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Posted: 17 years ago
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Loved it Shona.. Keep writing 😛
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ok abb aggeh:

Dharam: kya hua veer

Veer: kuch nahi

they boys get dressed n come out of the tent

they meet up with sia

Sia: app kaunse mele mein ja rahe hai...mera matlap kahan ja rahe hai

Dharam: jana ap vaha hum

Sia: ji

Veer elbows Dharam

Veer: iss ka kehne ka matlap hai...jis mele mein ap ja rahi hai vahan hum bhi ja rahe hai

Sia: ohhh toh chaleye saath chalte hai

Dharam: saath chalne ke liye hum kabse tayaar beteh hai hum

Veer: app chaliye hum apna saman leh kar ate hai

Sia n crew exit while DV remain

Veer: ab apna mooh band rakna...kuch bhi bolta rehta hai...woh samje gi tum pagal ho gaye ho

Dharam: accha abb chalo

they leave along with sia n her crew

on the other hand shera is coming towards the mela from a different direction

Sia n crew reach to a place near the mela by dusk after many tantrums from sia

Veer: abb usse akele mein baat karna...mein waha talwar bazi ka abhiyaz kar raha hoon

Dharam: par...accha koi baat nahin...bhagwan kare aur usski dasi aaj beech mein na aajaye


Sia comes up to them

Sia: tum log kya baatein kar rahe ho

Veer: kuch nahin bhabhi ji

Sia: ji

Veer: rajkumari ji hum toh aryanagar ki baat kar rahe teh...aap ko aana chahiye vahan...vahan machar nahi hote

he exits


veer take off his overcoat thing n is practising talwarbazi

Shera is getting closer to him
Shera thinking to herself

Shera: baata nahin ye rajkumar kahan hai....usse ladke(agni) ne bola tha ki woh talwar ache chalata hai...surya ka teej hai uske sua pe aur surya ka tilak
(agni is sooo stupid...description matches both D n V)

she sees veer n thinks its him as he was sword fighting well....he had a surya tilak n all

Shera put the cloth around her face

as veer is practising a sword collides with his

veer looks up

Veer: lagta hai tumhe haarne ka badha shockh hai

Shera: Humne harna khabhi sikha he nahin

Veer: aur humme jeet ko galeh lagane ki aadat

Shera: aaj iss aadat ko he hum mita detehai

Veer: aur hum tumhe harna sikha deta hoon

Veer still doesnt know shera is a girl n neither does Shera know he is Veer n not Dharam

Both circling with their swords

Shera: chalo ek khel khelte hai....agar hum jeete toh tumhara saar humare kadhmo mein aur agar tum jeete toh jo tum kaho

Veer: khelne ka humme bhi bohat shookh hai...aur jeet ne ka bhi

Shera: hum aaj tak nahin haare

Veer: koi baat nahin, har baat ki shuruat khabhi na khabhi karni he padti hai

The two of them sword fight
one minute it looks like shera will win n the next minute it looks like veer will win

Veer: talwar kafi acchi chala lete ho tum...tum ho kaun

Shera: ye jaane ke zarurat tumhe nahin

they continue n when it looks like veer will lose he put all his strenght together n disarms Shera

Shera is stunned

Veer looks at her n gives a million dollar smile

Veer: mein kaha tha, mein hamesha jeet ko sirf galeh laga ta hoon

Shera: hum haar kaise sakte hai...Bolo tumhe kya chahiye

Veer: tumhara chehra...hum bhi dekhe kaun hai woh jisi humne haaraya

Shera looks scared but slowly pulls down the cloth from her face

Veer smile disappears and he looks shocked

a gentle wind blows shera's hair back

veer was stunned...he looked at:

a girl in a mans costume....trying to hide the fact that she is a girl but still cannot hide her beauty....beautiful big eyes with a kind of flame in them but now they looks tearful...pink lips....milky white complexion....black curls that looked mezmerizing when the wind blew them back

veer was lost in her eyes trying to interpret many things

he came back to earth when he heard her cry

Veer: kaun ho tum aur yahan kya kar rahi ho...aur ye saab kya tha

Shera: Shera ye sab naahin bata sakti

Veer: Shera...naam mein dum hai...acha hai...par kyun shera nahin bata sakti

Shera: shera ko salaon ke jawab dene ki aadat nahin hai...shera maan ti hai ke woh tumse haar gaye aur woh dubara tumhare raaste mein nahin ayegi

veer looked over her shoulder...someone was there n that someone acted way too fast

a knife was thrown towards them

veer pushed himself n shera onto the floor but it got shera on the hand

Shera: ahhhhhhhh!!!

