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Rashmi

@aandhanika

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Posted: 17 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: cute sushi

@aandhanika srry bt i didnt no abt dat coz i jus got ndtv on friday i jus saw dat episode

Don't worry yaar this is our own story written by us... you just have to continue were the last person left out (that will be on page 86 were i last had post)

Read a few post by us then you will know what the story is about and that way you know how to continue the story

Edited by aandhanika - 17 years ago

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poulami

@priyanka1806

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Posted: 17 years ago

#662

@ vini nd rashmi...cudnt com here for long bcz of xams!😃😳

Nivriti to the maids....janamdin i saari taiyariyan perfect honi chahiye,akhir humari Sia ki b'day hain.😊 The maids...jee rani maa,hum apni taraf se poori koshish kar rahe hain.

Here back at the mela,

Veer and Shera went to the jhoola(swing) and Shera sat over there...Veer also joined her

shera-Veer,hum bilkul radha-krishna jaise lag rahe hain naa?😊😳

Veer-haan,tum sahi keh rahi ho....bas gopiyon ki kami hain

Shera-(in a naughty voice)V-E-E-R....🤔😳

Veer-im choo chorry shera...ab se main aisa nahi bolunga😳

Shera-Veer,ek gaana sunao naa...👍🏼

Veer-So veer sings " tumse hi din hota hain,surmayi shaam ati hain,tumse hi...❤️❤️❤️"(from JAB WE MET)

Shera rests head on Veer's shoulder...and both look very happy.😍😊

SANJAM...Vrinda,yeh chooriyan kitni khoobsurat hain na...these blue,glittering ones...lagta hain sagar ki gehrayion(depth) jaysa rang daal diya hain...😍😍😍

VRINDA...tumhe yeh chooriyan pasand hain,toh main inhe abhi kharid leti hoon...😊

SANJAM...main tumhe kharid ke dena chahta hoon...Vrinda...

VRINDA...aww...mere liye...I lov u so much sanjam...❤️❤️❤️

Circus is over😲😳...oops,sry rashmi pata nahi tha...😃

Edited by annie20 - 17 years ago

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Vinisha

@-Vinisha-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#663

@ annie - You can write ''mela'' instead of ''circus'' ...Ur description suits d mela Even...😃
Oh so ur exams wz goin On..! Hope yew havnt written one linerz der..Lol 😆...Hw were dey n wat bout de Results..?😊

@ aandhanika - Lol...Oh i missed VRinda n Sanjam...Will make it 5 Horses while posting d Whole Story ! 😛

Ol Enjoyed d mela and collected d Samagri as per told by Nivriti...n Nao Even Surprise Birthday Party Preparations Wz Olmost Dun...😃
Ol were going back...jus den Dharam find out Siya Is still sitting on d rock neaby so went to call her...and evryOne else wz olso Der waiting for dem !😊
Dharam - '' Kya Hua Siya ? 😕...Hum sab wapas jaa rahe..tum itni udaas kyu ho..?''
Siya [ Sad thinking no1 remembered bout her b'day,bt pretended as if evrythin iz fyn ]- '' nai kuch nai Dharam, Chalo varna der ho jayegi..''😊
Both of dem came back n ol of dem proceeded towards d mahal...😳
Siya wz feeling sad so she wz d first one to enter d mahal coz ol she wanted wz jus go to her rum n wz olmost on d verge to cry jus den...'' SURPRISE''🥳
Siya Totally shocked !!! 😲

RT_vinisha....!🤗
living for...😳😳😳
❤️RAJAT❤️forever

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poulami

@priyanka1806

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Posted: 17 years ago

#664

hey vinie...xams mein one liner nahi likh sakti na...otherwise my vote alwayz goes to one liners!!😆

my xam was good....since this was an internal test...its results wud b added to the main xam.....😊

And then everyone in cHorus sang" HAAPY BIRTHDAY TO U"

Ok...byeeee hav to go offline now...🥱🤗

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#665

@Vinisha Okay yaar no worry's we will make it to 5 horses
@Annie

Yeah i knew that you were bussy with your exam's as you had told me earlier about this ... now the only thing you have to do is tell us your results if you get them... and no sorry's yaar you all ready changed the 'circus' to 'mela'

Sia started to cry

Dharam- are yeh kya? tum kyun roh rahi ho?

