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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
oh my i'm late...

chech u'r the best.... 👏 👏 👏 i asked for cute scenes and u gave me so many cuty cute ones... *sign* 😳 😳 😳 i so love this dharam and sia... they are so adorable... imagine vikrant in those scenes.... 😍 me in dreamland after reading this... 😳

i felt so sorry for sia in the beginning... i loved this dialogue -
"every girl fantasizes about her first meeting with her prince charming… the conversations…my moments…everything has been shattered…" i could understand what the poor girl must be going through.. 😭
but my dharam made it alright - Realizing her torment, Dharam conceals his feelings for her; and assures her positively "Rajkumari…trust me, nothing has changed… you will meet your prince and you will still have many beautiful moments with him… I am certain of this....don't worry…" awww kitna chweet hai ye ladka.. 😳

i loved dv's way of befriending sia - "does that mean we can't fight with her anymore?"
Dharam joins Veer in his sweet act with a dramatic conclusion "Oh! I don't think we can Veer! You see…we have to unfortunately call ourselves her friends now…"
😆 😆 😆 how cute...

all the dharam sia scenes made my day... crackling chemistry between the two... abhi se aisa hai toh imagine when they actually start romancing each other.... 😳

oooh i dont know which jodi i like more... veer-shera or..... veer-daksha... 😆 😆 😆 poor daksha.. do try to find a nice chap for her (bhalla? 😉)

i'll go with ur pic of shera... i like her.. 😃

anyways brilliant brilliant update chech.. 👏 (ye bhi koi bolne waali baat hai? 😆) this is just what i needed after a disastrous day... thank u... muaaaah... 🤗


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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: lashy

@ sara

ahem.. that new entry is none other than our heroine..😛 the picture is for those who dont want to imagine themselves/mugdha there .. see me being very flexible 😆

accccccha !!! tu sia k character k liye bhi aik pic deni thi na .. i dun wanna imagine Pryanka or myself for it .... 😳 ...

accha i m reserving this space for my comments !😃

* dabba RESERVED *

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Posted: 17 years ago
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pls mods es topic ko sticky bano..........i keep requesting every week koi meri sunta hi nahin 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
WOW!!! Amazing! Without wastin even a sec. i am onto commenting! 😛


At the rear of the Palace of Niphaud – Outside the compound wall

Veer: awww!!! 😳 He was the bestt in this scene! 😛The wayy he stood for his brother wen he saw that the rope ladder hurt his eye! 👏Then the large monotonous bashan of Veer which made sia change 😆
"you understood us, we understand you…you trusted us, we trust you" he speaks aloud, sadly "does that mean we can't fight with her anymore?" Wat a dialogue!!!!😛 Simple words but which carry lot f hidden meaning in it! 😳 I simply adored Veer today! 😃

Dharam:He seemed so caring of Sia! tat was so chweet! 😛
"Rajkumari…trust me, nothing has changed… you will meet your prince and you will still have many beautiful moments with him… I am certain of this....don't worry…"Wat a dialogue to sayyy!!!!👏Power pact words!!!!😛His cahrecter is reallyy powerful!!!!!😛 (Abhyy n Neerii will be jumpin🤪) So sweet of him to decide to stayyy till sia became allright! 😳shawwl lendin scene wass OSUM!!!! 😃

Sia:Sia was just in best mood! She cares so much for her Niphaud! 😳 I like her straightforward behaviour! 👏 👏 At the end watss she gonna givv surprise??....Cant wait!!!!😃

Nanda:hehehe joooth aaj nahi tho kal pakadi jaayegee...😆


Palace of Niphaud – Entrance

CHWEEEET farewell byyy Sia!!!😃 😳
Dharam:My God!!......ladka badmaash hai!!!😆So meanfullyy he made Veer take the gift frm Daksha!!!Lolz!!..And his searching for Sia for tat one glimpse! 😛 Soooo Chweeet!!!!😃 And the one glance he got off her!!!wowow!!! ladka kharaab nahi hai,..😆
"Seh is Imperfectly Perfect"WOW!!!!👏👏Lovlyy phrase!!😛


Veer:He wass mindblowing as suaul!!..did he agree to write Daksha??....😆GAWD!!!...😆Me too curious to knoww wethr Veer will be sending a plane envelope!! 🤔 His teasing of Dharam saying 'it will be u who will take care of sia' was so chweeeeeet!!!! 😳 Wayy to go VEER!!!!👏👏



Enroute Aryanagar – Village of Sawai

Lashyyyyyy Diiii i am dead!!!! flat on ground!!! Tatss myy neww style of appreciating!! 👏
wowowowow such a fabulouss second entryy of Shera!!! 😛 😃hoolalalalleyoo!!! 🥳 Hoolaalaleeyyoo!! 🥳

Amazin all thnxx to Balla!!!! (feel like goin n huggin him) 😆 wowowow!!!...noww juss simplyy cant wait for the enxt update!!!! 😃 Simplyy cant!!....😃

Shera stealin bread was so hilarious n Veer dumbstrukk! 😆 hehe knok jhok on the wayy!!! 😛

U make this Shera sound sooo good!!!!Musst admit there's MAGIC in ur wordss!!!! 👏 👏

Lovv uu lashhyyy di lovv uu looaaddzz!!! 😛 🤗 🤗

pic of Shera is Fantabulous!!!!😃 shezz lookin PERFECT!!!!! 👏 👏 👏 I am stealing the pic....hope u dont mind!!!😆 Tooo much influencedd byy Shera that i am doin Chorrii too!!! 🤣
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆@ arshoo

First of all........Mrs Shraddha, u rock!👏👏...

ahem 😳 😆

ooo ok i dont know what is typical sagar ishtyle of clearing MU's but im guessing that its probably not clearing them at all... 😆 and was i aghast to see a "😍" emoticon and "praising the love scene" bit from you 😆 but am i gladdddd.. for this..

you have started liking the character of Siya more because Dharam likes her 😆 and veer's *ahem* GF you dont like her cos even Veer doesnt like her na.. dont worry i will be capable of changing your mind set.. and arshoo baba... thank you so much for your comments... here is a big hug to you, your comments and your lovely videos 🤗

@ kiran

ohh my kiran... thats your longest post i have seen in a while... 😆 thank you soooo much and it is absolutely lovely to see your comments.. 😳 you loved each and every dialogue.... 😳 yayyy..me thought you wouldnt as much... as this episode was an ode to Dharam... but glad you liked it..

Realizing her torment, Dharam conceals his feelings for her; and assures her positively "Rajkumari…trust me, nothing has changed… you will meet your prince and you will still have many beautiful moments with him… I am certain of this....don't worry…"🤣🤣🤣

par mujhe samaj main nahin aaya tumhe ye following line man itni hassi kyun aayee 😆

she rapidly retracts her hand, while Dharam smiles gently at her innocent actions. Embarrassed, she turns away from Dharam's magnetic daze only to find Veer smiling at their silent interaction. 😳😳

Hee hee... 😛

🤣🤣 she like me loves more glorified versions of things🤣

awww kiran decide.. you can only be like shera or siya... not both 😛

I loved dharam and sias interaction with the shawl that was so sweet.😳😳

yayyy thank you... 😳

good nanda i love u for forgetting to include dhksha in your trip🤣🤣

omg you seriouslllly dont like Daksha dont you 😆

Dharam's attention is distracted by Veer coughing aloud "Can't even look properly…" he coughs "she is watching from her window..." he coughs "upstairs…look…now"🤣

hee hee personally the scene below was one of my favourites 😳 i'd love to see RT/VM doing something like this 😆

Dharam smiles in reply "That's exactly why I like her… she is so imperfectly perfect..."😳😳… .thats the most sweetest pick up line I have heard

yayyyyyyyyy thank you 😳 (experience speaking kyaa 😉😆)

Ok so madam shera is back…………..but I liked that she has completely forgotten veer and does no recognize him, such a blow to my veers ego😆😆

ahem ahem i caught you out here... remember that both times when veer went to the blacksmiths, he was disguised... 😛 ahem anyway... all i can say is that dont take anything by face value... with this girl.. 😛

chorni kahin ki now dharam shd tell him who needs to look out for whom🤣🤣🤣

i know... 😆

Originally posted by: crazy_kiran

pls mods es topic ko sticky bano..........i keep requesting every week koi meri sunta hi nahin 😆 😆

😭 i know ...koi aaj kal haamaare baat hi nahin suntaa 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW that was AWESOME-
i loved each and every bit and all the dialogues are mindblowing

Shraddha di the way u write just makes the story so much better,u seem such a professional at this...all the description and pictures add so much flavour not forgetting the dialogues

now im waiting for the next bit
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OSR Samyukta Pt 12 Dharam..Veer..Siya..

The start of an eternal friendship…

Recap – As the boys climb the compound wall to proceed to Gadhwar to investigate, Siya notices them. At Gadhwar, a shocked Dharam and Veer find out that Agni and Jaivardhan were teaming up with the rival kingdom to overthrow the current regime.

Links to previous episodes - below

At the rear of the Palace of Niphaud – Outside the compound wall

The subdued princes enter the empty outskirts of the capital in the primitive hours of the chilly morning; still battling with the incidents of the recent night from inundating them. Huddled in shawls, they smile at each other, in frail attempts to mask the fear in their racy hearts. Arriving at the rocky periphery around the gigantic palace compound wall, Bhalla brings the horses to a slow halt. Dharam quickly jumps off to loosen the tired horses, while Veer finishes packing up all their belongings. With faint smiles, they proceed towards the compound wall to secretly get back into the palace and end their mission. As veer is about to secure the rope ladder, a familiar voice startles them.

