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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyyy Its Very Nice To See That U R Writing A Story... 😊
And The Character Sketch And Chapter 1 U Wrote Was Brilliant... 😃 And Lovely Conversations... 😊
Buy The Story Was Short...😔 But No Worries When U Post Next Chapter Make It Little Bit Longer... 😊
And Thank U For Updating... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey, I'm Humairaa... 😊
First I just want to say Welcome to the forum and if you need any help do let me know
Second the story is very interesting
Loved the concept and the title sounds very interesting...
Loved the character sketch⭐️
Read Chapter one and it was amazing so please do continue soon
Loved the convo between Maya and Lia and Maya's personality
Loved how she threw the paper ball back on the boy that threw it, other it was unintentional, on her❤️
Quite excited to know who the boy is although I have a feeling that it is none other than Veer
Beautifully written👏
Please do update soon
Thanks for the pm 😊
And please do continue sending me pms whenever you update😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simi.k.




Tomorrow is here... Where is the update? I am waiting Desparately 😊 😉


Posting it after awhile.😳.😊😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: alisha_ashiyal

Heyyy Its Very Nice To See That U R Writing A Story... 😊
And The Character Sketch And Chapter 1 U Wrote Was Brilliant... 😃 And Lovely Conversations... 😊
Buy The Story Was Short...😔 But No Worries When U Post Next Chapter Make It Little Bit Longer... 😊
And Thank U For Updating... 😊


Yeah I know As I too love writing 😊Thankyou😊Yeah!I know.Some of the first chapters will be short..I will try to make them bbigger😃😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey, I'm Humairaa...Nice to meet you.LOL! 😊

First I just want to say Welcome to the forum and if you need any help do let me know Thanxx alot for asking 😊
Second the story is very interestingThanxx again😊
Loved the concept and the title sounds very interesting... Thanxx again+again no.2😆
Loved the character sketch⭐️SO SWEET OF YOU😃
Read Chapter one and it was amazing so please do continue soon Gonna update in awhile
Loved the convo between Maya and Lia and Maya's personality I also luv her
Loved how she threw the paper ball back on the boy that threw it, other it was unintentional, on her❤️ me too likey!!!!
Quite excited to know who the boy is although I have a feeling that it is none other than VeerHMMM...You'll see!
Beautifully written👏 Aww..thanxx!
Please do update soon Gonna update in awhile 😊😉
Thanks for the pm 😊 Your'e welcome 😃
And please do continue sending me pms whenever you update😉 I will😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continuing...

  • CHAPTER 2:

"Was it you who threw it?"He asked coldly.But she didn't hear what he was saying.She was too busy endeavouring those eyes of his.The eyes that reminded her of a person who was so much to her..the person she loved more than even herself."Who was he?.."A question took place in her mind."Was it you who threw it".He asked again with a hint of annoyance in his voice and ths time,it was even more colder.That was enought to break Maya's trance.She looked away and then looked back.She was sure about onething.The guy may not be him,but he was an indian."English jhadne ki zarurat nahi hai,London mein bhi tumhare hamwatan ho sakte hain".She straightened her back and snapped.For a moment she noticed he was surprised but then recovered."Excuse me?"He said with a confusion+ager+more-anger-than-confusion expression."Excused!"She replied as she couldn't care less and walked away leaving the guy shaking his head at her back.She looked at him from the corner of her eye and saw that he was busy gathering his stuff in a hurry and stared running."Lia ki bet ka to is Halkat ki waja se bhool hi gayyi.15 minute late kara dia hai..God,bas teacher ne attendance na li ho!"She said in her breath as she reached the Library.She quietly reached tthe chairs at the back and sat at one of them.She was here just to try her luck.If the attendance wouldn't have been taken then she'll say present and win the bet and if the attendance was already taken then..."Khair hai".She said as she thought."Wuthering Heights was a literature novel written by Emily Bronte in the year..."She yawned as the teacher spoke.She put both her legs on the chair next to her,put her head on her bag and closed her eyes."Yeh classroom hai!"She was lying there without a care in the world when a voice hit her ears.She opened one of her eyes to see the paperball-guy standing.Her eyes shot open."Oye teri!Tum idhar kia kar rahe ho?"She questioned him."Kyun?Kia classroom mein,jo logon ko padhane ke liye banaya gaya hai na ke sone ke liye..uss mein enter hone se pehle tumse pucchna pade ga?"He replied in a very serious tone."Oye.."She opened her mouth to say when he waved his hand."Tumse baatein karne nahi aaya!Jiss chair pe tum itne aram se barahejaman ho na,uss pe mujhe bethna hai."He smirked."He's hot.."She thought then made a mental note to kick herself later."HUMH!"She snorted and sat properly on her chair."Okay students,attendance!"The teacher said."Yes"Maya squealed slowly but not very slowly which made the PPB-Guy look at her like she was the 8th wonder but she ignored."Maya Agarwal"A name was called out."Present"She said..a little too excitedly!"Maya..Naam accha hai..par insan acchi nahi hai."The PPB-Guy muttered."Veer Giri".Another name was called out and then Maya heard the guy next to her say "Present!".Maya slowly moved her head to the PPB-Guy guy's side and said slowly."Veer???"
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hope the update was good enough...😊😳
I want 5 likes on this chap😃,if I get them,chp 3 will be posted on Thursday😊😉.Sorry but I'll be busy tomorrow..😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey dear the chapter was very nice 😊
Veer reminded maya of someone.. who is he ?
and the class room scene was hilarious 🤣
Maya won the bet atlast 😆
The story is getting very interesting... Please do update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: simi.k.

Hey dear the chapter was very nice 😊Thanxx dear 😊
Veer reminded maya of someone.. who is he ?The story ahead or may I say..the story behind the scenes may tell..😊😉
and the class room scene was hilarious 🤣Yeah!
Maya won the bet atlast 😆OF COURSE SHE DID!
The story is getting very interesting... Please do update soon 😊I will,after 5 likes on thursday😃😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey, amazing update👏
Loved the chapter⭐️
And the classroom scene was too good...loved it
Glad that Maya won the bet
Wonder who Veer reminded Maya of?
Overall it is very interesting and will be waiting for next update
Thanks for the pm😊

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