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Originally posted by: ManVeerObsessed

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Originally posted by: simi.k.

Princess aise udas nhi hote... hum hain na aapke saath

Originally posted by: ManVeerObsessed

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Originally posted by: ManVeerObsessed

Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal

[FONT=times] Heyy Sis I'm Commenting From The Start...
Great Concept And Concept... 😊Thank you😊.
I Don't Know Whyyy But Vicky Character Seems To Be Not Good.. Don't Know..Arey!!Woh bilkul sahi hai,iss story mein koi villain ya bad guy nahi hai..😆.But Maybe U Would Had Given Little Intro In Chapters.. 😊Yeah I could but type karne mein bahut susti hoti hai..😆
Chapter 1 Was Quite Good..Thanxx😊. First I Thought Manyata Is In Chap 1 But As When I Read It Again I Was Wrong...No Manyata...Yeahhh...
Lia And Maya Convo Was Funny Specially The Very First Line Of Maya... 😆.Thanxx again😊.

"Tumse kitni baar kaha hai ke mera wait kia karo,par nahin!Tumhare kaanon par joon tak nahi rengti." Was Indeed Amazing... 😆 🤣 Thanxx alot,sis😃.
And Awww Maya Fall On Ground By Paper Ball Anddd Ohhh OMG HERE TOO MAYA ...Maya didn't fall by a paprball,a paperball fell because it hit Maya😆. Hahahahahahaha ...🤣 Poor That Guy Maya Ne Acha Sabaq Sikhne Ki Koshish Ki...Yeah!!


Chapter 2
OMG First Boy Started And Again Maya's Words Were Speechless...Thank you!

ress updating..Huh?What does this mean😕

Originally posted by: ManVeerObsessed

Didn't u read chapter 3😲?Well if not then plzz do and hit like😊

ahhh actually im watching my serial meri aashiqui sirf tumse and after that i would continue my comment... hope u dont mind... 😊😊😊

By the way,thanxx alot for ur precious comment and compliments 😊

Heyy Sis I'm Commenting From The Start...
Great Concept And Concept...
I Don't Know Whyyy But Vicky Character Seems To Be Not Good.. Don't Know.. But Maybe U Would Had Given Little Intro In Chapters..
Chapter 1 Was Quite Good.. First I Thought Manyata Is In Chap 1 But As When I Read It Again I Was Wrong...No Manyata...
Lia And Maya Convo Was Funny Specially The Very First Line Of Maya...

"Tumse kitni baar kaha hai ke mera wait kia karo,par nahin!Tumhare kaanon par joon tak nahi rengti." Was Indeed Amazing...
And Awww Maya Fall On Ground By Paper Ball Anddd Ohhh OMG HERE TOO MAYA ... Hahahahahahaha ... Poor That Guy Maya Ne Acha Sabaq Sikhne Ki Koshish Ki...


Chapter 2
OMG First Boy Started And Again Maya's Words Were Speechless again "English jhadne ki zarurat nahi hai,London mein bhi tumhare hamwatan ho sakte hain"...

and she got late for her bet and 15 mins... and wow getting into library she relaxed was ahhh
and woww paperball boy was her class fellows.. and ."Oye teri!Tum idhar kia kar rahe ho?"She questioned him."Kyun?Kia classroom mein,jo logon ko padhane ke liye banaya gaya hai na ke sone ke liye..uss mein enter hone se pehle tumse pucchna pade ga?"

their convo wasss ahhh very entertaining... so it was Veer... hmmm... amazinggg...

Chapter 3
seriously in chap 3 maya dialogues r hilarious... shikayati tattu lolzzz

"You knowwhat,Lia?Woh mujhe cchod kar nahi Gaya!In fact Wohtumhe,mujhe ya kisi ko cchod kar nahi Gaya!He has gone abroad for studying!And you'll see,you'll see,he'll come back!I mean how can he not?Humari family ke ilawa Uss kiapni family bhi wahan hai!"

i dont know here maya words seems like to me that she is talking about uday... but how uday and maya met and why lia told that woh tumhe chod kar chala gaya hai... sis will u disclose this secret...

and now this line is confusing me... "Kab tak?Kab tak Khud se jhoot bolti raho gi,Man..Maya!!" aur is update main kya hua kuch samj nae aya until u wont disclose the past.. which i guess is connected with uday ...

Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal