Samyukta Part 5 ~To find out the truth~ - Page 3

Very very well written lashy di!👏👏👏 Enjoyed reading it alot! Your a very talented writer😳Keep it upp!!😛

Good lord!!😲I've never seen anyone picturize their characters so well.You are sooo amazing 🤗 I really loved Dhruv and his concern towards Shramiks and above all you've done a fantastic job of getting him changed after he fell in love.Infact that very scene explains so much;it has got all the emotions in right balance.Further that was the best scene among others I loved to read and reread 😳 Your narration is simply awesome that I am never satisfied on first reading.Every scene you add has a purpose and brilliant response by the actors.aww I can imagine how much of work you put behind this to make us sooo happy!!!

Love you love you love you very much didi 🤗 a zillion thanks to you 🤗

btw I forgot to add your Sia has so many thhings in common with mine 😆😳

btw Dharam is looking shoo shweett 😳 is that the scene where they get their hands tied(in serial)?

Wow!!I read it 😳 and I must say.......it is too interesting,very intricately written.I really admire ur style of writng,and as of always,I love Sia of ur story, 😳 thanks for this treat 😳

wow great Lashy you are really good 👏 👏 👏

wow.. lashy.. its wonderful... n i really loved the protrayal of sia.. an innocent girl.. who tries to do everything right.. but ends up doing it wrong.. really sweet 👏

Abhy -

Good lord!!I've never seen anyone picturize their characters so well. I really loved Dhruv and his concern towards Shramiks and above all you've done a fantastic job of getting him changed after he fell in love.Infact that very scene explains so much;it has got all the emotions in right balance.Further that was the best scene among others I loved to read and reread Your narration is simply awesome that I am never satisfied on first reading.Every scene you add has a purpose and brilliant response by the actors.aww I can imagine how much of work you put behind this to make us sooo happy!!!

Awwww those are some very heavy words and your complementsare just brilliant as usual… I have started now understanding who enjoys which bit and part of the story too..…however abhy a note to add would be that this story was primarily started to pen a romantic piece on the short interactions and how the couples meet and their relationships of the 4 main protagonists evolve… hence it would tend to lean more towards the romance than the philosophical angle….

Love you love you love you very much didi a zillion thanks to you

btw I forgot to add your Sia has so many thhings in common with mine

Btw Dharam is looking shoo shweett is that the scene where they get their hands tied(in serial)?

Sia has so many things in common with your Siya or with you… and yes that is the picture when they were tied in the tent hee hee

Thank you Nishu (glad you liked this Siya hee hee)….Sarah,….arshoo…leelu all your encouraging words are very very rewarding..

Wow Lashy....... amazing as usual.....😃👏

That orphanage concept is nice and Dhruv is better than Kranti😉. Sia is cute as usual😳 (which dish she is preparing🤔😆.....) and ur DV rocked👏 in this part too.

my gosh,
when will i catch up Lash wait Kai needs a lot to time to read thru reams of pages of creativity .....awww finally got my msgr fixed busy chatting & figuring this new thing out 😆

sorry for replying in such bits and pieces girls... sheesh.. office main baitke very difficult to type at one go.. as open space..

Originally posted by: wagma

wow great Lashy you are really good 👏 👏 👏

awww thank you hun... 😳

Originally posted by: lakshmim_84

wow.. lashy.. its wonderful... n i really loved the protrayal of sia.. an innocent girl.. who tries to do everything right.. but ends up doing it wrong.. really sweet 👏

yes it kinda just shaped like that.. 😆 i like your description

Originally posted by: ppiyu

Wow Lashy....... amazing as usual.....😃👏

That orphanage concept is nice and Dhruv is better than Kranti😉. Sia is cute as usual😳 (which dish she is preparing🤔😆.....) and ur DV rocked👏 in this part too.

yes... veer ka jiju jo hai better be good.. 😆 and dish... looool kichdi... 😆

@ kai loooooooool its up only every saturday.. weekly hai.. atleast till i think i have some stuff left to write 😆 let me know if i can help you in any way 😆