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Kulsoom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Hey, amazing update👏Thanxx!

Loved the chapter⭐️Makes me happy :)

And the classroom scene was too good...loved it.Glad !

Glad that Maya won the bet.I am too

Wonder who Veer reminded Maya of?You'll get hints as the story proceeds😊😉

Overall it is very interesting and will be waiting for next update.Thankyou and will update as I get 5 Likes on till thurs.

Thanks for the pm😊Your'e welcome!

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ManVeerObsessed

Yeah I know As I too love writing😊Thankyou😊Yeah!I know.Some of the first chapters will be short..I will try to make them bbigger😃😉

Yeahhh I'm Very Well Of It Because I Too Had Done It... 😊 When I Was Very New To Post My Stories... 😊 And Now I Tried To Give Bigger Updates... 😊 And Comment For Chapter 2 Will Be Coming Soon... 😊 Plzzz Don't Mind If I'm Late.. 😊

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Kulsoom

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal

Yeahhh I'm Very Well Of It Because I Too Had Done It... 😊 When I Was Very New To Post My Stories... 😊 And Now I Tried To Give Bigger Updates... 😊 !!! And Comment For Chapter 2 Will Be Coming Soon... 😊(Excited to know what u think)Plzzz Don't Mind If I'm Late.. 😊 (Come on !It's kay)!

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Kulsoom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Yay!I saw 5+ likes and I am really glad about it😃Thanxx alot to all of you for liking and commenting on the update😊😳

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Kulsoom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

announcement

Those who want PMs,please like this post.It'll be easier for me to remember to PM you whenever I update because,earlier,you asked me for PM in replies and I can't read every reply again and again before sending PMs,right?

PS.It's not that I have any problem,it's just to make it easier for me to add specific people in my PM List!So don't mind please..

PSS.If there's anyone who I am sending a PM and that person doesn't want it or is getting bothered, please tell me so I stop!

The PM List:(like the post if u want the PMs and ur name wil be added in it)

JADEKKD
simi.k
maaneet786
Alisha_Ashiyal
PriAshKor123
humairaa1
ekra101
Sunsnow
rockstar4eva55
cnibir
cuteariya
Heemasomani

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Mahi/Wish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Important,please read...

Guys I am Mehwish,I am not active as much as you all over here becuz I am really busy in a course I am doing but it's finished now so thinking to be..Back to business!I am Kulsoom(ManveerObsessed)'s friend,I wanted to bring her message to you all.Her family was invited to a relative's house and they will return late so she told me to tell you and excuse on her behalf that she won't be able to update today However,she told me to post the Promo of Chap 3 that she gave me.So here goes..

Promo:

"Veer!Kia han kia?Acchi khasi life chal rahi thi, pata nahi konsa gunah tha mera jo god, aap ne mujhe iss Veer se mila dia.Uss se related har cheez mujhe uss ki yaad dilati hai.First those eyes..then the whole face,then that smirk and then the name???Ab shayad pata chale ga ke woh ek prince bhi hai..."

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Alisha Khan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

heyyy hows u... likes on ur story which were left pending r completed ...😊 and by the way for chap 3... 5+ likes r already registered...😊

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Kulsoom

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal
heyyy hows u... likes on ur story which were left pending r completed ...😊 and by the way for chap 3... 5+ likes r already registered...😊

Yeah I noticed and Thanxx!

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Kulsoom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Hello Guyzz😃!I am back with Chapter 3,did try to make it long,hope it is!😊

Hope the update is gud and long enough😊😳

Chapter 3:

"Veer!Kia Han Kia?Aakhir problem kia hai?Acchi khasi life chal rahi thi,pata nahi konsa gunah tha mera jo God,aap ne mughe iss Veer se Mila dia!Uss se related har cheez mujhe uss ki yaad dilati hai.First those eyes,then the smirk,then his dressing,then the whole face!Ab shayad pata chalega ke who ek prince bhi hai!"She said sitting on her room's bed as a tear rolled down her cheek."Ttheek hai bhai!Sabse last mein class mein aao aur pphir bet bhi jeet jaao!"She quickly wiped off the tear on her cheek as Lia's voice hit her ears.She turned around to see Lia as she came with some chips and soft drinks."Maan Lia tumhe Maya!"Lia said as she came and sat beside her."Woh to Hona hi tha!,As always I won!"Maya said smirking."Dill toh baht chah raha tha mera ke kucch Asia karun ke Miss Meg ko pata chal Jaye..."She was saying when Maya cut in:"Toh tum ne ek bet jeetne ke liye shikayati tattu banne Kia soch lia,grow up,Lia!"Lia ignored her and said:"Waise tumhe pata hai Maya,tumhe na Vicky aur mujh jaise dost dhoondne par bhi nahi milenge!Hum ne timhare liye apni iden.."Lia was saying but Maya cut in."Dost hote kiss liye hain??"Maya retorted carelessly.For a moment,Lia stopped eating and looked at her friend with an annoyed expression.She just shook her head."Tum bahut mean ho gayyi ho Maya!Jabse tumhe tumhara dost cchod kar chala gaya hai!"Lia said picking up the remote lying on the bed and switching on the TV.But what she didn't notice,was,that her sentence brought tears to Maya's eyes.She blinked away the tears and looked at Lia.She snatched the remote from Lia's hand and turned off the TV."Maya yeh Kia..."Lia started saying but stopped as Maya raised her index finger."You know what,Lia?Woh mujhe cchod kar nahi Gaya!In fact Woh tumhe,mujhe ya kisi ko cchod kar nahi Gaya!He has gone abroad for studying!And you'll see,you'll see,he'll come back!I mean how can he not?Humari family ke ilawa Uss ki apni family bhi wahan hai!"Her nose was red which indicated she was angry.Lia had a shocked expression on her face."Maya mera Woh matlab nahi tha,main to bas yun hi..."She started saying but Maya waved her hand at her.Maya got up from the bed,put on her boots and grabbed the jacket which was swinging on the doorknob.She stopped for a second and turned her head at Lia."Main Vicky ke dorm ja rahi Hun!"She said sternly and walked out of the room shutting the door behind her."Kab tak?Kab tak Khud se jhoot bolti raho gi,Man..Maya!!"Lia sighed after her..

Hope u liked it..😊😳(I am really nervous at this update😳)

PS.Now I'll update next sunday guyzz😊😉Only if I get 10+ likes😈

Edited by ManVeerObsessed - 10 years ago

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Name.Not.Important

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

very nice chapter but I am a bit confused
who is the person maya is talking about... is it Uday??
Who is Vicky??
Anyways thanks for pm and continue soon 😊
Once again the chapter was very cute and emotional 😊

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