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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow 😊 !! Shona u r a brilliant writer. this part is also toooooooo good. Thanks for the lovely story. hope sagar read this story and follow ur ideas 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
kya shona... itni jaldi baccho ki shaadi kara rahi ho... 😆 just kiddin... 😃 iloved this part... 👏 especially the dv and agni scene... veer is so cool... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ohhh Great work Shona 👏 👏 In a rush also good script writing 😉 😃 But I am a little worried agle part ke liye kahi JV aur Agni ne zehar toh nahi mila diya us sharbat mein veer ke liye aur kya VV aur DS ki Kundaliyaan match karenge 😳 Well Next part jaldhi bhejna I will be witing 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesum work shona...
i forgot to comment on part before this.. 😭 ..hmm...bt dun worry...am gonna comment nw.. 😈 😈 😆
VEER taking care of vishwa was really sweet specially when he scolded her....hw chweet... 😍 😍 😍
and dharam-sia part was great..when sia said dat they r married couples.. 😳 😆
agni is out of da ashram...this one was awesum...n when dharam was talking to him sweetly...he didnt gave any reply... 😡 ...hmm...den VEER took care of dis..and wat a dialogue...!!! teasing agni.. 😆 😆 😆
SS agreed for VV's marriage.. ...
awww..shona...i really like da line...''i dnt like him,i luv him''... 😳 😳 😳
and dat jv.. 😡 ...kabhi nai sudhrega...ab he's making plans to kill VEER.... 😡 😡 😡 ....bt am sure...VEER is much more intelligent den both of dem...(jv n agni) 😍 😎 ..he will try to solve it...!!!
btw...shona...great update...w8ing 4 da next part.. 👏




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Edited by vinisha_RAJAT - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice part!! 👏 👏 👏
agni being rude wid dharam.. that was so obvious 😡 but veer teasing agni 😆
that scene was very realistic (i mean comparasing wid the serial), good work 👏
dharam saying: ...akhir bhabi jo hei 😆 so sweet 😳
samar agreeing on veer vishva marriage 😃 and vishva blushing so much, omg, sab dakoogiri udkar chaligayi (she has changed completely)
and ur precap.. a dasi bringing drink...i guess shes our dear sandy bringing something strange 😆 , and agni and jai smiling..... thats not usual 😕
lets see 😊
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok heres the next bit!

but before that i wud like to say i lack atrology knowledge so this part aint taht gd toward the ending...it seems a bit out of place...to me anyways

Samar send Niviriti msg taht he and Vishva agree and if they dont mind they shud call the kids and get the horoscopes matched

Niviriti is happy and tells Arya this

Arya: ye toh bohat khushi ki baat hai...baas ab Dharam ke liye bhi koi achi Rajkumari mil jaye toh

Niviriti remembers the promise she made to Dharam about talking to Arya about Sia

Nivi: bhaiya mere dhyan mein ek rajkumari hai

Arya: kaun Niviriti?

Nivi: Rajkumari Sia,Avail ki rajkumari, woh rajkumari jo humme wahan gurukul mein mili this...woh sundar hai...sushil hai aur dharam ko pasand bhi hai

Arya: agar aisi baat hai toh uske pitahji se humme baat karni hogi

Nivi: agar ap kahe toh mein Avail jane ki tayari karon

Arya nods his head

on the otherhand Dharam and Veer are standing facing each other both looking dead serious

Dharam: pitahji...mein...mein ap..apse kuch kehna...kehna chahta hoon

stuttered Dharam nerveously

Veer: bolo beta...kya baat hai

replied Veer replicating Aryavardhan convincingly

Dharam: woh mein...pitahji mujhe...mein pya...

Vishva broke into a fit of laughter while Sia who was triing hard not to laugh also started laughing

Sia: baat toh aise kar rahe ho jaise kisi ka khoon kiya ho...agar nahin paata sakte toh mein bol doon

Dharam: is mein ghalti humari todi hai...ye Veer...kaise khada hai...aisa lag raha hai ke ye maharaj nahin balke Rajmantri ji hai jo mujhe phasi ke saza de raha hai

Sia: nahin Veer bilkul teek kar raha hai...

Vishva: nahin Dharam teekh kar raha hai...apne pitahji ko apne pyar ke bare mein paata na asaan nahin hai

Sia: nahin dharam ko ata he nahin...dekho kaise achi tarah se Veer natak kar raha hai...aur Dharam

Vishva: aur Dharam kya...dharam bilkul sahi kar raha hai...

Sia: nahin!!!

the two girls bicker while the boys just stand there...shocked...surprised and a little amused....

