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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok heres next

Veer is too busy staring at shera unblinkingly

Dharam elbows veer

Dharam: Ghanti baj gaye

Veer: kya?

Dharam: dil ki ghanti baj gayi

Veer: dharam tum bhi na kuch bhi kehte rehte ho

Dharam: veer tumme woh aachi lag ti hai....hai na....dikhne main

Veer: nahin nahin toh


Before Dharam could say anything else Veer steered the conversation into another direction

Veer: abb hum chalna chahiye...hai na rajkumari sia

Sia: haan par hum toh yehi bhool gaye ke hum iss yatra mein kyun aye hai

she looks confused

Dharam: ji apke sukhi vivahit jeevan ke liye jo mere saath hoga

Sia: ji

Dharam: app prarthana kar ne ke liye aye thi


they all set off...shera walking very slowly n veer staying near her if she needs help

Dharam n veer are happily joking around whereas Sia is examining everything around her

Shera is thinking to herself

Shera: hum yahan apne maksad ke liye aye hai toh hum usse pura kar ke nikal kyun nahin jate...haan hum yahan se nikaal kar dharam ko mar dalenge

she is about to slip out when

Veer: shera...mera matlab sherani tum kahan ja rahi ho

Shera: woh hum

Veer: tum ek baar mein kuch samaj ti kyun nahin...tumhari jaan ko khatra hai...tumhe yahan koi nahin jaanta agar tumhe kuch ho gaya toh

Shera: tumse kya...agar humme kuch ho jata

Veer: mujse he toh hai...mera matlap hai ke agar tumhare samne koi bekasoor marr raha hai toh kya tum dekh paogi

Shera has a flashback of all the timews she killed innocent ppl for money

veer clicks his hands infrtont of her eyes

Veer: mein jaanta hoon mein bahat aacha dekh ta hoon par ghoor ne ki zarurat nahin

Shera: Shera veer ko kyun dekhna chahegi

Veer: dekho Sherani jhoot bolna bohat buri aadat hai

Shera: tumhe mazak aur masti bohat pasand hai hai na

Veer: bilkul....mast aur masak toh zindagi hai...mein tumhare bare main ziyaada kuch nahin jaanta par itna zaroor janta hoon ki tum shayad apni zindagi 15 baar khool ki nahin haasi hogi

Shera: hum kya karte hai usse tumhe kya

Veer: woh tummhe jaane ki zarrorat nahin...itna jaan lo ke mein tumhari soch aur tumhare zindagi ka tareeka is mele mein badal dunga....aur ye mera...Rajkumar Veer ka vaada hai tumse

Shera: bohat vishwas hai tumhe apne app par

Veer: apne app par bhi aur TUM par bhi....jai bhole nath

Shera is dragged into the crew once agen where she is thinking of how to get rid of Dharam but at the sme time abt Veer's words


Dharam n Veer are standing together next to the mandir n the rest are standing back at the bottom of the stairs

Veer: dharam tumse kuch nahin hoga

Dharam: kya

Veer: ye rajkumari wapas apne mehal chali jayegi iss mele ke badh....aur tumhe kuch dino mein bhool jayegi

Dharam: aisa nahin ho sakta ....hum aisa nahin hone denge

Veer: toh jaise mein kehta hoon vaisa karo


they have a mute conversation

Dharam: veer hum uss bechari ke saath aisa dhooka kaise kar sakte hai

Veer: arre pyar mein sab jayaz hai mere yaar


enjoy

Shona

Veer:

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I loved it Shona.. do post next part soon 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
aww your story is lovely dear...🤗 great work 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
lovely i am eagerly waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25

Nice FF 👏..... cute 😊 lets see wat Veer plans😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
Amazing!!👏👏Keep it up! Waiting 4 ur next part =]
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
ur fanfic's soooooo cute 👏
please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
Thank u everybody
Update coming shortly 😉
shona. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
ok so heres what happen afterwards:

Dharam: veer hum us becaheri ke saath dhooka kaise kar sakte hai

Veer: arre pyar mein sab jayaz hai yaar

Dharam still looks a lil uncomfortable

Veer: Sia chahiye ya nahin

Dharam: aacha hum chal te hai...par tumhari vali ka kya

Veer: kaun si

Dharam gives him a "veer-that-was-not-funny"look

Veer: pehle tumhara kuch karte hai

Dharam leaves

Sia approaches to come n pray with the others when Veer comes up to her

Veer: Bhabhi-ji mera matlab Rajkumari ji app kyun abhi pooja ke liye ja rahi hai

Sia: ji....hum kyun na jaye

Veer: Dharam baata raha tha ki ap apne sukhi vivahit jeevan ke liye aye hai

Sia: haan toh

Veer: woh meine suna hai ke jo kunvari ladki(unmarried girl) teekh raat ke bara baje kuch Shiv ji se mangti hai usse woh milta hai...toh app ye nahin jaan na chahti ke apko sahi vaar mila hai

Sia: haan

Veer: ek aur baar rajkumari ji....kisi ko baataye ga maat...dasiyon ko bhi nahin

Sia: par woh kunvari todi hai

Veer(whispering): dharam ye tum kise dil de bete

Sia: apne kuch kaha

Veer: Dharam chila kyun rahe ho...mein ah raha hoon

Sia: kaha hai Dharam

Actually nobody is there but Veer wants to get away from
Sia's questions 😆

Veer: wahan...(pointing at a random place) rajkumari ji apko pooja ki tayari nahin karni

Sia: haan...(to her dasis)app sab pooja kar lo...hum badh merin karen ge...koi behaz nahin karega ye humara aadesh hai


then when midnight comes Sia walks up to the mandir...no body is there

Sia: jai shambhu nath....

she goes to the top n folds her hands

Sia: shiv ji app toh jaante hai hum uss bewakuf harsh se shaadi nahin kar na chahte kyunki woh humare sapno ka rajkumar nahin hai...ap bataye hum kya kare

a deep voice comes from behind...

