OS: Kanya Kumari [The Virgin Goddess] - Page 38

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Posted: 12 years ago
Kads u need to clear ur inbox i think.
Panchali thank u so much for the apppreciation.
thank u all girls and guys for encouraging me to write.
I promise ADLA will be updated soon.

Love u all darlings

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Posted: 12 years ago
Akka..as usual amazing👏..can feel the pain Shakti and Shivji has to go through.
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Posted: 12 years ago
FUTURE FORETOLD?

Taking a small trishul from his bag, he teasingly
placed it on her soft palm. Let me see? Aaaha looks like he is already here devi, he gently played on her palm with the Trishul...

You portrayed a very playful romantic part of Mahadev...never found Him Like this in the puraans 😊

An awesome hob as a writer 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago

Then

She turned towards the lecherous eyes. Her hair spread as a halo, the kumkum turned a deep red and caught fire, lips curled , eyes shimmering, she looked straight into his eyes.


Loved these lines the most from this part... 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
That was so painful...for both Shiv-Shakti... and for us too...!!

Very nicely written...Jaya...!! 😊😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful description of Vanasur and Devi!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
ADI PARASHAKTHI

He knew it was the Devtas trick that the Cock had crowed at an unearthly time.

He was enraged; he went into a frenzy as stomped around the Agni Kundam chanting his tantric spells.

I may not be Immortal, but I am invincible.

She will be mine.

Kanya'no weapon you have can stop me now.

He appeared in front of the temple.

Infuriated, he manifested himself in a more fearsome form.

His hair matted swept the ground.

His skin dark, sweat poured from every pore of his body.

Snorting like a bull he pawed the ground.

Kanya... he bellowed.

Shakthi sat without moving, except for her eyes that took in Bhanasur's appearance.

They looked at each other across the threshold.

He knew better than to step across.

She spoke her voice calm.

What is it you seek Bhanasur?

You''.

Her eyes flashed. Me????

Yes You Shakthi.. your shiva was unable to wed you, he crackled.

Her wrath increased' but

As you wish she said'.her eyes glinting.

Bhanasur eyes narrowed '.

He placed one foot on the threshold..

But'''.. she said'.

His foot in the air, he looked towards her'

You will have to win me ''.her voice serene and soft.

Uggghh ' he slapped his thigh,

You are calling for your own death Kanya'.

So be it'''.she replied.

Shiva gripped his Trishul and stood up , Vishnu and Brahma joined him.

Prepare yourself for battle Bhanasur.. her voice challenging.

I will be waiting on the shores of ocean.

If you win, I will be yours for eternity.

His laughter was heard long after he disappeared.

In deep meditation, she vibrated as the energy from her Kundalini chakras resonating through her.

The third eye of Mahadeva opened transferring his energy into his Shakthi.

The small delicate Kanya slowly transformed.

Brahmi

Chamundi

Kowmari

Indriani

Maheswari

Varahi

Vishnavi

Their combined shakthi moved into Kanya, and from her emerged

The all powerful.

Omnipotent,

Omnipresent,

Omniscient

Adi Parashakthi ,

The One with Eternally Limitless Power.

The Pure Pulsing Energy.

The lion stretched and roared next to her.

Shanku , Chakra , Tamarai [lotus], Bow, Trishulam, Mace, and sword floated into each of her eight hands.

Venomous snakes lay as garlands around her neck.

Her skin shimmered in shades of green, blue, black and white.

The third eye appeared on her forehead.

The rims of eyes were red as they flashed with anger.

She drew herself to her full form, the temple walls shrunk, her single step brought her to the shores of the ocean.

Her legs astride, hands on her hips.

Bhannnasssuuurrr''..

Her call reverberated as it echoed through his very being.

A fire ball hurtled from her third eye, calling for the battle to begin.

REQUESTING ALL OF U TO LISTEN.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TmKo72JSLac[/YOUTUBE]


Edited by jayvenk - 12 years ago
Arijit007 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
paahi maam paahi maam aadishakti, paahi maam paahi maam paraashakti.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jay fearsome powerful update. The Adishakti awakening was awwtastic. Waiting for the yudh update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
What an update akka 👏
This is how our revered Adi shakthi is supposed to be.Our Holy Grail.
Om Shakthi Parashakthi

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