Siya "Why not enter through the main gates…like everyone else generally does…"ab bolo

Unsettled, they turn around to find the determined princess and her anxious friend confronting them. For a moment, the three young men are taken aback by Siya's worn-out face and her untended form, devoid of her usual finesse and splendid adornments.

Worried, Dharam asks her "Rajkumari Siya…w…what are you doing here…now…"w...w...what😆

She pauses and repeats the same question cynically "What are you doing here… now…"

Trying to avoid confrontations, Veer mumbles incoherent replies as he hastily races to secure the ladder. veer to the rescue...His hurried actions to evade explanations, ironically causes the secure rope ladder to unfasten and drop to the ground. Restraining her fluttering veil with one hand, Siya immediately grabs the ladder with the other; before Veer could reach for it.

Marking his indifference, she becomes furious "Rajkumar Veer! Obviously, you have to hurry now… to complete whatever your political motives are…" suppressing her tears, she turns to Dharam unhappily "You used my parent's hospitality…my mother's trust…you used Niphaud...you used an innocent girl's feelings…why be so selfish?" omg...poor gal

Confused by her accusations, Dharam defends himself "What are you trying to imply? Rajkumari Siya… I think there has been a major misunderstanding here…"ya right.....😭my poor shia

Agonized, Siya interrupts him "If I am only a pawn for gaining control of Nipahud, then why the drama of a leisure trip to meet me…to talk to me…was all this your plan?" awww...she doesn't kne anythin...

Veer becomes irked by her incriminating statements and abruptly stops the seemingly stubborn girl "Rajkumari! Assume whatever you want to… you will never understand us …please just give us the rope ladder and we will leave you in peace…"😲

Pained by their unconcern on top of what she thinks to be heinous actions against Niphaud, she challenges them "How impudent! Anyway...Just remember that I wouldn't allow anything untoward to happen to Niphaud or my family… at least as far as I'm alive!" 😈

Further to Veers's persistence, she carelessly throws the rope ladder back at them, which strikes Dharam on his temple severely. Owing to the unforeseen hostile strike, Dharam flinches, touching his painful eyes. Siya gasps aloud, alarmed by the result of her actions. my dharam bro

Filled with sympathy for his hurt sibling, Veer holds Dharam's shoulder defensively and shouts enraged "Stop it! Enough! How dare you hurt my brother? right....this is supposed to be ma part...He has treated you with so much respect all through. We have been so patient with you all through our stay… your food…tantrums…music…meddling…insults…now you are blaming us of political moves…cheating…" Dharam indicates with his hand signalling Veer to stop.

Becoming a frightful shade paler in response to Veer's outburst, Siya chokes on her tears "I saw the weapons… the scrolls… the disguises… visits to the blacksmiths….w…what about all the lies…" on seeing their speechless faces, she insists "If you don't tell me, I will have to let father know anyway, as this seems to be a very ominous situation…"uh oh...

The three boys look at each other and sigh disapprovingly. After debating for a while, Dharam unwillingly starts explaining the tense situations between Gadhwar and Aryanagar; and the reason for their planned visit to Niphaud. As Bhalla concludes their short monologue by convincing her that the weapons and scrolls were only props for their disguises, expressions of shock slowly begin to mask the loath on her face.

Veer becomes increasingly impatient with Dharam, who; moved by the misery in her pretty eyes, starts apologizing to her "I am sorry we used the selfish pretext of a trip to Niphaud to investigate… but that was only because some people from our very own palace are involved in this too…" he pauses "However, we never wanted to misuse the life or feelings of anyone to do this…you have misunderstood us…this trip was never to meet you...in fact, the day I met you at the garden was the first very first time, I ever saw you!"awwwww.....

Gradually numbed by the crude reality and the chilly winds fiercely battling her tresses, Siya feebly denies with her ashen lips "Please...don't lie!!!! Didn't you speak to your mother about me? Your mother even sent my mother a message with the proposal…"

The already flustered Dharam, despairs "My Lord! What proposal? How could I have spoken to my mother…if I…I...had never even heard of you, Rajkumari Siya?"omg poor sia

Nanda endeavours to prove her lost cause "b…but I heard our Maharani reading the message from queen Vaidehi and it stated everything about your asking for Siya's hand!"