veer took shera's hand n got her to her feet quickly

Shera: tum chale jao yahan se

Veer: nahin rooken ge toh saath mein ya chalen ge toh saath mein

Shera: jao

Veer: mujhe apna haath do...tumhe madat ki zarurat hai

Shera: shera ko kisi ki madat ki zarurat nahin

Veer: hai...shera ek bar chalo....ehsaan samaj kar chuka dena waqt aane par...

shera hesitats but then takes his hand n they both run

the person who tried attacking Shera was Tasha

Tasha: aaj bhi chook gaya par kab tak bachogi shera...chalo

Veer n Shera run into the jungle, followed by Tasha's men

on the other hand Sia is counting stars

Dharam is watching her

Dasi comes up to her

Dasi: rajkumari ji

Sia: kya hai...

she doesnt wait for an answer but she continues

Sia: jaanti ho humne kal ek sapna dekha tha ke hum tare gin rahe hai aur humare sapno ka rajkumar ah ke humari palke bandh kar ta hai aur phir hum...oh hum tumhe ye sab kyun baata rahe hai...kya hai

Dasi: woh kahna tayar hai

Sia: tum log kahlo...hum badh mein kah lenge

She resumes to her counting

Sia: satiyasi....atiyansi

a hand comes over her eyes n closes them

Sia: humari ginti bigadh di

Dharam whispers in her ears

Dharam: toh hum dobara gin len ge rajkumari ji

Sia is pleasently surprised

Sia: Rajkumari nahin...sirf sia

Dharam: waise suna hai ki is mele mein jo mango woh milta hai...app kya mangne aye hai...Si...Sia

Sia: humari ma ne humare shaadi kisi bewakuf rajkumar harsh se teh kar di hai...aur humme apne sukhi vevahik jeeva ki prarthana ke liye yahan bhej diya...par hum shaadi nahin karna chahte...hum humare sapno ke rajkumar ke liye prarthana karenge

Dharam: apka sapno ka rajkumar hai kaun

Sia: paata nahin par jo koi bhi hai woh itna sundar hoga ki sab ladkiyan usse dekh kar behoosh ho jayen gi...woh jab uski talwar chalegi toh sab dushman bhag jayenge...woh humse behat mohabaat karega....humare ek ishare pe humare liye chand tare lehkar aye ga...yeh sab hum apko kyun paata rahe hai...rajkumar

Dharam: Sirf dharam...aur shayad app hume ye is liye paata rahi hai kyunki hum abb shayad apke dost bangaye hai

Sia: paata nahin kyun humme lagta hai ke iss mele mein jah kar sab badal jaye ga

Dharam: sab badhal gaya hai


on the other hand shera is bleeding from her hand very badly n is completely out of breath

Veer: rooko

they stop

veer rips of a bit of his overcoat thing n ties it around Shera's hand

Veer: taak gaye ho

Shera: tum shera ki madat kyun kar rahe ho

Veer: kyunki...kyunki...mein kudh nahin jaanta...bas mera dil kehta hai is liye

Shera: shera

Veer pushes her against a tree n goes right up close to her

Veer: ab shera baas bhi karegi...koi tumhari madat kar raha hai aur tum usse aise behuda sawal kar rahi ho...sawal toh mujhe karna chahiye ke kaun ho tum aur kya kar rahi ho aur woh tumhe marna kyun chahte hai


Shera mean while was staring into Veer's eyes

Veer: abb kya dekh rahi hai shera

Shera: bohat mard mileh par kisi ke akonhe mein ye saachaye aur aag nahin dekhi shera ne...shera samaj ti thi ke woh tumhe jaanti hai par nahin....kaun ho tum?

