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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
btw I just realized there are so many grammatical mistakes in my reply,hope you get what I was trying to say 😆 😆 btw your shera(or shd I say myself?) is adorning my pc screen now! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

@ reena

thank you soooo much for liking this part so much 😳

the following comments of yours made me laugh out loud 😆

bechara dharam is worried about siya and at the same time thinking what am I going to be accused of this time. 🤣🤣

siya gets there first and is furious with veer but all the gussa comes out on bechara dharam. Kya kismet hai uski 🤣🤣

Looool someone take veer aways before he makes siya more angry. Dharam is trying to calm siya and veer adds more fuel to the fire by asking who is queen vaidehi. 🤣🤣 me like her to be happy and to see here throw things at veer 😆

Lool veer can be a charmer when he wants to and then winks at dharam.😆

awwww i know yes you do feel sorry for Siya.. but she has composed herself well... 😊 and yes... even siya and veer have good chemistry (yes even in the serial) me thinks 😃 i am so glad you liked the entire scene at the springs.. i wanted to think of something new.. not the temple, gardens, waterfalls everything has been done.. so temple ruin-with springs.. 😳 and yes she prefers believing what she has heard.. Goddess dance.. not earthquake..waise bhi she has skipped princess school 😆 remember?

Lool veer and bhalla really don't trust their bhabi by their groans and dharam just gives in saying its better for us health and safety to just listen to her🤣🤣

Loool daksha disappointed that she did not get the chance to see veer. 🤣🤣She is not even worried about the amount of trouble nanda got into while daksha's attention has gone somewhere.🤣

love the veer's dialogue ""Can't you even search properly…" he coughs "she is watching from her window..." he coughs "upstairs…look…now" 😆🤣

mee too loved this part and wish i could see something like this in the serial.. 😳

Loooooooooool warning you, like she is some nuclear weapon that needs to be handled carefully 🤣🤣🤣 i dont think veer realises just how lethal his girl is going to be 🤣🤣

omg reena that was so funny 😆

@ kiran

yup me into writing long posts now😆😆pata kaise chalega i hv become one yr more mature😆😆

haila.. 😆

Dharam smiles in reply "That's exactly why I like her… she is so imperfectly perfect..."😳😳… .thats the most sweetest pick up line I have heard if i someone had said something so sweet to me i wldnt be wasting my time on i-f😆

ham sab time waste hain kyaa 😭

and abt shera being unpredictable after all ur modeling her on kiran she has to be unpredictable

haan sahi kahaa tumne 😆😆😆

@ moreremix

awww thank you so much for your comments.. 😳 am so glad you enjoyed all of it.. 😳

@ abhy

i searched high and low for a painting of Siya. this was the best me could do 😭 i think she looks innocent but yes she looks slightly matured... pataa nahin let me know if you can find anyone else better.. phew thank God you liked this part.. yes you are very difficult to please 16 year old 😆

and as for your comments i dont know where i can even start or finish... very touched... and worst part is knowing that you might not have the same words to say for any of the remaining parts.. 😔 me already preparing myself for heart-brokenness....thats why i told you about this one.. in advance..

the comments touched me the most were the following - 😳

This is tooo suprebly fantastic!! Friends - the very word brings in front of my eyes so many tenderly tended scenes you'll be weaving between these persons in future!! OMG!! How much I love all these! sigh just for the sake of his friendship I wish I were Sia.😳

awww i seriously wish i could click a picture of you and make you siya.. would that make you happy?

magnetic gaze! aww I can imagine him looking into my eyes like that oooooeerrrr....why are my blood vessels pumping so much of red fluid to my cheeks!! whooaaa!!! how so gorgeous was this interation!! phew I'm glad she's all whole even after him touching her I'm already perspiring here

awww am i glad... all i can do is giggle 😆 happily

So all those encounters have ended I can't believe that I won't get this dose of romance b/w my prince and Sia anymore

😭 you might... but in a different form.. but yes not like this...

