavy...it was apt...cute for the start..not like the Sagars or other serials ki MU...one MU leads to another...then to the 3rd...🤢 Its utterly ridiculous...dis was nice..silly n pleasant!!😆as they show in serials😭 i know me in love with Dharam too 😆 awww glad that the punchline worked out well... thank you.. 😳 Ur punch lines make such an intresting read...👏 👏 dats the beauty of the episode naa...these teekha n chatpata lines dat cum in between...remeber those kicker PRC Dialogues..."jungli billi...bigade raheez"..."Isse samjhana toh kisi ke bas ki baat nahi..."😆 i think u damnn godd with them...U shud use them often in episodes...the dialogues between Dharam n Sia are shooo cuteeee!!!

and as for the Dharam sia pair.. what crap have they shown in the serial 😡 why exactly and how exactly did siya fall for dharam.. no one knows till today 😆 I don't even want to know...as far as Sia fell for Dharam n he fell for her...only MOTI JI KNOWS...But seems he is not intrested in sharing it with the viewers...😡 Moti Ji..Jaagoo Mohan Pyaare...

yes though veer-shera love story would possibly be something different from dharam siya and sakshi dhruv.. Hmmm...Dahram n Sia love storryy is cutee...Veer-Shera...Clash of the Titans...all mind blowing n unimgainalbe stuffs...😆 😆

and as for siya..she is definitely childish aashi par woh bichaari.. she did it because she knew they were going to war and she wanted to make sure what little she knew about winning wars,.. she could help them out with 😆 so she took them to the springs to give them the blessed water.. Dat was such a nice gesture...shows dat Sia is soo caring...though she doesn't know much...she is always willing to help...good person at heart!


i am glad you liked this hun.. 😃 U wrong...I Loveddddd itt!!😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ neeri

awww hi hun 😳 hope your day today is/was amazing... i am so happy that you liked this episode.. dharam ka out and out episode jo thaa... 😳 and you liked the cute scenes... yayyy me happy for you... vikrant has been wasted in this serial i think he was much better off in DMD.. yes your guy was being very gentlemanly towards his girl.. 🤗

i'll go with ur pic of shera... i like her.. 😃

awww thank you 😳

i loved dv's way of befriending sia -

typical boyish way of setting things right hai na.. 😆 but i thought that was what was very cute about it..

all the dharam sia scenes made my day... crackling chemistry between the two... abhi se aisa hai toh imagine when they actually start romancing each other.... 😳

*giggle* yes hun...

oooh i dont know which jodi i like more... veer-shera or..... veer-daksha... 😆 😆 😆 poor daksha.. do try to find a nice chap for her (bhalla? 😉)

awwww no trust me by the end of it you should like veer-shera more 😆 waise tho ab tak jodi hi kahaan bane..

@ minzy

yayyyy minzy.... you adored Veer in a Dharam episode... typical Veer fan awww sweetie..😆

and glad you liked the shawl lending scene.. the surprise she wanted to give them was the springs of Niphaud na... thats why she takes them there.. because... she thinks the water will help them defeat their enemies.. (maybe the local folklore or something like that, that she believes in..😳)

and bichaaraa dharam was not being mean hun 😆 he felt sorry for Daksha and asked Veer to receive the parcel from her properly...He knows how to behave with girls you see.. veer is typical veer.. Veer agreed to write to Daksha.. but i am sure that was just so he could run away from there..

why are you dead hun?😆 your style of commenting changes with every episode... sometimes you sound bubbly.. sometimes serious..😆.. now this.... awwww am glad you liked shera (the character) doesnt seem like many like her yet..😳 well coming to think about it.. she is not meant to be too likable.. atleast till veer starts liking her na.. 😉

@ shona

i am really pleased that you read it... shona.. i didnt know you followed it.. i😳 am glad you liked the pictures and the dialogues... and i must say i am a true admirer of your ffs too.. i take out all the dialogues that i like and show it to friends who dont watch DV/visit the forum too 😃

Edited by lashy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ khushi

Rajkumari…trust me, nothing has changed… you will meet your prince and you will still have many beautiful moments with him… I am certain of this....don't worry…"omg omg omg....and that would be you....

hee hee khushi.... 😆 am glad you liked the part and the pretty girl shera... thank you so much for your comments that keep me going.. 😳

@ mirchy

awww you just started reading it? the links to the previous episodes have been provided below the prose.. if you would be interested.. 😳 thank you hun....

