Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 35

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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks Shona for another fantastic part 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow shona... i loved this part... 👏 so many good things happened... agni back to aryanagar.. dharam-sia cuteness... 😳 and veer mothering vishva.. 😆 very very cute... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz cont soon
it was superb 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: **Shona**



thank u spandita

sandhiya isnt negative or evil but she's beginning to like veer a bit too much n wants to break up vishva n veer's relationship

no more girls for Veer now

maybe...cud be a new entry for Dharam...not sure...

well tum ho na!-i'll save Dharam for u 😳 😆

Very romantic and beautiful part.Me already daydreaming abt Dharam(that I always do😉)

Tell me something-how cud the old woman think they were married?Was Sia wearing mangalsutra and sindoor?She is a 13-14th century princess and as far as I know (my knowledge of history is very limited) it was mandatory 4 Suhagans 2 wear those in those days.

Why did u have 2 put up pics of that horrible pumpkinhead Sia😕(what a lie she told😡She is awfully dimwitted).U turned off my mood with that😭

Anyways waiting 4 next update😃Plzz update soon😊

Congrats once more 4 Viswaas👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
Very romantic and beautiful part. Veer is so caring
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Posted: 17 years ago
Very romantic and beautiful part. Veer is so caring
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Posted: 17 years ago

shona your update is toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

good

keep it up

and best of luck for u r exam

** TEJASVI**

RAJAT TOKAS -TOKEN OF LOVE &FRIENDSHIP

U R SO cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeee RAJAT


ur smile makes my day..so keep smiling

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Posted: 17 years ago
so beautiful!, especially veer scene 😆 😳
aw, samar asking vishva about veer, cant wait..
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok heres the next bit...i know its not upto scratch but im in a rush...also i cant find many matching pix..so still looking for pix...will add tehm later

Samar recieves Niviriti's letter in the morning

Samar thinks to himself about teh proposal....Veer was undoubtedly a brave warrior and a responsible prince who loved and cared for his dear ones...he wud look after Vishva well...also he knew the Aryavraths and knew that Vishva will be happy there...but the most important thing was whether Vishva was happy with it or not...Samar decides to meet Vishva and speak to her about this

on the otherhand Sia and dharam come back to the gurukul with teh right medicine...a few hours after taking it Vishva seems much better

all are sitting in Vishva's room talking when DV get to know that Agni has been asked to return to Aryanagar...they go to bid Agni farewell

Dharam: humme bohat dook hua ke tumhe ye mukable se bahar hona pada...par mujhe pura yakeen hai ke jai chacha tumse bohat khush honge...

Dharam hugs him but Agni doesnt return it...Veer sees this

Veer: socha tha ke tum kuch aur din tikte par koi baat nahin...DV se toh tumhe harna tha...waise Maharaj aur maa ke saath milne ana...hum tumhara besabri ke saath intazar karenge...aur haan Agni tumhare jaane ke badh humme tumhari yaad bohat sataye gi...

Veer adds sarcastically

Veer hugs agni tightly that Agni has to return the hug

Agni is about to turn away wen Veer adds

Veer: aur haan agni Sighasen toh tum kho chuke par Rajya mantri ban ne ke darwaze kule hai

Agni felt his blood boil...he wanted to kill Veer there and then...especially after seeing Vishva laughing at Veer's comments

Vishva: koi baat nahin Agni...woh kya haina ke in dono Rajkumaron ke samne baki sab pekeh padh jate hai

Agni looked furious and blamed everything on Veer

Agni later went back to Aryanagar

Jai was furious at this
Agni tried to justify himself

Agni: pitahji woh sari galti veer ki hai...woh hamesha kuch na kuch karke mujhe hara deta tha...aur Dharam bhi

JV: BAS!! ab sighasen ko pane ke liye humare pas ek he raasta hai...DV ko marna

Agni: pitahji is shuruwat Veer se karte hai...usse marne ki zimedari meri...mein ab usse nahin choodon ga...pehle Vishva aur ab singasen

JV was like whatever...he didnt like the idea of his son being in love with anyone...for this love cud become his son's weakness....

Samar arrives at the gurukul late afternoon....Vishva seems much much better...

Veer beat Dharam to touching Samar's feet and taking his ashirwad...samar beamed at him...Dharam and Sia too took his blessings
Vishva hugged him....AM told Samar about how Vishva's heath was bad but DS bought teh medicine and how Veer took gd care of her

Veer blushed slightly

Samar: shukriya...Vishva ka khyal rakhne ke liye

Before Veer cud reply Dharam did

Dharam: koi baat nahin...Vishva humare he parivar ka hisa hai...akhir Bhabhi hai

Samar: ji

Dharam: mera matlap ke woh parivar jaisi hai toh khayal toh rakna he hoga

Everyone is bustling around when Samar and Vishva are left alone
Samar seizes this opportunity to talk to Vishva about Veer

Samar: ahh Veer bohat accha ladka hai...haina Vishva

Vishva: ah..hum kya kahen

she blushes

Samar: kyun...tumhe acha nahin lagta

Vishva quickly replied

Vishva: nahin aisi koi baat nahin hai...accha hai...par app kyun pooch rahe hai...aise achanak

Samar seems more serious

Samar: beti Niviriti ka sandesh aya hai...ussne Veer ke liye tumhara haath manga hai...mein tumhari rai jana chahta hoon

Vishva blushes incredibly

Vishva: woh..pitahji..hum apse kuch kehna chahte hai...pitahji...

she decides to tell Samar that she doesnt like Veer but loves him

Vishva: hum Veer se bohat pyar karte hai

Samar looks happy to know she likes Veer

Samar: aur woh

Vishva glances up and smiles...still blushing

Samar: achha..toh kya mein nivriti se shaadi ka mahorat paka karne ko bol dun

Vishva smiles but blushes alot and runs away...unable to control her happiness that the parents didnt mind her relation with Veer....

Samar takes leave soon after

Dharam had heard teh whole conversation between Vishva and Samar...he is so happy for Veer

Dharam tells Veer

Dharam: kya baat hai Veer...tum khush nahin ho

Veer: mujhe lagta hai maharaj ko Rajkumari sia ke bare mein batane ka waqt ah gaya hai

Dharam blushes slightly...


Precap: The pandit is matching horoscopes and shakes his head...everyone seems tensed...a dasi brings in drinks...JV and Agni smile


Shona

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Posted: 17 years ago
that was a lovely part once again shona you did a great job and yes finally vishva and veer are gonna get married but i didn't get this bit that vishwa doesn't like veer but loves him 😕 😕 😕 .


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