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Posted: 12 years ago
It was a powerful and incredible update.
Loved it to core.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
So many updates together was wonderful to read it.You have been busy and have poured your heart out to this story. Amazing. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was a power packed update Akka👏..Shakti at her fierceful form..i want cvs to read your story to know how to show AdhiShakti in DKDM..
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Posted: 12 years ago
i want para shakti to be evoked again in this world of rapists..and jay you need to seek career in writing 4 sure
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Posted: 12 years ago
Om Sri Adiparashaktyai Namah
Really beautiful description of Bhagavati Adi Parashakthi (there are no adjectives to describe but I can't leave this box blank, can I😆)
And to top it all, the Devi Khadgamala Sthothram was fantastic! Filled with divine vibrations.
Can't wait.. Now itself biting my nails!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
OM SHAKTHI OM SHAKTHI OM SHAKTHI

Bhanasur sat on his throne contemplating his next move, when he felt the walls of the palace shake and pillars shifting.

He felt the heat increase inside his room trifold.

He heard screams from outside, he cursed angrily at being disturbed.

He walked out and almost into a huge wall of fire.

He stopped, and opened his mouth and blew at it, the huge gust of air from his mouth doused the fire.

Shakthi'''.

The roof of his palace broke open as he grew in size.

His feet crushed everyone like ants as he walked towards the ocean.

He picked up fleeing children and women and thrashed them to the ground killing them instantly,

He continued his destruction and rampage.

Children and women were the first ones to be attacked.

Shakthi trembled, she raised one hand and volcanoes erupted spewing fire and ash on Bhanasur.

Still he violated women and girls.

She raised her other hand Lightning bolts pierced through the clouds and rained down on an unstoppable Bhanasur.

Bhanasur''' she screamed, I am waiting''..

Your are getting impatient my dear, he said full of mirth.

Pure Evil faced Pure Good.

Each had its own power.

She brought down her feet on the earth, which parted steam and lava poured out of the wide open cracks.

He dipped his hand into the molten lava and smeared it on his chest.

You can do better than that shakthi? He mocked

Her bosom heaved in anger .


An orange circle of fire surrounded her.

Weapons each more deadlier than the other was sent and destroyed by both of them

The Earth groaned as water dried up, the trees died, birds stopped flying.

The green grass turned brown and lifeless.

The sun burnt down fiercely,

For 10 days the battle raged on.

The People cried.

Amma Parashakthi,

Om Shakthi

Om Shakthi

Om Shakthi

They chanted.

Her fury culminated as she heard their cries.

His arrogance reached its peak.

His ego felt that he had achieved the impossible,

Your weapons cannot pierce my Vajra Kavacham Shakthi .

With a finger he created a vaccum around him and Parashakthi.

Shakthi slowly transformed back into Kanya.

Giving up, eeehhh, I will take you within the confines of this cocoon he tittered.

She raised a single eye brow.

In one hand she held the Trishulam and in the other she had the damaroo.

Your Trishul is useless against my kavacham, it will not pierce nor can it burn it.

Shakthi looked around the cocoon. Bhanasur had just created his own death capsule

She threw back her head and laughed.

The tips of the trishul glittered,

Her eyes grew large and sparks flew out them.

Her teeth gnashed against each other.

She lifted the the damaroo and moved it playing the sound of death.

She circled around Bhanasur, whose Ego and Audacity had made him ignorant of the fact that Diamonds could burn in a Vacuum.

He hardly made a move to stop her, when she raised the three pointed weapon high above her head, her body on fire she brought it down on his heart.

Flames from her hands passed through to the tips of the Trishul igniting the Vajra Kavacham.

He screamed as he watched his kavacham catch fire.

Nooo' NOOO. He roared.

She lifted the trisul in both the hands and started the Rudra Tandavam around him.

Her feet beat down with a ferocity, blowing open the cocoon.

Bhanasur lay in the center, the Vajra kavacham was on fire, as the heat of diamond reached unimaginable proportion, he slowly burnt to death from within.

She continued to dance around his body.

Flowers rained down on her from the devtas.

OM SHAKTHI

OM SHAKTHI

OM SHAKTHI

The chants reached a crescendo.

Milk poured down from the heaves to calm down her anger.

OM ''..

OM''..

OM''..

SHANTHI''..

SHANTHI''.

SHANTHI''.

A million voices united.

She slowly came to a standstill.

The orange turned to a yellow and then to a cool white.

Her eyes became serene.

Her lips turned up in a smile.

Her Palm came up in a sign of blessing.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1jqMUkoFqwA[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok so end of the evil ..i want to see such kind of destruction of rapists
love you jaya for this again
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally Bhanasur is destroyed.
Thanks Akka, you made Shakthi dance in front of my eyes.😳
The Rudra Tandavam part was incomparable.
And how you combined science with Story!
👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

The imagination !! The difference in what you write when you are writing for Her ! Jaya, you need a standing 👏. I need to thank DKDM for giving me the opportunuty to discover this thread ! Not sure if it can happen here, but Meenakshi Sundareshwarar story by you will make for one awesome read. This needs to be published atleast as a blog to begin with. In these times, our girls need to be reminded of woman power.

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow Akka..it was outstanding..amazing..wonderful👏..End of evil..Thanks for writing such a beautiful story...you are really a ⭐️.

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