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Posted: 17 years ago
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ab ageh:

Shera is shocked

Veer: kyun chook gayi...tumhe kya laga...tumne veer ko bewakuf banaliya...tut tut...veer keh samne tum apni asliyat nahin chupa paye....

Shera: tum...tumne mujhe kyun nahin maar dala

Veer: jab tak tum vaar nahin karti tab tak mein chup rehta par agar tumne mere bhai ke aur aankh utah kar dekha hota toh mein ye bhool jata ki tum ek ladki ho aur tumhe jaan se maar dalta...

Shera: jaan na nahin chaho ge ki kisne mujhe behja...

Veer: tum kisi ke kehne par yahan aye ho woh hi kafi hai mere liye

Shera: Veer hum...

Veer indicates her to stop by putting his hand up

Veer: baas...mujhe kuch nahin sunna....aaj se humare raaste alag hai humesha ke liye

Shera looks into his eyes n isnt able to face them

there was alot to say but she cudnt put it into words

Veer walked past her but she grabbed his hand

Shera: kya khabhi humari mulakat nahin hogi

Veer tugs his hand away unwillingly...he didnt know what was more imprtant....his feelings towards Shera or His brothers life n how Shera was a danger to it


Shera n Veer are both moving away in opposite direction....

The mela was over...Veer some how managed to tell Dharam that Shera had gone away with her father

Veer was sitting alone at night when he had flashbacks of shera...all their conversatopns n meetings n then the night when he heard her thinking aloud on planning to kill Dharam...then he closed his eyes n saw Shera dressed liek Sherani...he knew in his heart that if in Shera's place it had been anyone else he wud have killed them


On the other hand Shera was in the middle of a valley...She was searching herself....veer's words came back to her mind agen n agen....she closed her eyes n thought abt everything he sed...It was the sme thing her mother used to say abt relationships....shera didnt want to go anywhere now they only place she wanted to be is with Veer

Shera: aaj aisa kyun lag raha hai ke kuch koh gaya hai

Shera turns back n now runs as fast as possible back in the direction she came from


Veer: meine usse vaada kiya tha ke mein usse badaal dun ga aur mrin ye kar ke rahun ga


Veer is running in the direction that he saw Shera leave in


Both stop on the tracks when they see each other...one look into one another's eyes n then run towards each other

Veer: sher...

Shera puts a hand to his lips

Shera: veer bahot bol ta hai...aaj Shera ke baat suno...Shera ne riste,jaazbat kuch dekha nahin tha par tumse mil kar shera jaan chuki hai ke woh kaun hai aur ab Shera kudh se nahin bahge gi...tum ne jo vaada kiya woh nibha diya...ek baar phir tumne Shera ko maat de di


Veer: Shera mein tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon....Shera mein tumhare bagar...nahin ji sakta....humare raaste alag nahin par ek hai aur humari manzil bhi....mein tumse pyar karta hoon

Shera: Shera tumse durr ab nahin reh sakti

both look at each other

They hug....all other things forgotten....


Precap: Shera n Sia are kidnapped


shona

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
Awee that was cho cheet..... 😳 Thanks for the lovely update pls. do continue 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
Lovely Shona.. Awesome story 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34

Nice Update 😃 👏 cute 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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i appreciate the effort you are putting into it and continuiung regularly regardless of whether friends are able to comment or not.. hats off to you gal.... i am bookmarking this page and i am going to read your entire FF over the weekend as i have taken friday off 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏very nice
keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@meghaparti: thank u....will update in a couple of hrs
@bhuvana3: thx im glad u liked it
@ppiyu: thank u 🤗
@lashy di: thank u🤗....i dont mind if ppl dont comment as long as they read coz they r busy too....hope u like the FF
@moreremix: thank u 😊


i will update in soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashy

i appreciate the effort you are putting into it and continuiung regularly regardless of whether friends are able to comment or not.. hats off to you gal.... i am bookmarking this page and i am going to read your entire FF over the weekend as i have taken friday off 😊

Dont u know lashy, I am the biggest fan of Shonas FF... 😛 Its brilliantly written n I PM her my feedback for every single part tht she updates 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhuvana3

Dont u know lashy, I am the biggest fan of Shonas FF... 😛 Its brilliantly written n I PM her my feedback for every single part tht she updates 😳

oh i do know... thats why i say... whether friends are able to comment or not... 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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shone the ff roxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
amazing ff shone 😛 😛 😛

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