Vishvaas:PG85The End!-preview of VW2 pg1! - Page 38

Thank u shona dear.. too fast 😊 another lovely part.it'll be fun to see veer and vishva as lovers for some more time(shayad story ke end tak)

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

very nice part!! 👏 👏 👏
agni being rude wid dharam.. that was so obvious 😡 but veer teasing agni 😆
that scene was very realistic (i mean comparasing wid the serial), good work 👏
dharam saying: ...akhir bhabi jo hei 😆 so sweet 😳
samar agreeing on veer vishva marriage 😃 and vishva blushing so much, omg, sab dakoogiri udkar chaligayi (she has changed completely)
and ur precap.. a dasi bringing drink...i guess shes our dear sandy bringing something strange 😆 , and agni and jai smiling..... thats not usual 😕
lets see 😊
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thank ooo archana
well in the end DV had teh last laugh...actually thats what i wanted...something similar to what we wud probably see on the show

yh the boys definately look after their bhabhis 😳

yh i guess love has changed our dakoo girl to a rajkumari...n samar is a brillient father...he agreed so quick..well he is getting teh best damand so liek who wudnt 😆

gd guess u know i never thought of sandy being there...but i guess she'll join the lot soon enough

JV n agni smiling for they feel they have knowck Veer out of their way...somebody tell them they are under one of the biggest misunderstandings 😆

tahnks agen archana n keep reading Vishvaas n do post ur views 😛

Originally posted by: jigs_b

Thank u shona dear.. too fast 😊 another lovely part.it'll be fun to see veer and vishva as lovers for some more time(shayad story ke end tak)

thanks
im glad u liked the part
yh for now Veer n vishva are lovers not mia biwi

awwww that was another lovely part shona dear i would love to se veer and vishva as lovers ,goooooooooooooooddddddddddd. keep it up.
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hiri

I do not think u need 2 b reminded time and again wat a brilliant writer u r .Last part was mindblowing.I am so happy for Dharam 😊 .Ab bas Veer ki shaadi ho jaye.Why I am getting a nasty feeling that the Pandit matching horoscopes is either bribed or is going 2 b killed very soon. 😡
Anyways I will wait and watch.
Plz update soooooooooonnnnnn 😃

Thanks shona for the next part ....See I told u some problem would creep up between VV marriage Very nice work 👏 Pls. post the next part soon....I am waiting to know who comes to know ki sharbat main zeher hai 😉 😃

lovely part... 😳 my fav scene was sia supporting veer and vishva supporting dharam.. 😆 😆 too cute... 😃

ok heres the next part:

all look at teh maid who bought in the sherbat...she hands it out to everyone...she glances up at Jv n Agni and gives a nod to show that the work has been done...

Veer takes teh glass and thanks the dasi who walks out soon after

Veer is about to consume the drink and Jv n Agni grin at one another evily when a Dasi storms in

Dasi: ROOKYE

all freeze

Dasi: rajkumar Veer ye sherbat mein zehar hai

Arya: kya!!

Dasi: woh in sab sherbat mein cheeni kam hai...aur rajkumar Veer kehte hai ke jis sherbat mein cheeni kam hoti hai woh un ke liye zeher jaisa he hota hai

All laugh

teh dais brings Veer a glass with his sherbat which has extra sugar and takes teh other glass

Jv n agni seem tensed

back in their room Jv n Agni are plotting more evil plans

Jv: koi baat nahin...aaj woh bach gaya par kal...kal woh nahin bache ga

Agni: par kaise pitahji...

Jv: meri baat dhyan se suno

they disscuss their plans

on the otherhand Niviriti is planning for a maha yagya after which Dharam and Sia's wedding can take place. Dharam comes up to her

Dharam: bua

Nivi: arre dharam beta tum yahan...tum toh Sia ko Rajmehal dekhana gaye teh na?...ab kuch waqt ke badh tumhari shaadi ho jaye gi...

Dharam interupts

Dharam: nahin bua....

Nivi: ye tum kya keh rahe ho?