Frustrated, Veer puts his head in hands in fear of losing his sanity "Oh! Another person to add to this confusion...Queen Vaidehi...may I ask who she is...If you're referring to Dharam's mother, her name is Maharani Swathi, the queen of Aryanagar!"yes.....i didnt know this bfor though

Not wanting to face the shame of her blunders or her wrecked image in front of the young men, Siya hopes the earth would swallow her, as she drops paralyzed onto the flat rock. Nanda starts weeping apologetically, not knowing how to rectify the irrevocable mistake caused by her. Siya begs Nanda to leave her alone, crouches to cover her face and sobs uncontrollably. 😭😭As the three boys comprehend the misconceptions that the princess and her friends were having during their short stay at Niphaud, they begin to feel very sorry for her. Unable to leave her behind all alone, in such a grief-striken state; the boys patiently wait for her to reconcile herself. 😛

After many agonizing moments, she takes a deep breath and opens her eyes to find them still standing there. She looks away nervously "I have embarrassed myself enough …troubled you enough…I am sorry for everything….Rajkumar, you should leave now."

Concerned by her trembling stature, Dharam removes his shawl and hands it over to Nanda, to wrap around the dainty girl.😳 😳Taken aback to find herself in the warm comfort of Dharam's shawl, Siya looks at him blankly "I know you must find my behaviour puzzling…" she wipes her tears "every girl fantasizes about her first meeting with her prince charming… the conversations…my moments…everything has been shattered…"

Realizing her torment, Dharam conceals his feelings for her; and assures her positively "Rajkumari…trust me, nothing has changed… you will meet your prince and you will still have many beautiful moments with him… I am certain of this....don't worry…"omg omg omg....and that would be you....

Veer stares at Dharam briefly, amazed by his gallant consolation. To lighten the situation, he then slowly sits next to Siya to try and amuse her "I think it is better you go home now. Imagine what will happen if maharani finds out you are missing!" he whispers to the stunned girl "Yes…yes...I know you are ashamed of what you did…we know you had problems…you see we had our problems too!" he ponders deeply, aware she was watching him curiously "you understood us, we understand you…you trusted us, we trust you" he speaks aloud, sadly "does that mean we can't fight with her anymore?" 😲😆

Dharam joins Veer in his sweet act with a dramatic conclusion "Oh! I don't think we can Veer! You see…we have to unfortunately call ourselves her friends now…" 😆😆that is so funny

Never having encountered such a tremendously touching effort to cheer her up, she closes her mouth like a surprised child. Unable to suppress her laughter anymore, she giggles through her tears in absolute disbelief at their act; mentally treasuring the beautiful moments. Having managed to finally make her smile, Veer silently winks at his relieved brother.

Siya eventually musters her courage to ask Veer "The people plotting against you…are they part of your family…your relatives…do you think you will be going to w…war?"

Veer nods his head and mumbles in a low tone "Yes our very own cousin and uncle…"

She astounds him by suddenly exclaiming "Oh my! I have to show you something now!"

The relieved expressions on the boys' faces are again lost, as they fear the worst. 😕

Niphaud – Enroute Siya's surprise…

Reluctantly following the girls on the rocky trail, the princes deliberately avoid Bhalla's glares; aware that he was annoyed at them for having yielded to her obstinate whims. Removing two obstructing twigs, Siya reacts to their rebellious groans by assuring them "I may have done many silly things in the past, but trust me...this is surely not one of them!"

Veer rubs his sleepy eyes and sighs "Don't you say that every time you do something?" 😆

Dharam smirks at Veer's comments and makes a final attempt to ask her "Could we not come back for this later?"

Hiding her exhaustion, the charming girl firmly refuses "No! Trust me…you have to see this….we are almost there now… hurry up…you have to get back to Aryanagar soon!"

Dharam replies with a false smile "Oh! Yes…yes…yes…I never realized that…."

Lacking any further strength to argue with Siya, they follow her, lamenting all through.

Eventually tired of their lethargic moans, she swings around. In the struggle to hurry them towards her destination, she tries to pull Dharam by his hand; imagining him to be one of her friends.😳 Realizing what she was about to do, she rapidly retracts her hand, while Dharam smiles gently at her innocent actions.😛 Embarrassed, she turns away from Dharam's magnetic daze only to find Veer smiling at their silent interaction. A welcome relief for her comes in the form of Nanda's excited voice, calling out to the group. here she comes i was a bit worried for her....Siya composes herself and claps her hands, ordering them to close their eyes to prepare for her surprise. Facing her next set of silly instructions, Bhalla and Veer moan loudly.😆

Fatigued, Dharam advices them "It will probably be faster, if you just listen to her…"

Trampling through the last stretch of the rocky trail with closed eyes, they become surprised to hear the soothing sounds of trickling water. Gradually emerging through the thick woods, they open their eyes to watch a breathtaking vision below. Astonished, they observe the vast panoramic lush view surrounded on three sides by green woods and a steep cliff on the fourth. The rays of the sun rising from the cliff form beautiful patterns on the moss laden grey boulders of a beautiful temple ruin in the centre. Birds hovering around lovely floral creepers peck at two sparkling springs bubbling from the ground. so beautiful......me imagining it all😛

Forgetting their anxiety, the boys slowly start feeling gratified towards the princess, as she guides them through the delightful serene sight "These are the famous springs of Niphaud. I have always seen this place at sunset…but sunrise seems more beautiful!"

