Samyukta Part 5 ~To find out the truth~ - Page 2

Originally posted by: shimmer

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i love it......it's awesome.....oh my gosh....the aryavardhan dhruv falls for a shramaik....it would easen the gap b/n the aryas and shramaiks for dharam and veer......and the aarti....oh my gosh...imagine veer singing and dharam being dragged......i'm so happy that both o' them know how bad agni is....and i guess i know wat is gonna happen to siya......i won't say anythin now though...... 😳 and it was long enough to make my weekend a good one.......it satisfies my mind....now all i have to do is to wait for the next one.... 😳
thank youuuuuuu....soooooooooo much
loooovvvvveeee
🤗 khushi

awwwwww khushi thank you so much... i am happy that you were happy over the weekend... 😳 and it was upto your expectations.. 😳

Originally posted by: kunataanya

i love the direction in which the story is heading 😊
and i absolutely love ur characters especially dharam, sia n sia's father. they r so much more intelligent n believable here than in the show..
the dhruv n sakshi love story makes it even more exiting
i hope the sagars read this n incorporate some of your ideas in the show
please update soon. u have left it at an interestin point 😊

awwwww thankx kunaatanya (sorry i dont know your first name) i know i try and compensate where i feel the sagars are lacking... im glad you like it.. 😳

Originally posted by: sephora1

wow!!! 👏 👏 could we not mail this to the sagars...?

😆.... awww thankooo yaar... 😳

Originally posted by: leelu0001

ur script is more engrossing than the actual serial, beautifully written, seems as if I am reading some novel, the chara are so real 😊

awwww thankyou.....

Originally posted by: kirantarani2007

awesome lovely, I liked the aarti part the best, both pretending to know the aarti and just singing along to please there mom 😆 😆

ooo the aarti part.. hee hee... glad you liked it hun.. 😛

hey di....Ihaven't read it yet 😭 😭
no time .. 😭 😭 😭
but i promise i'll read it after ma exams 😳
n let u know abt it...
but my instinct say's that it must be great 👏
so well done in advance 😃

BTW u have writtened 28 pgs... 😛 great 👏
do continue..n pm me with rest parts link..coz i won't be able to come online from 2moro onwards... 😕

Lashy,samyukta is simply AMAZING.. I look fwd to fridays all the more now cos I know that that ur script is going to be a part of the weekend.. correction The best part of the weekend.. 😛

I love ur style of writing soo much because of ur rich description of the milieu, facial expressions,outfits everything.. I can visualise the story as u imagine it.. Thats a writers success !! 👏

I love the way u potray Sia as a spoilt princess.. 😃 n find the character of Veer adorable n Dharams admirable 😊

Cant wait for Part VI ! 😛
PS: one request pls pls pls dont rush ahead with the story like sagars...

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

hey di....Ihaven't read it yet 😭 😭
no time .. 😭 😭 😭
but i promise i'll read it after ma exams 😳
n let u know abt it...
but my instinct say's that it must be great 👏
so well done in advance 😃

BTW u have writtened 28 pgs... 😛 great 👏
do continue..n pm me with rest parts link..coz i won't be able to come online from 2moro onwards... 😕

no problem at all rashoo... do well in your exams and no more chatting in the chattie threads (and the non chattie threads😆)

and do drop in atleast once a week i will keep all the links safely for you.. waise woh tho yaheen hoga....

bah bahye.. 😛

awesome Lashy di!!!! 👏 👏
haila......it was so nice tis time!!..Arti wzz funnee 😆

Sia maikin dish is more funnier... 😆 😆 woooow!!!!!...u rokk with ur updates Laashooooooooo 😃

lovv thm..... 😳

oh my god lashy, 👏I missed the most important scene I would like to see 😍 because when I copied the script on to the missed, that part got missed. 😭 Me will need to get new glasses 😊

The bits i really loved are :

• when nivriti turns round and makes dharam chant the prayers and how veer sneakely closes his eyes and chants innocently. 😆😆😆
• When dharam asks agni about the scar and veer acts as if he does not know anything. 😆
• the way dharam asks how he wants to visit Niphaud to see the beautiful gardens or a beautiful princess called sia 😆
• the funniest when aryavardhan says to both "busy with what" like kuch kaam to kiya nahi and they are saying that the have been busy 😆
• how they both are thinking about the new adventures they will face together
• Sia overhearing the queens conversation that rajkumar dharam is asking for her hand and will be visiting Niphaud gardens me want to see this now
• Sia running to the kitchen to tell her friend the news

Lashy me in a dreamworld now as to how they will meet.

Originally posted by: divareena

oh my god lashy, 👏I missed the most important scene I would like to see 😍 because when I copied the script on to the missed, that part got missed. 😭 Me will need to get new glasses 😊

The bits i really loved are :

when nivriti turns round and makes dharam chant the prayers and how veer sneakely closes his eyes and chants innocently. 😆😆😆 When dharam asks agni about the scar and veer acts as if he does not know anything. 😆 the way dharam asks how he wants to visit Niphaud to see the beautiful gardens or a beautiful princess called sia 😆 the funniest when aryavardhan says to both "busy with what" like kuch kaam to kiya nahi and they are saying that the have been busy 😆 how they both are thinking about the new adventures they will face together Sia overhearing the queens conversation that rajkumar dharam is asking for her hand and will be visiting Niphaud gardens me want to see this now
• Sia running to the kitchen to tell her friend the news

Lashy me in a dreamworld now as to how they will meet.

awww reenie thank you so much for the wonderful comments 🤗your analysis helps understand the pluses and can-be-improvised points.. 😳

but i think you've got two points wrong..

reens i think you've got it wrong... it was her friend nanda who misheard the conversation... and was running to tell princess Siya in the kitchen ....😛

and veer was not teasing dharam about going to niphaud gardens he was just giving an idea.. they dont even know siya exists yet.. 😕

Originally posted by: bhuvana3

Lashy,samyukta is simply AMAZING.. I look fwd to fridays all the more now cos I know that that ur script is going to be a part of the weekend.. correction The best part of the weekend.. 😛

I love ur style of writing soo much because of ur rich description of the milieu, facial expressions,outfits everything.. I can visualise the story as u imagine it.. Thats a writers success !! 👏

I love the way u potray Sia as a spoilt princess.. 😃 n find the character of Veer adorable n Dharams admirable 😊

Cant wait for Part VI ! 😛
PS: one request pls pls pls dont rush ahead with the story like sagars...

ok lashy emotional -> 😭

and lovey dovey -> 🤗

and blushy -> 😳 thanks bhuvi for those words.... i will always treasure them

ok i wouldnt rush through the story... promise 😛 see how long its taken me to build a platform for even a dharam and siya meeting and i planned the story starting off with their meeting... 😆

Lashy....simply marvellous n touching!!! 🤗
Though I couldn't very much read it word yo word as my eyes are hurting a but after long hours of study... 😭
But I did read the whole thing n loved it as always...its brilliantly written...thsoe small incidents n nice dilaogues...gr8 job!!!
Keep it up!! 👏