Veer: mein maharaj Aryavardhan ki behen ka beta Veer hoon

Shera is stunned

Shera: rajkumar..rajkumar ve...rajkumar Veer

Veer: haan kyun...kya meri shakal itni darawni hai?

she passes out

Veer: shera ootoh...shera...shera


thats it guys for now!!!
enjoy

shona 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome 😳 Very nice....Pls Continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: meghaparti

Awesome 😳 Very nice....Pls Continue



thank u
will continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
continued:
recap:
*sia n dharam become friends
*shera arrives at mela n mistakens veer as dharam n the sword fight
*tasha's men attack shera n are after her so veer makes a run for it with her
*Shera faints

Veer: ooto shera....shera

he is gently slapping her on the cheeck in attempt to wake her up

Shera gains conscience

Shera: kaha hai hum

Veer: iss pedh ke nicheh

Shera: shera ko mazak pasand nahin hai

Veer hears Tasha's men coming so shuts Shera up by putting his hand over her mouth

One of the men: sarkar yahan nahin hai

Tasha: clalo...subha dundhe ge...,iss bar woh baach ne nahin chahiye...usske laash he jayegi uske baap ke paas

Tasha n his men leave

Veer is still looking at Shera

Veer: ahhhhhhhh

Shera just bit veer

Shera: shera ko ye ehsaan dosti kuch pasand nahin hai, shera ko bachane ke kimat bolo

Veer: shayad shera ye bhool gaye hai ki woh rajkumar Veer se baat kar rahi hai

Shera: jaldi kimat bolo aur humse duur ho jao....humme kisi

Veer: shhh!! Shera bohat bolti hai....jo mein mangunga woh shera deh payegi

Shera: shera ke jaan bhi mang lo shera mana nahin kare gi

Veer: accha toh teek hai pehle tumhe mujhese baat karni padhe gi

Shera: kya matlab

Veer: tum ladkiyan ek bar mein kuch samaj ti he nahin...matlab shera ko veer se dosti kani padeh gi

Shera: shera ko ye sab

Veer: pasand nahin jaanta hoon....par jo manga woh dehna toh padeh ga

Shera: teek hai

Veer: chalo pehle iss jungle se chalte hai

Shera: tum shera se dosti kyun kar na chahte ho

Veer: kyun ki shera sab ladkiyon se juda hai jinse veer mila hai

Shera: ek baat kahen

Veer: hmm bolo

Shera: veer baki sab se alag hai...kuch tum mein hai jo kisi aur mard mein nahin

Veer: shera mein kuch poochna chahata hoon agar tum nahin batana nahin chahti toh maat baatana

Shera: kya

Veer: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho aur kyun aye ho

Shera: jaan na chahte ho toh chalo ek dooh lagate hai

Veer: lagta hai shera ko khel ne ka badha maza ata hai

Shera: ayr is baar khel ka maza he kuch aur hai...shera ko barabari ka kheladi mila hai

Veer: kya shera ko veer se haarne a shokh hai ya...khel kya hai

Shera: wahan is jungle se bahar janee ka rasta hai(she points towards the opening of the jungle)...toh chalo dhud laga te hai...agar shera jeet gaye toh tum shera se ye kuch nahin poochoge aur agar tu jeet gaya toh shera tumhare har sawal ka jawab dehgi

Veer: dudh shuru kare

they both run....one minute shera is leading next minute veer is leading....then veer overtakes shera n is at the opening of the forest looking on at her waiting for her to reach there...she is getting there when

Shera: ahhhhhh!!!

shera hit her toe on a small rock n feel and twisted her ankle

Veer: SHERA

he goes up to her...

Veer: shera tum teekh toh hona...shera

Shera: hum...ve...ahhhhh..

Veer takes her into his arms and carries her....she slowly puts her hands around his neck

Veer carrying Shera gets back towards Sia's tent


There Dharam n Sia are talking

Sia: humme uss bewakuf harsh se shaadi nahin karni

Dharam: toh maat karo

Sia: humme karni hogi

Dharam: harsh se bol doh ke tumhe nahi karni shaadi

Sia: woh nahin mana...par humme pura yakeen hai ki humare sapno ka rajkumar ayega aur humme lejeayega...aacha meri chodho...apne baare mein kuch baato

Dharam: Veer!!

Sia: kya?

Dharam: ye veer ek ladki ko apni bahon mein leh kar kyun ahraha hai?

Sia: iss mein ko nayi baat kya hai...hogi uski rajkumari

Dharam: tut tut nahin...veer aisa bilkul nahin...hum abhi aye

Dharam goes towards veer

Dharam: veer tum teekh toh ho...aur ye ladki

Veer: mein sab badh mein bataunga...pehle iss ko hoosh mein late hai

Veer n Dharam n Sia take Shera into a tent

Veer: gets some water n a cloth n wipes of the blood with it
He makes a quick leep n applies it on her wounds and gives her water

