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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
thanks Rekhz

ok moving along heres the next bit:

Dharam: Veer tum yahan akele kya kar rahe ho

Veer opens his eyes...drops his hands which were hugging only air

Veer: kuch nahin

Dharam: nahin tum kuch kar rahe teh

Veer: ye...ye nayi yog vidya hai....woh mele mein kisi neh bataya tha

Dharam: abb chale

They move on...while Dharam is smiling away Veer is heartbroken...he had been dreaming about Shera...he found it hard to beleive they wudnt meet agen


on the other hand Shera atopped somewhere near the place where DV were

Shera: Agar humme Veer ke samne jaana hai toh humme badal na hoga....humme Shera se sherani puri tarah se baan na hoga... ye he toh hai humara sach ke hum aaj bhi Shera nahin balke sherani hai aur hum ye sab uske liye kar rahe hai jisne hum aaj zindagi ka matlab sikhaya hai


Dharam to veer
Dharam: uski yaad ah rahi hai

Veer: bahat...mera matlab hai kiski

Dharam: veer tumme woh achi lagti hai

Veer: bilkul nahin...woh itni...

Dharam: veer humne ye mesus kiya hai ke tum usse chahte ho....

Veer: nahin dharam aise koi baat nahin

Dharam: kao humare saar ke kasam...kao

he takes veers hand n put it on his head

Veer: Nahin!!

Dharam: bohat chahte ho usse...Veer baat kya hai humme baatao

Veer: dharam tum meri zindagi aur apni zindagi mein se kisi chunte

Dharam: ye kya baat hui, hum tumhari zindagi chunte

Veer: meine bhi ayhi kiya

Dharam: veer humme saaf saaf batao ke kya hua?

Veer: nahin dharam ye sab choodo...chalo

Dharam: veer tumhe humari kasam...humme aaj sab kuch sun na hai jo tumhari aur Sherani ke bich hua

Veer: teek hai....woh ek dakoo hai...tummhe maar ne ayi thi...maar na payi

(he recalls everything)

Dharam: veer ye tumne kya kiya

Veer: kya

Dharam: tumne usse bol ne ka ek moka diya hota toh

Veer: nahin


there was a pause


Dharam: tum chahe kuch bhi kaho mujhe ye lagta hai ke tum log ek baar phir miloge

Veer: ye faisla takdeer par choodh de toh behtar hoga


on the otherhand Shera goes to meet Sia

Shera: shhh kuch maat boliye....sirf meri ek baar sunlijiye

She tells Sia everything that happened between her n Veer and her plans for the future

Shera: kya app meri madat karengi?

Sia: jahan tak hum samajte hai tumhe usse pyar hogaya hai aur humme pyar karne wale log aache lagte hai...hum tumari madat zaroor karenge


meanwhile Tasha n his men have finally tracked Shera down

Tasha: usse utah lena...kuch bhi karke

men: ji sarkar


the men go in the tent n grabb Shera n tie her hands back before she camn do anything as she is outnumbered

Sia trys to scream but the men close her mouth n take her as well

Both sia n Shera are taken away while Tasha smiles on


enjoy


shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
Loved it Shona.. very interesting..both Sia n Shera kidnapped 😛 .. no prize for guessing who will rescue them.. cant wait for tomorrow 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
thanks bhuvana di-
yh anybody can guess who will rescue them
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
ok sorry for the delay
actually i had it all typed up but then lost it all after my computer froze

nways moving on heres what happen next

btw i just wanted to say i know my hindi is weak but like i live in the UK n i speak gujurati wen i aint tlking in english n hindi is just a language i seemed to have learnt but dont so its bad esp wen im writing it with the english alphabet so plz excuse that


ok the story:

a dasi who saw Sia n Shera being abducted runs to DV

Dasi: rajkumar DharamVeer jaldi chaliye...rajkumari sia aur shera ko koi utah kar leh gaya hai

Dharam: kis taraf gaye woh

Dasi: paschim ki aur...andheri gufa ki taraf

Veer: chalo

DV leave immediately run to the location given by Dasi

Suddenly veer stops...he sees a black cloth on the floor and picks it up....it smells of a fragrance he can never forget....Shera-even though shes a dakoo she is hygenic 😆