Sia- woh..... kuch nahi

Dharam- bolo na.... or are you crying cause you thought we didn't remember that it is your birthday today?

Vrinda- darasel bhabie yeh nivitri bua kha plan tha... varna hum tumhe suba (in the morning) mein birthday wish karti...

Sapna- tumne kya laga khi meine apne bachpan khi saheli kha birthday phool gaya?

Veer- Sia babhi hum ab ek parivaar hai... and we keep every thing in mind even if it's something little... and we were planning your birthday sinds 2-3 weeks ago

Sia- 2- 3 weeks 😕

Shera- haan sia we wanted every thing to be perfect not even one thing should go wrong

Maharaj Natraj- sia beti yeh log tumhe mujhse saada pyaar karte.. yeh sach hai they were planning your birthday for a long time now.. itna saare tayaria humne khud nahi khi tumhari birthday keliye jitne yeh log khi hai

Sia nods her heads and had a bright smille on her face again... every one was happy seeing her laugh but then agni came and said

Agni- sia you know i also wanted to help but veer said that my ideas would be A SUPER DUPER FLOP!.

Sia- aisa kyun?

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poulami

@priyanka1806

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Posted: 17 years ago

#666

@rashmi...okie dear...no sorrys! actually the main xam is on Dec. ,so I wud get to know the internal xam marks at that time only...I tell U as soon as I get it😊

Veer-Agni,last time jab tumne Vrinda ki janamdin ki taiyariyan kiye the...tumne sab gadbad kar di thi....yaad hai

Agni...woh baat tho khatam ho chuki naa Sia...Veer,kya hua tha? Veer...pichli baar...Agni ne surprise b'day ke liye circus ke logon ko mahal laya tha entertainment ke liye....woh koi puppet-show walon ko bula sakta tha....koi dancing group ko bhi bula sakta tha....par usne circus walon ko bulaya....

Sapna...chalo ab baatein bandh aur Sia ka b'day manate hain....

Shera....ha chalo Sia...

Dharam...Sia,aj tum kitne saal ki ho gayi?

Sia...ladhkiyon se koi umar puchte hain kya...Dharam...

Dharam..hum toh mazaak kar rahe the

So everyone presesnt there Veer-Shera,Agni-Sapna,Sanjam-Vrinda,Dharam-Sia,maharaj Natraj,AV,Nivriti and all of them went to the place where Sia's b'day cake was kept....

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Rashmi

@aandhanika

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#667

@Annie

Ohok then don't worry i will wait .... yeah let me know 😉

It was a big round Chocolate cake specially made for sia as they all knew that Chocolate is her favorite flavor..

The cake was cut after they had sang the birthday song and now it was time for some dancing .... the first dance was performed by Dharam and Veer which they had exspecially learned for Sia

Edited by aandhanika - 17 years ago

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poulami

@priyanka1806

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Posted: 17 years ago

#668

arre wah rashmi.....u hav put very apt pixx.

Then a dance was performed by Shera,Vrinda and Sapna....

The song was bole churiyan...bole kangana...

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Vinisha

@-Vinisha-

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#669

@ annie - Lolz i think Ab Sab badhe ho gaye hai so inki shaadi karva deni Chahiye ! 😆
@ aandhanika - Great Huh...😃...Must add pix olso...😛

Siya's Birthday Wz Celebrated Wid Fun n Enjoyment !
Only One Week Wz Left 4 da Marriage...😳...On One Syd Gals Wz Tensed Thinking But Der New Life...😊
N Boys Were Over - Excited !😆

Nivriti n Da Other Queens Wz Handling Ol Kitchen Work...Checking Whu's Doin' Wat...& Ol d Work Related To Pooja n Ol...
DharamVEER had a Duty To Check Whether Da Decorations Are Gud Enuf Or Nt...n M aking Fun Of Wateva Agni Iz Doing !😆

Maharaj Av, Someshwar and Natrajan [ Sry If I've left any Maharaj 😆 ] Ol Contributed to Look after d Guests...

Da Gals Were Looking after Der Jewellery, Clothes n Ol So Dat Dey Dun Hav Any Probs Afterwards...
EveryOne Wz Busy Wid Der Works...

It Wz Night Tym...Da Mahal Truly looked as If Sumthing big n Royal is going On Inside...