Veer: BAS!!hum maharaj hai...humare samne kisi ke himmat kaise hui oochi avaz mein bol ne ki

everyone went silent

then all of a sudden all laugh

the following day a messenger arrives calling Dharam,Veer and Vishva to Aryanagar immediately while the king of Aryanagar,Natraj and his wife Prateeksha come to meet Sia

**Praty=Prateeksha and Nat=Natraj**

Praty: Sia...kaisi ho beta

Sia: mein teekh hoon ma...ap kaisi hai

Nat: sia...meri bachi...

they all hug

Sia: app yahan achanak...kya baat hai

Praty: hum tumhe Aryanagar le jane aye hai...

Sia: aryanagar?

Nat: haan woh maharaj Aryavardhan ka sandesh aya tha...Rajkumar Dharam ke liye tumhara haath mangne ke liye

Sia blushes

Praty: par pehle hum uss rajkumar se toh mil le jisne humari Sia ka dil jeeta hai

Dharam touches their feet and takes blessings...Praty n Nat are pleased to see Dharam's manners

Sia: par is tarah achanak...rishta

Praty: tum dono ko kya laga...humme tumhare bare mein kuch nahin paata...

she smiles at them too who blush incredibly

Veer an dVishva are standing together though a little away
Veer leans over to Vishva and says

Veer: achi baat hai...ab sab kuch teekh hai toh chalne ki tayari kare

Vishva: kahan..oh Sumaiya

She gives a naughty smile

Veer: ahan...ab toh sidha Aryanagar...par is bar meri kidki se nahin balke rajmehal ke darwaze se

they both gazed into one another eyes recalling that night


that evening everyone reached Aryanagar to a grand welcome most credit going to of course Niviriti who had done all the preparation

Aryavardhan hugs both DV
DV take Maharani Sunaina(Dharam's mum's)blessing and then move over to give Nivi a toght hug
Dharam whispers in her ear
Dharam: bua hum jante hai apne ye sab kiya hai...shukriys

She smiles warmly

after a mouth watering dinner all are seated in the courtroom where panditji is sitting examining 2 kundalis(of Dharam n Sia)

He looks up after a while

Punditji: Maharaj ye kundaliyan mil gayi hai par vivah mein koi vighna na aye is liye is shaadi ko maha yagya ke badh he karna

Maharaj: koi baat nahin...lijiye maharaj natraj...mooh mitah kijiye

Nat: haan bhai..kehte hai Aryanagar jaisi jaleebi kahin aur nahin milti

After a while the punditji is matching Vishva and Veer's kundali, both veer and vishva glance at one another nerveously...panditji shakes his head

Panditji: maharaj ye dono kundaliyon pe Shani ka prabhav hai is liye ye shaadi is prabhav ke utar jane ke badh he ho sakti hai...aur is mein shayad kuch saal bhi ho jaye...

Samar looks a little disturbed while Vishva looks nerveous

Nivriti: koi baat nahin....par agar Veer ke shaadi hogi toh Vishva se he

all look pleased

a maid walks in with drinks

seeing this agni and jaivardhan are smile slyly, their plan was being put into action

Precap: dasi: is sharbat mein zehar hai
all is shocked

Enjoy

Shona


Edited by **Shona** - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rt the cute

awesum script shona i wish rt n mc k darmian reality me aisa kuch hota 😍



thank u

yaar mc rt se 5-6 saal badi hai...toh baat nahin ban sakti
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jigs_b

Wow 😊 !! Shona u r a brilliant writer. this part is also toooooooo good. Thanks for the lovely story. hope sagar read this story and follow ur ideas 👏 👏 👏



thank u dear
wow im glad u liked this part also
i guess something like this is happening in serial also-all going to ashram n the boys n girls will be near one another 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kunataanya

kya shona... itni jaldi baccho ki shaadi kara rahi ho... 😆 just kiddin... 😃 iloved this part... 👏 especially the dv and agni scene... veer is so cool... 😃



thank neeri
arre yaar abhi shaadi ki baat ho rahi hai...shaadi kahan hui... 😆
also in those days i guess it was the right age naa? 😳

me too had total maza writing teh DV n agni scene

yh Veer is too cool
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Ohhh Great work Shona 👏 👏 In a rush also good script writing 😉 😃 But I am a little worried agle part ke liye kahi JV aur Agni ne zehar toh nahi mila diya us sharbat mein veer ke liye aur kya VV aur DS ki Kundaliyaan match karenge 😳 Well Next part jaldhi bhejna I will be witing 😳



thank u megha
yh u guess...check the precap they did put zeher in teh sherbat
i updated the part...do read n comment 😳

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