Dharam: kya hua

Veer: agar ye uski chaal hai toh mei n usse zinda nahin choodunga...chalo


the boys move on

Tasha n men take the ladies into the Andheri gufa

Tasha: bohat bhag liya...abb aur nahin...par tumhe maar ne se pehle hum kuch maaza leh le

Shera: kuteh...humme ek bar choodh kar samne se vaar karke dikhao

Tasha: chup...ye kahan ki rajkumari hai?(pointing at sia)

Man: paata nahin par ye bohat amir hai

Tasha: toh toh iski jaan bohat kimti hogi

he moves near Sia

Shera: tasha hum tumhe baata rahe hai rajkumari ko choodh do...tumhari dushmani mujhese hai...choodh do isse

Tasha: kya tumhara baap aise Khazane ko choodh deta

Shera shuts up...thinking abt his words n realizing how much wrong she has done til date

Tasha: mujhe tumhara bakwas nahin sunn na...chalo isse oopar bandh do

the men take Shera n tie her up so she is hanging from there

Sia: hai bhagwan iske Rajkumar ko jaldi bhejdo....isse waqt

Shera: humme kisi rajkumar ki zaroorat nahin

Veer: tumhe zaroorat hai varna tum yahan nahin hoti

DV make grand entry

the doubts in Veer's mind regarding Shera to be behind Sia's kidnapping cleared and he realised both were kidnapped at once

DV fight tasha's men n beat em up, Tasha being a coward runs away with a couple of men that luckily survived

Shera,Veer,Dharam n sia remain alone in the cave

Shera to veer

Shera: shukriya ke itna kuch hone ke badh meri madat ki

Veer: hum waqt ane par apne sabse badhe dushman ko bhi bachate teh hai

A tear drops from Shera's eyes
Veer is confused because seeing Shera cry made him feel sad

Dharam: Veer tum Shera se baat karoge aur sab uljaan ne suljadoge...ye humara adesh hai

Shera: rajkumar Dharam hum apse mafi...

Dharam cut across her

Dharam: appko maaf karne ki zaroorat nahin...agar tum vakih main badal gayi ho toh ayinda kisiki jaan khatra matt ban na....Sia tum teekh hona

Sia: hmmm

He offers a hand

She takes it n they leave

Dharam: hum tumme badh mein milte hai

Veer n Shera are left alone

Veer: toh tum badall gayi ho

Shera nods

Veer: aacha toh apne baap ke paas chale ke ye kabul kar lo aur usse hamesha ke liye choodh do

there is a pause

Shera: isse kya sabit hoga

Veer: sab kuch

in his mind Veer is thinking: i know this is a dillemma for u but i too want to know hav u changed or not and whether u love me or not


Shera: humara faisla hai...


i tell u 2morrow

enjoy

shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
really nice story.. u update pretty fast 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
Thanks for the lovely update pls. do continue 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
wowwwww..... omg shona... it is soooo good... please continueeeeeee.... :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
excellent ff shoneeeeeeeeeeeee 😛 😛 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
thank u Kiran, Rekha, Ashah n Megha 🤗 for reading


ok time for next part

Shera: humara faisla hum humare pitahji ke samne he baata yenge

Veer: main kaise yakeen kar loon...tum shayad mujhe wahan lehja kar maar bhi sakti ho

Shera: BAAS!!!humse ek galti...sirf ek galti hogi ke hum ek dakoo hai aur iski tum humme itni badhi saza deh rahe ho...Tum jante ho humari maa ke badh humne sirf tumhare liye badalna chaha...hum bewakuf teh ke tumse pyar kar behteh

She stops realising exactly what she had said
Veer freezes as he thinks abt what she had said....she felt the sme way for him as he felt for her