@ aashoo

thank you for your kind words.... and glad to know you like the dialogues... will strive to entertain you as far as i can thank you so much once again... 🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
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i am honoured that this thread was made a sticky... thank you so much kiran and the dev team....

i have a suggestion though.. i feel that there are others who are writing wonderful FFs as well na... tho unka threads peechee reh jaayega... i think to provide uniform justification to all those who are writing wonderful FF's regularly like pragy, shona.. etc.. we should have one sticky thread with the links to the FF 😃 what say... then you can just click on the sticky thread to get the latest updates of each FF you want... 😳 what say?

then we all will be honoured...

@ kiran and reena 😆 me just stepping out... me will come back and give you replies for your lamba replies..

Edited by lashy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

@ shona

i am really pleased that you read it... shona.. i didnt know you followed it.. i am glad you liked the pictures and the dialogues... and i must say i am a true admirer of your ffs too.. i take out all the dialogues that i like and show it to friends who dont watch DV/visit the forum too



of course i follow it, how can i miss out on sucha lovely FF 😳
aww yh its really cool to read ur analytic comments of my FF
aww omg i truly feeled honoured that u show the dialogues to other ppl 😳
nways heres a big hug to u 🤗

also im eagerly awaiting the next part so update soon...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

Omigosh!!I'm soo sad that I'd to return back to reality...how I wish I always got to read your classic and it would never end.umm...I want to say that you made up for most of the loss last week.Sorry for getttig so direct with my comments but I felt that way.Your this part is most amazing.So tenderly drawn out,I am still in the reverie of my Dharam world;this was just too magnificient,fantabalous.I'm really nowhere near recognizing all those efforts and talent gone into making this.You made such an imapact with this part you know?Everything here is perfectly prefect!! Oh God I can't imagine what my bro would say after reading this part.I can bet he'll be just too astonished as all of us are really it's worth all the waiting.The best part undoubtedly was the sring scene.What a reaction by Dharam!! Oh God!! you were so true abt this part being full of him.All weekends I'm on my toes to read your new beginnings...I was feeling depressed and so out-of-the-world after not getting a chance to read this yday itself.This will be the most read part di!! You're simply tooo marvellous...beyond words can describe.Let me dive into more comments now.

At the rear of the Palace of Niphaud – Outside the compound wall

Pained by their unconcern on top of what she thinks to be heinous actions against Niphaud, she challenges them "How impudent! Anyway...Just remember that I wouldn't allow anything untoward to happen to Niphaud or my family… at least as far as I'm alive!"

whooaa!!the beautful lil patriot she's becoming, is she!!? But here I feel so sorry for her. I love the way she responds to her country even though she s stubborn.

Further to Veers's persistence, she carelessly throws the rope ladder back at them, which strikes Dharam on his temple severely. Owing to the unforeseen hostile strike, Dharam flinches, touching his painful eyes. Siya gasps aloud, alarmed by the result of her actions.

Filled with sympathy for his hurt sibling, Veer holds Dharam's shoulder defensively and shouts enraged "Stop it! Enough! How dare you hurt my brother? He has treated you with so much respect all through. We have been so patient with you all through our stay… your food…tantrums…music…meddling…insults…now you are blaming us of political moves…cheating…" Dharam indicates with his hand signalling Veer to stop.

aww...poor Dharam why does he have to clear things by the painful way? 😆😆Sia slightly shows her concern and love to him...that's so nice.I love your story coz of this...even the smallest of feelings are not left out by you!! this makes the classic even more lovely.

Veer becomes increasingly impatient with Dharam, who; moved by the misery in her pretty eyes, starts apologizing to her "I am sorry we used the selfish pretext of a trip to Niphaud to investigate… but that was only because some people from our very own palace are involved in this too…" he pauses "However, we never wanted to misuse the life or feelings of anyone to do this…you have misunderstood us…this trip was never to meet you...in fact, the day I met you at the garden was the first very first time, I ever saw you!"

wow!! I admire my prince here!! He really is so cool and explains patiently!!man this Sia...don't be surprised if I start despising her;I'm very envious her

After many agonizing moments, she takes a deep breath and opens her eyes to find them still standing there. She looks away nervously "I have embarrassed myself enough …troubled you enough…I am sorry for everything….Rajkumar, you should leave now."