Voice: Sia tum Harsh se Shaadi maat karo....tumhara Rajkumar hai

Sia: kaun?

Voice: chup... ek toh humari pooja karti ho aur phir humme pooch ti ho ke hum kaun hai...ab dhyan se suno....Tumhare Rajkumar ka naam Dharam hai

Sia: kaise

Voice: Hum sab jaante hai....kya tumhe woh dikhne mein acha nahin lagta....jab tum giir ti ho aur woh tumhe bachata hai tumhe acha nahin lagta aur

Sia: lagta hai...bohat acha lagta hai....uski harr ek baat

Voice: toh tum usse magni kar lo

Sia: kaise... hum toh uske dil ki baat bhi nahin jaante aur maa

Voice: tum sab humpe choodh doh

Sia: par

Voice: abb jao Sia....ye humara adesh hai

She leaves quietly

on the other hand Dharam n Veer are shown laughing

Veer hands a man who was tlking to sia from behind the mandir pretending to be god a bag of money

Veer: Dharam ye toh bahat jaldi paat gaye

Dharam: nahin humme ye nahin kar na chahiya tha

Veer: nahin nahin...kitne sawal pochti hai...aur vaise bhi tumhe khush hona chahiye ke woh tumhe pasand kar ti hai

Dharam smiles


precap: Shera gets biten by a snake n veer enters

enjoy

Shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok heres next:

Veer: Dharam tum tambo mein jao mein abhi aya

Dharam: nahin nahin mein bhi chalta hoon tumhare saath

Veer: haan chalo mein vaise mujhe lagta hai mujhe maharaj ko sandes bhej na chahiye ki Aryanagar ka hoonewala maharaj kyun aaj kaal khoya khoya rehta hai

Dharam: nahin veer hum toh masak kar rahe teh...tum jao apna kaam karo hum jaate hai na

Dharam leaves

Veer heads of to Shera's tent

he sees from outside that she is standing there...he stays outside n looks on at her thinking to himself "Why isnt she a Princess"

Shera is thinking about what she has been doing all these years and how DV live there lives to their fullest
When unknown to her a snake was coming close by

Shera was now thinking about her mother when the snake advanced on Shera's toe and bit her

Shera: AHHHHH

Veer: Sherani!!!

he goes in n sees the snake n realises she has been biten so puts his mouth to the place where Shera had been biten n starts to suck the poison out

when Sia enters

Sia: Sher...Rakumar Veer app yahan

Veer: is baar koi sawal nahin....appp vaid ko bulaye

Sia: ji

Sia leaves n orders he men to call the doctor

Veer is trying to revive Shera

The Doctor comes in n puts some medicine on Shera's toe n they manage to lie her on the bed

Vaid: kaunse rang ka saap tha beta

Veer: ji woh kala tha

Vaid: hai bhagwan iss ladki ko bachalena

Veer: kya hua

Vaid: uss saap ke vaar ke badh koi zinda nahin rehta

Veer: ye nahin ho sakta....ap iss ladki ko nahin jaante ye bohat bahdur hai...ye,,,Sherani ootoh...otooo

Shera eyes move n so does her hand

Vaid: ye toh chamatkar ho gaya....


they treat Shera

Sia leaves n goes n Veer n Shera remain

Shera: kyun bachaye tumne humari jaan

Veer: tumhe maarne ka itna shookh kyun hai

Shera: Shera asool on ke saath jiti hai....aur bar bar kisika ehsaan nahin leti

Veer: ohh mein toh bhool hi gaya tha ke tumne zindagi kahan dekhi hai jo tum uski kimat jaanogi

Shera: tumhe humari kyun itni Chinta hai....chale jao humse humari zindagi se...maat ao Shera ke itne kareeb ke Shera tumse durr jah na sake!!!

Shera had shouted this in anger

Veer: chala jaunga ek barr apna vaada pura karlun

Shera: humare kehna ka matlab....hum jante hai ke ye sab...sukriya humari ek baar phirse jaan bachane ke liye

Veer: tumne jo abhi kaha "maat ao Shera ke itne kareeb ke Shera tumse durr jah na sake" mein toh abhi chala jaunga par tum abhi bhi nahin mujse durr reh paogi kyunki kuch riste aise hote hai aur kuch log sirf ek dusre se milne ke liye hote hai

Shera: humme ye kuch paata nahin sirf itna jaante hai ke hum kudhse bichaad rahe hai aur sirf tumhari vajase...hum tumse nafrat karte hai

Veer: teekh hai...vaise bhi tum kya zazbaton aur riston ko samjogi...tum toh dakoo hona....kaal se mere aur tumhare raaste alag hai...

n with that he walks out n goes away to his tent


Shera crys most of the night

in the morning Veer is practising with the sword when he remembers his first meeting with Shera n the feeling he had before he met her and from then all the meetings they had...everything was like a weird dream all of which he understood when he first met her n something she had not yet realized n if she had she was running away from it

he knelt down on the floor leaning on his sword...a lil out of breath

Shera enters

Shera: akile kya kar rahe ho...humse mukabla karo

Veer: veer kayaron se mukabla nahin karta

Shera: hum kayar nahin hai

Veer: jo apne appse hi bhagne lage woh kayar hai...

Shera: hum kudh se nahin bhag rahe

Veer: toh kya ye sach nahin hai ke tum jo kar rahi ho woh tum karna nahin chahti

Shera: kya karna nahin chahte

Veer: mere bhai Dharam ko marr na nahin chahti

Shera is shocked

Precap: Shera is crying her heart out to Veer

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