Shera is about to make a leave from there when

Veer: woh akhir mein kya tha

Shera: kuch nahin

Veer: rooko Shera

Shera: nahin...tumne sach kaha tha humare raaste alag hai

She leaves from there

Veer: Shera...Shera meri baat toh suno...Shera

He too walks out from there looking distressed when Dharam n Sia come

Dharam: kya hua

Veer: woh naraz ho kar chali gaye

Sia: aur tum abhi bhi yahan ho

Veer: kya

Dharam: sia bilkul teekh keh rahi hai...jao aur usse manao

Veer: dharam mein ye kaise

Dharam: pyar mein sab karna padh ta hai...jao veer

Dharam n Sia push him to go so Veer leaves

Veer: hai bhagwan mein kahan jaon...ye ladkiyan kuch samaj ti kyun nahin...aur pyar kyun itna mushkil hota hai


on the other hand Shera was walking in the forest to get to the other side of it n get home as fast as possible...She was trying hard not to cry when

Shera: AHHHH!!!!

Shera had smacked her ankle hard on a rock n it was bleeding badly n causing alot of pain....She sat under a tree n wept in pain both mental n physical

Shera has a flashback of when she met Veer for the first time n he saved her from Tasha n wen they were both under a similar tree

Shera: kyun...kyun humare he saath aisa kyun....humne pehle baar kisi se pyar kiya aur uss ke liye badalna chaha par woh hai ke humari shakal bhi nahin dekh na chahta aur humseh nafrat karta hai...aur hum usse is kadar chahte hai ke abb hum chahe toh bhi na apna kaam kar sakte hai aur nahi uske samne ja sakte hai


on the otherhand Veer whom heard Shera's scream gets scared and hopes everything is ok as he starts paniking n looking around for her

Veer: SHERA....SHERA...SHER...

Veer sees her under the tree struggling

He goes up to her n trys helping out

Shera: chale jao yahan se Veer

Veer: nahinh...abb tum kuch nahin bolo gi

He bandages her ankle while doing so he hears her stomache rumbling with hunger

Veer: ek pal rooko main abhi aya

He goes to get some fruits for her

meanwhile she trys to get up n walk away from him....she is wincing in pain

Veer: veer se toh bhag logi par uss Veer se kaise bhagogi jo tumhare dil mein hai...Shera kuch log ek doosre ki liye bane hote hai....aur hum une mein se he hai....Shera mein tumse pyar karta hoon

Shera: aur woh sab kya tha jo pechle kuch dino se tum humse keh rahe theh

Veer: mera gussa aur ye jaane ka tareka ke tum badal gayi ho ya nahin...aur jaane ka tareeka ke tum mujhese pyar karti ho ya nahin

Shera: acha toh mujhe bhi ye tasali karni chahiye ke tum mujhe pyar karte ho ya nahin

Veer: manglo jo chahti ho....

Shera: Rajkumar Dharam ki maut

Veer takes out a knife from his belt

Veer: lo ye katar aur kaat dalo Veer ka saar

Shera: humne dharam maanga tha

Veer: DharamVeer do jism mein ek jaan hai...leh lo meri jaan

Shera: mil gayi humme tasali....hogaya tumhara intaham...tum aaj bhi rajkumar Dharam ko kudh se Ziyada chahte ho...Veer hum tumse vaada karte hai aajse hum tumhare saath Rajkumar Dharam ko surakshit rahkenge

Veer: par abhi idhar ah kar kuch kaah lo

Shera n Veer sit down n eat some fruits

Veer: abb ageh kya karogi

Shera: paata nahin

Veer: apne baba ke paas nahin jaana

Shera: ab hum uss narak mein kabhi nahin jayenge....

Veer: woh tumhare pitah hai

Shera: pitah humesha zindgi jeena sikate hai par unone...

Veer: Shera mere khatir tum unse ek baar milne jaana

Shera: kal ka kal soche...abhi humme vapas ja na chahiye...Dharam aur Sia humara intazar kar rahe honge

Veer: chalo

Shera: kaise

Veer: apna haath doh

they walk hand in hand slowly back out

Shera: ek baat pooche

Veer: pocho

Shera:tum humshe kyun pyar kar te ho



Read on 2morrow for Veer's reply

thanks for reading

Shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I was waiting for this Shona.. This is soo nice.. Each part gets better than the last.. waiting eagerly for next update tomorrow.. Keep up the good work 😛

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