Grasping the beautiful view, they slowly descend towards the water sources. Further to Siya's request to touch the water, Dharam and Veer curiously bend over to feel one of the springs and pull back their hands from the icy stream. She giggles, asking them to touch the spring very next to it. They smirk at her childishness and then touch the water next to it, expecting it to be chilly. Feeling the hot geyser, they become amazed by the marvel of nature. 😛Joined by Bhalla, the thrilled boys start warming their hands with the hot water, relishing the occasional breeze spraying the tepid water on their faces.

Siya gently takes a leather pouch from the excited boys and adds "Long ago, Niphaud was under invasion. The Goddess of this temple danced on the Earth and the frightened invaders retreated. Since then, her blessings; these springs have been flowing here." that sounds so so so .....ummm amazing and fairytailish....my types😛

Wiping his hands, Dharam enquires "Oh! You mean there was an earthquake here?"

Siya denies "No Rajkumar! The Goddess danced on the earth…"

The boys grin at her naivety, while she continues "This water helped our ancestors fight their enemies. I hope it helps you fight yours too… I didn't know if you would be able to come to Niphaud again…so I wanted to bring you here…"

Perceiving why she was so adamant about bringing them there, Bhalla and Veer smile appreciatively at her lovable nature; while Dharam becomes overwhelmed with feelings of tenderness for her affection. 😳The group spend a few enjoyable moments till Nanda suggests that they should restart their journey towards the palace to avoid major chaos.

Noticing Dharam's silence, Veer smiles at Siya "You didn't know if we would come back to Niphaud again? Something tells me we will be visiting more often than you think!" yes yes ........you're true veer

Resuming their ascending journey the rough terrain, Siya and Nanda follow the agile boys with great effort. As Siya tries to keep up with them, her shawl suddenly slips off and she bends down to catch it. Shocked by the feel of a strong warm grip around her cold bare arm, she looks up in alarm to find the anxious face of Dharam. Not used to being touched or held in this way before, she stares at him in horror till she notices Dharam pointing towards a sharp protruding stone near her feet.

He warns the petrified girl "Be careful! You are very negligent…here, let me help you!" awwwwwwwwwwwww

Not minding her shocked expressions, the protective prince gives her his hand to help her climb the tall rock and signals with his eyes to take it. Reminded of their first meeting in the garden, she pauses and looks at him sceptically. Eventually, she gives him her petite hand and he hauls her onto firm ground. As he proceeds to help Nanda, Siya eyes him in wonder and feels her bare arm softly. She becomes crimson hued and re-wraps the shawl around modestly, still recovering from the feeling of his strong touch.

Palace of Niphaud – Entrance

The glorious morning sees a long train of soldiers and a glowing retinue of maids surround the noble monarchs of Niphaud at the entrance of the palace. The ardent crowd patiently wait amidst all the meticulous arrangements, to bid the princes a courteous farewell to Aryanagar. Daksha's saddened face stands out from the pleasant throng as she whines to Nanda "You are very mean… you could have at least told me you were going to the springs with Rajkumar Veer…I was not even informed…"😆😆

Nands nods her head and sighs "Oh Lord Daksha! First I have to face Siya for my mistakes. Then I received a harsh scolding from my mother for not coming home! Now you…how was I to know…" she pauses, as she notices Daksha staring at the palace.

Following gala fanfare, the radiant boys majestically descend the palace steps towards their royal steeds. The queen greets them politely, thanking them for the visit; and awaits a reaction from the king. Still under the impression, that her daughter was mistreated by them, the king gives them a curt bid; puzzling them. Unmindful of his strange greeting, the boys exchange formal smiles with him, before proceeding towards the palace gates. Conscious of Siya's absence, Dharam peeps back hoping to catch a last glimpse of her. 😳Restless about the princess, he takes a few moments to notice Veer walking behind him in terror. Dharam looks up and detects Daksha and Nanda rapidly approaching them with a parcel in their hand. Not minding the curious onlookers; the plump girl coyly hands the parcel to Dharam, who smiles at her softly. He then pulls the nervous Veer from behind him and forces him to receive it from her. 😆😆😆

Blushing at the embarrassed Veer, Daksha confesses "I realized that you liked sweets… you repeatedly asked for it that night… so I asked my mother to prepare one for you" Veer seems confused, as she sadly dazes into his eyes "please do write to me regularly..."

Smiling affirmatively, Veer swiftly drags the reluctant Dharam away from the palace.

Relieved at having left Daksha behind; Veer smiles at Dharam, only to find him scanning through the dispersing crowd behind them, in search of the missing face. Finding no sign of her anywhere, the dispirited Dharam gives up and climbs his horse silently. 😆

Dharam's attention is distracted by Veer coughing aloud "Can't you even search properly…" he coughs "she is watching from her window..." he coughs "upstairs…look…now"ya...you know where to watch...