Concerned by her trembling stature, Dharam removes his shawl and hands it over to Nanda, to wrap around the dainty girl. Taken aback to find herself in the warm comfort of Dharam's shawl, Siya looks at him blankly "I know you must find my behaviour puzzling…" she wipes her tears "every girl fantasizes about her first meeting with her prince charming… the conversations…my moments…everything has been shattered…"

Realizing her torment, Dharam conceals his feelings for her; and assures her positively "Rajkumari…trust me, nothing has changed… you will meet your prince and you will still have many beautiful moments with him… I am certain of this....don't worry…"

aww... that was so sweet of those three princes.Comforting her in the ditress.What could be more touching?I just can't stop gloating about Dharam,how nobler are his actions!! Oh God he so willingly does not admit his feelings that's really so sensible of him!! He doesn't want to confuse her again by blurting out things, he is simply perfect!That was so brave on part of him to do this!!

he then whispers to the stunned girl "Yes…yes...I know you are ashamed of what you did…we know you had problems…you see we had our problems too!" he acts like he is pondering deeply to himself, aware that she was watching him curiously and then addresses Siya "you understood us, we understand you…you trusted us, we trust you" Veer then asks aloud to Dharam, sadly "does that mean we can't fight with her anymore?"

Dharam joins Veer in his sweet act with a dramatic conclusion "Oh! I don't think we can Veer! You see…we have to unfortunately call ourselves her friends now…"

aww I hope Bhalla too could do something to cheer her up.But no worries it's really so nice of Veer to come up and make things better.It's nice not to have only Dharam sticking about her apologizing!! and man I say this was the scene of the week!! wow!! now they are friends! This is tooo suprebly fantastic!! Friends - the very word brings in front of my eyes so many tenderly tended scenes you'll be weaving between these persons in future!! OMG!! How much I love all these! sigh just for the sake of his friendship I wish I were Sia.😳

Niphaud – Enroute Siya's surprise…

Dharam smirks at Veer's comments and makes a final attempt to ask her "Could we not come back for this later?"

Hiding her exhaustion, the charming girl firmly refuses "No! Trust me…you have to see this….we are almost there now… hurry up…you have to get back to Aryanagar soon!"

Dharam replies with a false smile "Oh! Yes…yes…yes…I never realized that…."

Lacking any further strength to argue with Siya, they follow her, lamenting all through.

teehee...thay got bonded so well and so soon!! how nice!! poor things!! phew being friends with a princess is not easy then!

Eventually tired of their lethargic moans, she swings around. In the struggle to hurry them towards her destination, she tries to pull Dharam by his hand; imagining him to be one of her friends. Realizing what she was about to do, she rapidly retracts her hand, while Dharam smiles gently at her innocent actions. Embarrassed, she turns away from Dharam's magnetic daze only to find Veer smiling at their silent interaction. Bhalla and Veer moan loudly.

Fatigued, Dharam advices them "It will probably be faster, if you just listen to her…"

magnetic gaze! aww I can imagine him looking into my eyes like that 😉😆hehe Dharam is so sweet not to let his frustrations out😳

Trampling through the last stretch of the rocky trail with closed eyes, they become surprised to hear the soothing sounds of trickling water. Gradually emerging through the thick woods, they open their eyes to watch a breathtaking vision below. Astonished, they observe the vast panoramic lush view surrounded on three sides by green woods and a steep cliff on the fourth. The rays of the sun rising from the cliff form beautiful patterns on the moss laden grey boulders of a beautiful temple ruin in the centre. Birds hovering around lovely floral creepers peck at two sparkling springs bubbling from the ground.

Forgetting their anxiety, the boys slowly start feeling gratified towards the princess, as she guides them through the delightful serene sight "These are the famous springs of Niphaud. I have always seen this place at sunset…but sunrise seems more beautiful!"

wow!! amazing man!! truly cpativating and what better a place to have all of them here in the lap of nature to nourish the bud of blossoming love between Dharam and Sia👏👏

Resuming their ascending journey the rough terrain, Siya and Nanda follow the agile boys with great effort. As Siya tries to keep up with them, her shawl suddenly slips off and she bends down to catch it. Shocked by the feel of a strong warm grip around her cold bare arm, she looks up in alarm to find the anxious face of Dharam. Not used to being touched or held in this way before, she stares at him in horror till she notices Dharam pointing towards a sharp protruding stone near her feet.

He warns the petrified girl "Be careful! You are very negligent…here, let me help you!"