Is this me typing all these!! Good Lord!! see what your Sam has done to me!! I'm actually craving for romance!!😲

*blush* *blush*

aww Veer is so wrong here.All girlish things like cooking,singing doesn't make a good person,isn't it enough to have such a good mind and heart

veer was only joking.. he doesnt care if a girl cant sing or cook..he was only pulling dharmu's leg 😆 as he has never seen him so head over heels over anything... before..

it is Shera there!! 😲 inAryanagar!! but how and why?😕 whoooo....what a suspense hmm she's speaking abt Tasha as if he is her friend!! OMG!! what are you giong to bring up di?

*gulp* bahut zyaada kuch mat imagine karo.. theek theek hai... anyway..

But it's surprising that she was feeding them water at the well!! why wld she do that!! anyway she's not being so haughty...this was brilliant!!

oh no she was giving them water bcos it was the norm... girls did the water pulling and fetching na.. generally not guys... so its normal when a guy is standing there.. to offer water.. hence in Gadhwar when the lady went away snubbing Veer it was rude.. 😊 besides, if she didnt give them water 😉 how would she get to speak to them... 😆

awww shera is on your screen now?😆 this shera seems to have become very popular suddenly.. 😆and yes i have another picture of hers too..

lemme know if you can find an equally good siya.. 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Finally I got timee to read thisss..😛
Once againnn amazinggg shraddha diii! 😃👏👏
The MU clearedd..woww..ur amazingg at thiss..100 times better than sagarss..😛
Lovvveddd the Dharam - Sia scenesss😳 Dharamm was awesomeeee...loveee the dialoguess..wowwww 😛 Oh and i loved the dialogue "SHe is imperfectly perfect" 😳
Veer was awwww...cho chweeeett! 😳 Loved his dialoguess...superb lashy di superb! 👏 👏 ufff...me just lovedd it 😃
And sheraaa...wowww..lovedd her come back 😛
And the picc of Sheraa is amazingggg....too good !! she lookss wowww😃

So can't wait 4 ur next updateee...
Way to go lashy di! 👏 👏 Simply splendidd..rockkk onnn ! 😃
Edited by crazy_lil_gurl - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: crazy_kiran

Daksha's saddened face stands out from the pleasant throng as she whines to Nanda "You are very mean… you could have at least told me you were going to the springs with Rajkumar Veer…I was not even informed…"🤣🤣🤣good nanda i love u for forgetting to include dhksha in your trip🤣🤣

Still under the impression, that her daughter was mistreated by them, the king gives them a curt bid; puzzling them. 🤣🤣

Veer walking behind him in terror. Dharam looks up and detects Daksha and Nanda rapidly approaching them with a parcel in their hand. Not minding the curious onlookers; the plump girl coyly hands the parcel to Dharam, who smiles at her softly. He then pulls the nervous Veer from behind him and forces him to receive it from her. 🤣

Blushing at the embarrassed Veer, Daksha confesses "I realized that you liked sweets… you repeatedly asked for it that night… so I asked my mother to prepare one for you" Veer seems confused, as she sadly dazes into his eyes "please do write to me regularly..." 🤣🤣🤣

Smiling affirmatively, Veer swiftly drags the reluctant Dharam away from the palace. 🤣

Dharam's attention is distracted by Veer coughing aloud "Can't even look properly…" he coughs "she is watching from her window..." he coughs "upstairs…look…now"🤣

Never having seen Dharam so happy, both Bhalla and Veer laugh heartily "Dharam… she is adorable no doubt... but…she is childish…she can't sing... can't cook... instead of her taking care of you, it will be the other way around. We are warning you, well ahead!"🤣

Dharam smiles in reply "That's exactly why I like her… she is so imperfectly perfect..."😳😳… .thats the most sweetest pick up line I have heard

Ok so madam shera is back…………..but I liked that she has completely forgotten veer and does no recognize him, such a blow to my veers ego😆😆

Walking back towards their horses, Veer faces the food stall to call out to Bhalla. By chance, he notices that the girl walking towards her cart nonchalantly steals a piece of bread from the vendor. Veer stops aghast, unable to believe his eyes.🤣🤣🤣chorni kahin ki now dharam shd tell him who needs to look out for whom🤣🤣🤣

kiran, i loved your comments below 🤗:

good nanda i love u for forgetting to include dhksha in your trip🤣🤣 - i know, can you imagine what veer's halat would have been if she was there. 🤣🤣

chorni kahin ki now dharam shd tell him who needs to look out for whom🤣🤣🤣 - so true, i just want to see veer's shocked expression, when the girl steals a piece of bread. Now that the girl is going to travel with them, i think bhalla may get less food to eat if she starts stealing that as well🤣 🤣🤣