Elated, Dharam immediately turns around and looks at the distant bedroom window to find Siya's beautiful profile, peeking curiously. As the pretty shadow hurriedly disappears from the window, the prince beams overjoyed and blushes to himself sweetly.

Never having seen Dharam so happy, both Bhalla and Veer laugh heartily "Dharam… she is adorable no doubt... but…she is childish…she can't sing... can't cook... instead of her taking care of you, it will be the other way around. We are warning you, well ahead!"😆beware

Dharam smiles in reply "That's exactly why I like her… she is so imperfectly perfect..."😆

He happily kicks his horse and the three lively boys ride away, camouflaged into the dust raised by the hoofs of their horses; towards the direction of their kingdom.

Enroute Aryanagar – Village of Sawai

Unheeding their lengthy travel so far; the young princes trot on their horses in the dusty village, earnestly discussing about their immediate plan of action for Aryanagar. No sooner than the exhausted Bhalla spots a water-well and a bread stall, he interrupts their serious conversation demanding for a break, and dismounts his horse to stretch casually. The brothers look at the relaxed actions of their friend and slap their foreheads wearily. Forced to get off their horses, they accompany Bhalla to join the small queue at the well.

Waiting for the queue to minimise, Dharam observes the familiar surroundings of the village "this place looks so deserted at night…" he whispers to Veer "I wonder if Dhruv's orphanage is close by…I would like to visit it soon…to see if it is for real…"

Veer reflects on their past meeting with Dhruv at Sawai and smiles approvingly "Yes…I genuinely appreciate his courage and tenacity. What a noble deed for the Shramik…"

He pauses as water droplets splash on his hair, over and over again. Annoyed, he bends over to notify the person ahead to be more cautious, but stops fazed when he sees her face.

With closed eyes the girl bewitchingly enjoys the refreshing droplets, as she slowly wipes them off her face. Frowning at her worryingly familiar face, Veer stares at how the avidly splattered streams of water, trickle down her sharp enthralling features. 😍After musing for a while, his eyes widen when he recognizes her to be the girl he met at the blacksmiths. Gradually opening her eyes to tie her hair into a knot, she notices the expressions on Veer's face, as he moves a few steps back. She asks him perplexed "Do I know you?"

Discomforted by her presence, Veer shakes his head and then turns away to avoid her glances.

Seeing Veer lost in a strange trance, Dharam bends forward and stretches his right hand.

She looks at his hand and corrects him "hold out both your hands… it's not a good sign to drink water off one hand." Dharam shrugs and follows her instructions obediently. tats lik a good guy😛

As he sips the water, she requests Dharam "I have to travel back to the capital. Baba and Tasha are not here yet. I am all alone and new to this place. Would you please help me?"

Trying to be gallant, Bhalla blurts out "We are going there too… you can join us…"😃

Joyous, the girl places the pot down and steps down from the platform gratefully "Thank you so much…my belongings are in my cart there…I will join you in no time!"

While Bhalla proceeds towards the food stall, Dharam and Veer look at each other; wishing Bhalla had not prematurely committed to this favour that would slow their journey even further. Walking back towards their horses, Veer faces the food stall to call out to Bhalla. By chance, he notices that the girl walking towards her cart nonchalantly steals a piece of bread from the vendor. Veer stops aghast, unable to believe his eyes.😆

this gal is so pretty.....

this is excellent as always........and dharam sia were fabulous....waiting for their next meeting....but till then i guess we'll get more of veer and.......ummm wats shera's name in this.......

very good......i'll be eagerly waiting for the next one😛

Edited by shimmer - 17 years ago
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Wow lashy👏

Absoulately amazing, beautiful, romantic and me running out of words to describe how much I love this part 👏 🤗🤗🤗

The picture of the girl is so beautiful and captivating 👏👏👏

What I loved :

  • dharam and veer like to make their own special entrance as they both have their own style 😆
  • The minute they see siya, I bet they are think oh no kuch gadbad hone wali hai and to save our sanity we should run. 🤣🤣Awww siya looks tired and determined to find out the truth. 😆 😆

  • bechara dharam is worried about siya and at the same time thinking what am I going to be accused of this time. 🤣🤣

  • veer thinking, dhoti pakdo and lets run from here and then runs to save the rope which unfortunately drops to the ground. 🤣🤣

  • siya gets there first and is furious with veer but all the gussa comes out on bechara dharam. Kya kismet hai uski 🤣🤣

  • dharam is trying to be patient and defend himself but siya is not in a mood to listen. Thank god there is no danda lying on the floor or dharam would have gotten that on his head.🤣🤣

  • Veer is getting annoyed by siya's statements and telling her to give him the rope ladder so they can go home. 😆