Dharam n Sia are just watching eyes popping out

Veer: shera...shera ab kaisa lag raha hai

Shera: shukriya tumne ek baar phir shera ko bachaya

Dharam: ek baar phir....yane ke tum log pehle bhi mile ho...veer

Veer: nahin dharam aisi koi baat nahin...sirf madat kar raha tha

veer suddenly blushes

Shera: shera ghar jaana chahti hai

Sia: ji app ghar nahin jah sakti...lagta hai apke peer mein mohch agaye hai

Dharam: aap yahan rook jaye...veer hai na apki dekh bhal ke liye...um sia humara...matlab mera aur veer ka tambo kaha hai

Sia: meri saath ao

they both leave

veer turns to shera n both have an eyelock


thats it

Precap: veer and shera are hugging 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
wow this is wickeddddddddddddddddddd!!!
well done hun!!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
very interesting.......... I specially liked ur sweet and simple dialogs. 👏
Do continue.......Me waiting 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
hi guys
well long time since i last updated so i'll do it now

Well we finished off at Veer nShera having an eyelock

Veer: Tum teekh ho

Shera: hmm...shukriya

Veer: shart toh nahin bhool gaye na?

Shera: nahin...bolo

Veer: accha pehle baatao tum kaun ho aur yahan kya kar rahi ho

Shera: hum ek dakoo hai...aur hum yahan...yahan mele mein aye teh

Veer: accha aur woh log tumhare peeche kyun aye teh

Shera: woh tasha aur uske admi teh...humari purani dushmani hai....woh shera ko maar na chahta hai

Veer: tumhara naam shera kyun hai...waise naam mein dum hai

Shera: tum baatein karke tahka te nahin ho

Veer: sawal ka jawab doh

Shera: humara naam shera nahin par sherani tah par baba ka koi beta nahin aur hum koi bete se kaam nahin isliye unhone humara naam shera kar diya

Veer: aacha ab baatao ki tumhe dosti aur ehsaan vagera vager sab pasand kyun nahin

Shera: sab ristein jhooten hote hai...agar tum kisi ke paas jateho toh bhagwan usko tumse duur kar deta hai...ristein dard ke siva kuch nahin dete

Veer: tut tut...bilkul galat...ristein humari takat hote hai...aur koi rista agar sacha ho toh koi usse todh nahin sakta....ristein saason ki tarah hote hai...inn ke bina hum zindagi ko jii nahin sakte...meri maa yehi kehti hai

Shera: meri maa bhi yehi kehti thi

She remembers her mum n trys suppressing her tears but cannot

Veer: thi matlap...

Shera: woh abb

Veer: dekho tum runa maat...achha koi aur baat kareh....Shera tum kis prakar ki ladke si shaadi kar na chahogi

Shera wipes her tears n dfiverts her thoughts away from memories of jher mum to veer n his talk

Shera: shera ko shaadi nahin karni

Veer: kyun

a little taken aback

Shera:aisa koi hai he nahin jo shera ke liye banaya gaya ho

Veer: mein bhi yahi soch ta tha ki koi mere liye nahin banaye gayi hai par aaj ke badh sab badall gaya hai...

they go to sleep after a while

Shera however is troubled with a thought

Shera in her mind: ye humme ho kya gaya hai....hum kisi par itna barosa kyun kar rahe hai...aur ye hum veer ko sab kuch apne baare mein kyun baata rahe teh....humme apne maksad par dhyan dena hoga


while Veer on the otherhand is having a thought too:

veer to himself: aaj mujhe ek ladki se baat karne ka maan kyun kar raha tha....(He remebers the events of that night like the sword fight n the run n everything) par shera mein kuch baat hai...Sherani....


in the morning Sia n Dharam get ready...Veer wonders off to Shera's tent where she is already ready

Veer: shera ....tasha ke admi tumhe duundh rahe hai

Shera: aaj usse baata he dete hai ki behtar kaun hai

Veer: bilkul nahin....tumhe choot phirse lag sakti hai

Dharam enters

Dharam: veer bilkul teek keh raha hai...app humare saath chalengi

Shera: woh humme pehchan lenge aur hum par humla karen ge

Veer: woh tumhe nahin peechan payenge

Shera: kaise

Veer: kyunki tum Shera se Sherani ban jao gi...Rajkumari Sia


a while later Shera steps out of the tent in Sia's girly outfit looking uncomfortable

Veer looks at her unable to stop himself from staring at her mezmerizing beauty 😳


thats it

hope u liked it 😳

shona
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow con't pls

it going really well 😉

CHing 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
^^thank u guys hopefully i'll update 2morro 😳

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