Edited by divareena - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: lashy

@ reena

thank you soooo much for liking this part so much 😳

the following comments of yours made me laugh out loud 😆

bechara dharam is worried about siya and at the same time thinking what am I going to be accused of this time. 🤣🤣

siya gets there first and is furious with veer but all the gussa comes out on bechara dharam. Kya kismet hai uski 🤣🤣

Looool someone take veer aways before he makes siya more angry. Dharam is trying to calm siya and veer adds more fuel to the fire by asking who is queen vaidehi. 🤣🤣 me like her to be happy and to see here throw things at veer 😆

Lool veer can be a charmer when he wants to and then winks at dharam.😆

awwww i know yes you do feel sorry for Siya.. but she has composed herself well... 😊 and yes... even siya and veer have good chemistry (yes even in the serial) me thinks 😃 i am so glad you liked the entire scene at the springs.. i wanted to think of something new.. not the temple, gardens, waterfalls everything has been done.. so temple ruin-with springs.. 😳 and yes she prefers believing what she has heard.. Goddess dance.. not earthquake..waise bhi she has skipped princess school 😆 remember?

Lool veer and bhalla really don't trust their bhabi by their groans and dharam just gives in saying its better for us health and safety to just listen to her🤣🤣

Loool daksha disappointed that she did not get the chance to see veer. 🤣🤣She is not even worried about the amount of trouble nanda got into while daksha's attention has gone somewhere.🤣

love the veer's dialogue ""Can't you even search properly…" he coughs "she is watching from her window..." he coughs "upstairs…look…now" 😆🤣

mee too loved this part and wish i could see something like this in the serial.. 😳

Loooooooooool warning you, like she is some nuclear weapon that needs to be handled carefully 🤣🤣🤣 i dont think veer realises just how lethal his girl is going to be 🤣🤣

omg reena that was so funny 😆

@ kiran

yup me into writing long posts now😆😆pata kaise chalega i hv become one yr more mature😆😆

haila.. 😆

Dharam smiles in reply "That's exactly why I like her… she is so imperfectly perfect..."😳😳… .thats the most sweetest pick up line I have heard if i someone had said something so sweet to me i wldnt be wasting my time on i-f😆

ham sab time waste hain kyaa 😭

and abt shera being unpredictable after all ur modeling her on kiran she has to be unpredictable

haan sahi kahaa tumne 😆😆😆

@ moreremix

awww thank you so much for your comments.. 😳 am so glad you enjoyed all of it.. 😳

@ abhy

i searched high and low for a painting of Siya. this was the best me could do 😭 i think she looks innocent but yes she looks slightly matured... pataa nahin let me know if you can find anyone else better.. phew thank God you liked this part.. yes you are very difficult to please 16 year old 😆

and as for your comments i dont know where i can even start or finish... very touched... and worst part is knowing that you might not have the same words to say for any of the remaining parts.. 😔 me already preparing myself for heart-brokenness....thats why i told you about this one.. in advance..

the comments touched me the most were the following - 😳

This is tooo suprebly fantastic!! Friends - the very word brings in front of my eyes so many tenderly tended scenes you'll be weaving between these persons in future!! OMG!! How much I love all these! sigh just for the sake of his friendship I wish I were Sia.😳

awww i seriously wish i could click a picture of you and make you siya.. would that make you happy?

magnetic gaze! aww I can imagine him looking into my eyes like that oooooeerrrr....why are my blood vessels pumping so much of red fluid to my cheeks!! whooaaa!!! how so gorgeous was this interation!! phew I'm glad she's all whole even after him touching her I'm already perspiring here

awww am i glad... all i can do is giggle 😆 happily

So all those encounters have ended I can't believe that I won't get this dose of romance b/w my prince and Sia anymore

😭 you might... but in a different form.. but yes not like this...