  • siya defending her kingdom like a lioness and me like the way you have describe bhabi and devar arguing. 👏

  • Loool I knew it, veer is the one who causes problem and siya to lose her temper further and dharam is the one who gets the hits.🤣🤣

    Wow, veer losing his temper is a must to see and dharam being such a gentleman asks him to stop and is worried about how veers temper is affecting siya. 😊😍😍

  • siya is in tears,😭 it makes me want to go there and hug her and help her sort this misunderstanding. 🤗🤗Lool all there look at each other thinking, once siya knows the truth aur kitne dande padege🤣🤣🤣

  • dharam is so sweet that he is explaining to her politely even though he is hurt. Siya is realising the truth and the big misunderstanding and I feel her pain and embarrassment.😭😭

  • veer needs to learn some patient, bat bat main he loses his temper. 😆 Dharam is moved by hurt in siya's pretty eyes and apologises to her and is explaining to her about their purpose for investigating niphaud 🤗😍

  • me feel the pain for siya,😭 and dharam being so patient says that he has never heard about her. Nanda realises the major understanding that has been caused 😭

  • Looool someone take veer aways before he makes siya more angry. Dharam is trying to calm siya and veer adds more fuel to the fire by asking who is queen vaidehi. 🤣🤣

  • me don't want to see siya so upset 😭and nanda who has realised the misunderstanding she has caused. Siya crying is very sad,😭 me like her to be happy and to see here throw things at veer 😆

  • they realise how siya is hurt now 😊and am glad that this time veer has not opened his mouth to say anything and are showing support to siya
  • siya apologises, and dharam comforting siya that she will meet her prince.😍😍
  • Veer's amazement at dharam's gallant behaviour 😍and I can believe he said that I know you are ashamed. 😆I like the way veer is trying to cheer siya up by sitting next to her and saying that now we understand each other does that mean we cannot fight with you anymore. 👏I swears he likes to cause trouble 🤣🤣

  • dharam joins in and calls siya her friend and me so happy that she is laughing now.👏 😊Lool veer can be a charmer when he wants to and then winks at dharam.😆
  • siya helping dharam and veer now. Bhalla angry at dharam and veer following siya like meek lambs 🤣🤣and siya's assurance has me in fits 🤣🤣and veer's is now worried that something is going to happen. dharam laughing at veers comments. siya so sweet, she is tired but wants to help them and tells them and dharam asking if they could come back later.😊
  • Determined siya says that you have to see this and then get back to aryanagar.😆 Such a caring person and lool dharam replying with a fake smile as if he never realised that and him having no strength to argue.🤣

  • siya tries to pull dharam by his hand and realises what she is about to do, so sweet when dharam smiles at her innocence ❤️ She tries to turn aways and see veer being discreet as usual in expressing himself smiling at their interaction 🤣🤣

  • Lool veer and bhalla really don't trust their bhabi by their groans and dharam just gives in saying its better for us health and safety to just listen to her🤣🤣🤣

  • I love the way you have described the springs of Niphaud.

    This is such a beautiful scene, where siya is talking about the springs, giggling and dharam and veer smiling at siya's such innocence.👏👏

  • Oh! You mean there was an earthquake here?" 😊

    Siya denies "No Rajkumar! The Goddess danced on the earth…"

    This made me laugh 😆and go awwwwww😆 at siya's such innocence and naviety when she says a goddess danced here and dharam is saying that there was an earthquake here😍😊

  • "This water helped our ancestors fight their enemies. I hope it helps you fight yours too… I didn't know if you would be able to come to Niphaud again…so I wanted to bring you here…"

    I love this scene, she is so sweet, nave and caring. Such a lovable person 😍😍👏

  • veer's dialogue to siya is so sweet😍 and saying that we will be visiting more than you think as long as she keeps daksha away for me. 🤣🤣

  • dharam is so protective of her, 😍even ignoring her shocked he gives her his hand and siya is thinking about whether or not to give him her hand and finally gives in. I can feel the electricity currents from here. 😍I like the fact that he is also helping nanda.😊

  • Loool daksha disappointed that she did not get the chance to see veer. 🤣🤣She is not even worried about the amount of trouble nanda got into while daksha's attention has gone somewhere.🤣

  • the king is so protective of siya and dharam and veer understanding this and smiling. I love it how dharma is trying to see one glimpse of siya before leaving 😊❤️
  • Loooooooool veer has seen daksha and is walking behind dharam in terror this I have to see, he is not afraid of fighting but the minute he sees daksha he runs like a deer being chased by a lion🤣
  • Loool, dharam pulling veer from behind him and forcing him to take the parcel and daksha blushing.🤣🤣

  • Loool she tells veer that he liked sweets, and got her mum to make some more for veer. Bechara veer is confused and then she tells him to write to her regularly, veer thinking let me just smile and get out of here first otherwise I wont be able to escape🤣🤣