Not minding her shocked expressions, the protective prince gives her his hand to help her climb the tall rock and signals with his eyes to take it. Reminded of their first meeting in the garden, she pauses and looks at him sceptically. Eventually, she gives him her petite hand and he hauls her onto firm ground. As he proceeds to help Nanda, Siya eyes him in wonder and feels her bare arm softly. She becomes crimson hued and re-wraps the shawl around modestly, still recovering from the feeling of his strong touch.

oooooeerrrr....why are my blood vessels pumping so much of red fluid to my cheeks!! whooaaa!!! how so gorgeous was this interation!! phew I'm glad she's all whole even after him touching her I'm already perspiring here ☺️

Palace of Niphaud – Entrance

Nands nods her head and sighs "Oh Lord Daksha! First I have to face Siya for my mistakes. Then I received a harsh scolding from my mother for not coming home! Now you…how was I to know…" she pauses, as she notices Daksha staring at the palace.

lolz Daksha!! Do I feel sorry for her or Veer who's going to flabbergasted by her crushful gestures!! 😆😆Dharam was serahicn for Sia awww how so simply awfully sweet of him to do that and what he got was the only glance by her by the window 🥺 So all those encounters have ended I can't believe that I won't get this dose of romance b/w my prince and Sia anymore (😲 Is this me typing all these!! Good Lord!! see what your Sam has done to me!! I'm actually craving for romance!!😲😲)

Blushing at the embarrassed Veer, Daksha confesses "I realized that you liked sweets… you repeatedly asked for it that night… so I asked my mother to prepare one for you" Veer seems confused, as she sadly dazes into his eyes "please do write to me regularly..."

Smiling affirmatively, Veer swiftly drags the reluctant Dharam away from the palace.

Elated, Dharam immediately turns around and looks at the distant bedroom window to find Siya's beautiful profile, peeking curiously. As the pretty shadow hurriedly disappears from the window, the prince beams overjoyed and blushes to himself sweetly.

wowiiwwweeee he blushes...how cute ☺️

Never having seen Dharam so happy, both Bhalla and Veer laugh heartily "Dharam… she is adorable no doubt... but…she is childish…she can't sing... can't cook... instead of her taking care of you, it will be the other way around. We are warning you, well ahead!"

aww Veer is so wrong here.All girlish things like cooking,singing doesn't make a good person,isn't it enough to have such a good mind and heart.Who is worried about the skills when the person who you are with is lovely to spend time with and share your feelings!! and this Dharam's dialouge abt her is the prefect truth!! aww 😍

^^ hehe you love them with their hands tied up? 😉

Enroute Aryanagar – Village of Sawai

ahh they are finally back now!! I'm waiting with dying anticipation to learn what is in hold for us next.But wait!! it is Shera there!! 😲 inAryanagar!! but how and why?😕 whoooo....what a suspense hmm she's speaking abt Tasha as if he is her friend!! OMG!! what are you giong to bring up di? my adrenaline keeps pumping up to know the next sequence to this plot!

By chance, he notices that the girl walking towards her cart nonchalantly steals a piece of bread from the vendor. Veer stops aghast, unable to believe his eyes.

WOW!! So you've kept her kleptomaniac and careless approach intact!! But it's surprising that she was feeding them water at the well!! why wld she do that!! anyway she's not being so haughty...this was brilliant!!

I wonder where you got this pic from!!I've a similar painting at my home in a book and shall I say that? This pic has a striking resemblance to me! I was amazed to see this in twinzy's avi on the forum and was about to pm her asking where she got it from.Now I know the source lol aw I'll feel somewhat awkward when your Veer has got to do things with her a little later 😳😆😆

I wish I could lift you up 50 metres high in air and shower you with gifts and kisses and hugs...I'm so fortunate to have got a chance to relish your classic...muuaaaaaaaaaahhhhh 🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi rabba atlast its become a sticky topic, thanks mods, abhi 5pg ghoom ke aaye hoon to find it right on top, ufffffffffffffffff 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Jr.Nancy_drew*

I wonder where you got this pic from!!I've a similar painting at my home in a book and shall I say that? This pic has a striking resemblance to me! I was amazed to see this in twinzy's avi on the forum and was about to pm her asking where she got it from.Now I know the source lol aw I'll feel somewhat awkward when your Veer has got to do things with her a little later 😳😆😆

ahem Ahem!!....😆 Twinzyyyy!!!! u look like tis!!..Aww!!! cant wait to see u!!...😛😍
Why will u feel awkward wen Veer will hvv thingss to do with her! 😆 😆 dont worryy thn juss keep myyy profile open saari galath famiya door ho jaayenge!!...😆😆jokin!!...

@Lashyy dii......u hvnt yet granted me permission for this avi! 😭 Juss givv me a greeen signal or i will feel bad!!... 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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excellent part 👏
loved dharam sia scene
also d last scene 😛
now me waiting eagerly for the next part😃😃
keep it up 👏

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