Is this me typing all these!! Good Lord!! see what your Sam has done to me!! I'm actually craving for romance!!😲

*blush* *blush*

aww Veer is so wrong here.All girlish things like cooking,singing doesn't make a good person,isn't it enough to have such a good mind and heart

veer was only joking.. he doesnt care if a girl cant sing or cook..he was only pulling dharmu's leg 😆 as he has never seen him so head over heels over anything... before..

it is Shera there!! 😲 inAryanagar!! but how and why?😕 whoooo....what a suspense hmm she's speaking abt Tasha as if he is her friend!! OMG!! what are you giong to bring up di?

*gulp* bahut zyaada kuch mat imagine karo.. theek theek hai... anyway..

But it's surprising that she was feeding them water at the well!! why wld she do that!! anyway she's not being so haughty...this was brilliant!!

oh no she was giving them water bcos it was the norm... girls did the water pulling and fetching na.. generally not guys... so its normal when a guy is standing there.. to offer water.. hence in Gadhwar when the lady went away snubbing Veer it was rude.. 😊 besides, if she didnt give them water 😉 how would she get to speak to them... 😆

awww shera is on your screen now?😆 this shera seems to have become very popular suddenly.. 😆and yes i have another picture of hers too..

lemme know if you can find an equally good siya.. 😊

lashy, thank you for your comments. 🤗🤗

You are right about the good chemistry between siya and veer. The waterfall scenes was very unique and lovely 👏👏

you are right about siya skipping too many princesses school. i think she was busy trying to sing and paint instead. 😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ kiran

yup me into writing long posts now😆😆pata kaise chalega i hv become one yr more mature😆😆

haila.. 😆.............😆😆

Dharam smiles in reply "That's exactly why I like her… she is so imperfectly perfect..."😳😳… .thats the most sweetest pick up line I have heard if i someone had said something so sweet to me i wldnt be wasting my time on i-f😆

ham sab time waste hain kyaa 😭 nope ur not all my i-f frnds are really sweethearts🤗but me spending all my free time on i-f is bit not normal😆😆

and abt shera being unpredictable after all ur modeling her on kiran she has to be unpredictable

haan sahi kahaa tumne 😆😆😆 mein hamesha sahi kehti hoon😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: lashy

@ abhy

i searched high and low for a painting of Siya. this was the best me could do 😭 i think she looks innocent but yes she looks slightly matured... pataa nahin let me know if you can find anyone else better.. phew thank God you liked this part.. yes you are very difficult to please 16 year old 😆

lol the last line made me go 🤪 btw I'm 17 I didn't like this part!! who told you that?? I LOVED and ADORED it!!!!

and as for your comments i dont know where i can even start or finish... very touched... and worst part is knowing that you might not have the same words to say for any of the remaining parts.. 😔 me already preparing myself for heart-brokenness....thats why i told you about this one.. in advance..

nah I'll try to not let that happen even in your dreams...😳

the comments touched me the most were the following - 😳

This is tooo suprebly fantastic!! Friends - the very word brings in front of my eyes so many tenderly tended scenes you'll be weaving between these persons in future!! OMG!! How much I love all these! sigh just for the sake of his friendship I wish I were Sia.😳

awww i seriously wish i could click a picture of you and make you siya.. would that make you happy?

if you do that you'll never find the most happiest person in the world 😛

magnetic gaze! aww I can imagine him looking into my eyes like that oooooeerrrr....why are my blood vessels pumping so much of red fluid to my cheeks!! whooaaa!!! how so gorgeous was this interaction!! phew I'm glad she's all whole even after him touching her I'm already perspiring here

awww am i glad... all i can do is giggle 😆 happily

So all those encounters have ended I can't believe that I won't get this dose of romance b/w my prince and Sia anymore

😭 you might... but in a different form.. but yes not like this...