  • Loool dharam's bechani 😍at not being able to see siya before leaving and love the veer's dialogue ""Can't you even search properly…" he coughs "she is watching from her window..." he coughs "upstairs…look…now" 😆🤣

  • dharam becomes so happy once he sees siya like he has won the world and blushes. 😍😍Veer and bhalla laughing at dharam's action🤣🤣 koi baat nahi, when veer's turn will come then both dharam and bhalla can have a laugh 😆
  • We are warning you, well ahead!" Loooooooooool warning you, like she is some nuclear weapon that needs to be handled carefully 🤣🤣🤣 i dont think veer realises just how lethal his girl is going to be 🤣🤣
  • Dharam smiles in reply "That's exactly why I like her… she is so imperfectly perfect..."

    Aww I love his comment 😍 , he already likes her but does not even realise it. I can wait to see them both together 😍

  • me glad that they thought about dhruv 😊

  • Wow, we see the entrance of the beautiful girl here👏 and liked it when she said Do I know you, - veer recognises her but she does not as he was in disguise then 🤣🤣 this must be a first for veer 😆

  • Big mouth bhalla 🤣but this time I don't mind as me want to see veer being shy for once. 🤣Dharam and veer look at eeach other thinking that should bhalla not be asking us as well if we want the girl to travel with us.🤣

  • Veer's outraged and shocked face at the end on what he sees the girl do🤣

i love all the scenes in this part 👏👏 and is so so beautiful and me going 😍 😍

looking forward to part 13 😊

Edited by divareena - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

@ kiran

ohh my kiran... thats your longest post i have seen in a while... 😆 thank you soooo much and it is absolutely lovely to see your comments.. 😳 you loved each and every dialogue.... 😳 yayyy..me thought you wouldnt as much... as this episode was an ode to Dharam... but glad you liked it..

yup me into writing long posts now😆😆pata kaise chalega i hv become one yr more mature😆😆

Realizing her torment, Dharam conceals his feelings for her; and assures her positively "Rajkumari…trust me, nothing has changed… you will meet your prince and you will still have many beautiful moments with him… I am certain of this....don't worry…"🤣🤣🤣

par mujhe samaj main nahin aaya tumhe ye following line man itni hassi kyun aayee 😆 it was just a guy talking abt beautiful moments 😆😆 i am sure he didnt understand one word of what sia was going on abt but still uski haan mein haan mila raha hai😆😆

she rapidly retracts her hand, while Dharam smiles gently at her innocent actions. Embarrassed, she turns away from Dharam's magnetic daze only to find Veer smiling at their silent interaction. 😳😳

Hee hee... 😛

🤣🤣 she like me loves more glorified versions of things🤣

awww kiran decide.. you can only be like shera or siya... not both 😛 it was only this thing abt her thats like me, even i like more glorified superstitious versions of history rather than scientific explanations😆😆😆

I loved dharam and sias interaction with the shawl that was so sweet.😳😳

yayyy thank you... 😳

good nanda i love u for forgetting to include dhksha in your trip🤣🤣

omg you seriouslllly dont like Daksha dont you 😆 absoulutely not😆

Dharam's attention is distracted by Veer coughing aloud "Can't even look properly…" he coughs "she is watching from her window..." he coughs "upstairs…look…now"🤣

hee hee personally the scene below was one of my favourites 😳 i'd love to see RT/VM doing something like this 😆 yeah it was fantastic🤣

Dharam smiles in reply "That's exactly why I like her… she is so imperfectly perfect..."😳😳… .thats the most sweetest pick up line I have heard

yayyyyyyyyy thank you 😳 (experience speaking kyaa 😉😆) if i someone had said something so sweet to me i wldnt be wasting my time on i-f😆

Ok so madam shera is back…………..but I liked that she has completely forgotten veer and does no recognize him, such a blow to my veers ego😆😆

ahem ahem i caught you out here... remember that both times when veer went to the blacksmiths, he was disguised... 😛 ahem anyway... all i can say is that dont take anything by face value... with this girl.. 😛, oh yeah acha ok thats why she didnt recognise him disguise ke wajah se 😉

and abt her being unpredictable after all ur modeling her on kiran she has to be unpredictable😆😆😆

chorni kahin ki now dharam shd tell him who needs to look out for whom🤣🤣🤣

i know... 😆..........😆😆😆

😭 i know ...koi aaj kal haamaare baat hi nahin suntaa 😆........i swear sab mods hamare sone ke baad aate hain aur phir gayab ho jate hain😆😆😆

Edited by crazy_kiran - 17 years ago
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Thtz realli funny! I jst started reading it !!😊 U r a talented Person!😳

@ Kirannn..wo Imagainationz 4 next week thread pe aana aur Thumhaari imaginationz zara batha dena plzzz! 😉 😉 😳 😳

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