Dharam: bua ap jane ti hai mein aur veer sab saath karte hai...mein Veer se pehle kaise shaadi kar sakta hoon

Nivi gives a giggle

Nivi: beta ab tum bade ho gaye ho...ab toh Veer ka haath choodh kar do kadam uske ageh chalo...Sia ka haath tham ke

Dharam: par bua

Nivi: nahin Dharam ye galat zind hai...ab tumhe Sia ke bare mein bhi sochna chahiye...aur waise bhi tum Veer se bade ho toh pehle tumhari shaadi honi chahiye...aur waise bhi tumhari aur Veer ki sagayi toh ek he din ho rahi hai

Veer enters with Vishva...Sia also standing in between them

Veer: maa teekh keh rahi hai...tumme ab sara waqt Sia ko aur Aryanagar ko dena chahiye

Vishva: veer bilkul teekh keh raha hai...aur waise bhi hum dono kahan bhage ja rahe hai...shani dev ki jab marzi hogi tab humari bhi shaadi ho jaye gi

all laugh at this

Nivi exits

Veer,Vishva take Sia n walk upto Dharam

Veer takes Dharam's hand and Vishva takes Sia's hand and place it in each others

Veer: sia...mera matlab bhabhi aaj mein apko apna Dharam sop raha hoon...mein janta hoon ke ye batamiz hai,khadoos hai aur bewakuf bhi hai par dil ka bohat acha hai

Dharam: Veer!!

he gives Veer a friendly blow

Vishva: bas hamesha ek dusre ke saath is tara khush rehna

the following day teh boys are going with teh girls around aryanagar...to show them the place also afterwards they will have a horse race

the people of Aryanagar praise teh choices of teh princess...some saying teh prince have chosen the most beautiful girls in the world while others said the princess were just as gd as their prince and they were well worthy of being bahus of teh aryvrath rajgarana

then soon after tehy reached there horse riding spot

Veer approached one of teh sainiks

Veer: jao humara khas ghoda lao aur Dharam ka bhi

while Agni on the otherhand dressed as a sainik comes to Veer's horse...he gave him something to drink...then agni goes away

Agni thinks to himself

Agni: iss madira ko peene ke badh ghoda bilkul hosh mein nahin hai aur Veer ko nusaan bhi poncha sakta hai aur usski jaan bhi le sakta hai...mein pitahji ko ye khush khabhri deh kar ata hoon

The sainik comes to DV and gives them a horse each...Veer;s special white one and Dharam's was his favourite brown pony

the boys begin their race but all of a sudden Veer's horse starts to jump...trying to knock Veer of...Veer clinged on shouting at the horse

Veer: Sheroo shant ho jao...Shant Sheroo

the horse finally managed to knock Veer off...Veer tryed calming it down only to provoke it further

Dharam realising soemthing was wrong took a U-turn and went back....Veer was single handedly trying to compete with a wild horse who injured him badly

Veer was now bleeding from his head and arm and back was hurt badly...the horse was about to step on Veer's chest when Dharam cames to the rescue and put the horse out of Veer's way...a few soldiers came...tehy all together managed to take teh horse away while Dharam rushed to Veer's side and checked his pulse

Dharam: veer ankheen kholo...dekho hum ah gaye hai..Veer

he picks him up and takes him to teh camp

Vishva and Sia looked shocked


Precap:

Veer is holding Vishva's hand and the two of the are walking around the mandir togther...making vows 😳


enjoy

Shona

Originally posted by: rock 2 d2v

I do not think u need 2 b reminded time and again wat a brilliant writer u r .thank u...im flatteredLast part was mindblowing.I am so happy for Dharam 😊 .yh Dharam ke bari lag gayiAb bas Veer ki shaadi ho jaye.yarr itni jaldi kya haiWhy I am getting a nasty feeling that the Pandit matching horoscopes is either bribed or is going 2 b killed very soon. 😡 no yar its nothing like that...pandit is doing 100% honest work...though thats a gd theory...knowing jai n agni
Anyways I will wait and watch.
Plz update soooooooooonnnnnn 😃 i've updated!

Originally posted by: hiri

awwww that was another lovely part shona dearthank u so much esha i would love to se veer and vishva as lovers ,goooooooooooooooddddddddddd. keep it up.me too
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hiri