Is this me typing all these!! Good Lord!! see what your Sam has done to me!! I'm actually craving for romance!!😲

*blush* *blush*

aww Veer is so wrong here.All girlish things like cooking,singing doesn't make a good person,isn't it enough to have such a good mind and heart

veer was only joking.. he doesnt care if a girl cant sing or cook..he was only pulling dharmu's leg 😆 as he has never seen him so head over heels over anything... before..

hmm kidding was he? I dun want anyone to find fault with her coz lolz as Dharam said "I'm imperfectly perfect".Most of Sia's arrogance and ignorance relates to me as well 😳

it is Shera there!! 😲 inAryanagar!! but how and why?😕 whoooo....what a suspense hmm she's speaking abt Tasha as if he is her friend!! OMG!! what are you giong to bring up di?

*gulp* bahut zyaada kuch mat imagine karo.. theek theek hai... anyway..

whhhoooooo.....so we are going to get a huge treat!!

But it's surprising that she was feeding them water at the well!! why wld she do that!! anyway she's not being so haughty...this was brilliant!!

oh no she was giving them water bcos it was the norm... girls did the water pulling and fetching na.. generally not guys... so its normal when a guy is standing there.. to offer water.. hence in Gadhwar when the lady went away snubbing Veer it was rude.. 😊 besides, if she didnt give them water 😉 how would she get to speak to them... 😆

oh so she knows abt ladies gestures unlike the Sagar's version

awww shera is on your screen now?😆 this shera seems to have become very popular suddenly.. 😆and yes i have another picture of hers too..

you know what? my dad saw the wallpaper today and was so surprised!He asked me when I painted myself 😆😆

lemme know if you can find an equally good siya.. 😊

ye sure me've got quite a few pics...let me refine them again and send to you 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very well written Shrads 👏
I enjoyed reading it 😳 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

Hey Shraddha,😃

Haaa..... Finally I managed to read your FF till part 12... Oh... and feel sad for being late in reading such a brilliant piece work.

Hats off to you.....👏 👏For the way you described each and every scene 👏 and the way you potrayed Characters..... Oh wow.....

Sia😆 childish and silly girl (naa khana pakana aata hai naa gana gana) but still she is very adorable and innocent. I m sure she will come out of all bevakoofiya... when she will start going to school. 😊Would love to see more of DV and Sia's scenes and Dharams falling for her each time and Veer and Ballah getting irritate because of her 😆. That misunderstanding clearance scene was so cute. Sia sobing and DV silently waiting for her to complete it. Aaa ha... and Dharam's dialogue for her at last ..... So imperfectly perfect.😳

Daksha: Poor girl, Veer won't fall for her. I feel sad for her 😭 I liked that scene when she served dinner to DV and ballah and her flirt nature.😉

Ballah: Ha ha...... simple and carefree. Hmmm ab DV ke saath hai toh carefree hi hoga😆. But I found him loyal towards his friends😛 and a comedian😆. Lagta hai uski aur Veer ki jyada jamti hai. I liked that scene when he was peacefully sleeping in the cart and DV were cautiously driving on the dangerous road.

Dhruv and Sakshi and Orphange: 👏First of all I loved this orphange idea. Ur sakshi is brave and girlish too. Insect se dar gayi.😛

Thank god no Shramiks story, as its there in soap🤢.

And one more.....Confrontation between DV, Ballah and Sia and her friends. Arey pata hai kya, yeh part mein silent bus mein baithe pad rahi thi aur itne jor se has padi 😆 ke aaju baju wale uthke dekhne lage 😆. Ha ha poor Dharam, everyone was blaming him and naughty veer aag mein ghee daal raha tha😆.

And Lashy yeh Shera ki dhasu tasveer kaha se mili.😉

My requests: If possible show Agni of DV's level (intellectually) and not a foolish joker as shown in the soap.🤢

I loved the way you proceeded the story with same pace, without letting readers get bore. Each sentence is artistically written man.👏 Waiting for next parts😃.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh lashy i lOved each and every scene of your story the way u discribe it na that's unique....THANK GOD misunderstanding is cleared now.....the scenes between sia and dharam are great...in your story also dharam is very bhola bhala veer haS to tell him each and every thing like.....look at the window veer konw every thing but dharam he needs directions from him😆... and that imperfectly perfect dialogue was perfect for dharam's feeling for sia 😆 oh i loved it U R brilliant....u should be the script writer if DV😳........................
Edited by sonur15 - 17 years ago

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