... FEAR MAKES LOVE .... manveer ff chapter 3 new update pg 17 _^

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kritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: mimi.maik
hey dear the 1st chappy was so0o0o great...i really loved it 😃

manyata is a very dreamy girl...while reading i felt like i am reading myself 😆jay is also amazing in this SS . and jagat is intrsted in manayat 😡 and uday is a kind of don. but seriously u did a very great job...enjoyed it to the core. 👏
thanks 4 the p.m and do continue so0o0o0on...love u and hugs. 🤗

hey sweety thanqu so much i m glad u love it ya she is a dreamy n bubbly cute sweet type aww so it means i m writing a story on u 😆😆ya she is a best frnd of manyta she also bubbly n alwayz excited type he havee intrest of her well she is the one who never gave attention on him so thats the eason he have intrst on her well his ego hurt couz of manyta ya he is .. a hawt stuff don lol😆😆 thatnx alot i will pm u ...n love to ... n hugs more 🤗

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kritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

wait for update ... 😳

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

hi , I am Sanghita Dey . I am a active member of Madhubala-Ek ishq ek junoon (colors), Geet (star one) , Buddy Project (channel V) , Laagi tujhse lagan (colors) , Pyaar ki ye ek kahani (star one) ...I was a huge fan of dekha ek khwaab , especially manyata & uday's jodi attracted me...manyata's feisty nature & uday's charm was the main attraction in the show...I was reading the stories of manveer & ur story concept amazed me...plz accept my buddy request & pm me from now onwards all ur works...I will love to comment...I am busy upto 2nd feb , but still I will manage to comment ur stories ...waiting for ur response...😊

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kritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
hi , I am Sanghita Dey . I am a active member of Madhubala-Ek ishq ek junoon (colors), Geet (star one) , Buddy Project (channel V) , Laagi tujhse lagan (colors) , Pyaar ki ye ek kahani (star one) ...I was a huge fan of dekha ek khwaab , especially manyata & uday's jodi attracted me...manyata's feisty nature & uday's charm was the main attraction in the show...I was reading the stories of manveer & ur story concept amazed me...plz accept my buddy request & pm me from now onwards all ur works...I will love to comment...I am busy upto 2nd feb , but still I will manage to comment ur stories ...waiting for ur response...😊

thanx alot dear for ur lovely comment n ya i will pm u for sure n i m happiee to see a manveer its 2 years left when dek ends n thanx for this forum we guyz r still here so thanx alot for lovely response for my story ... 😃

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kritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: Lovelydrops
nice update...thanks for pm...

thanx alot 😊😊😊

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kritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: nature2
nice concept yr!

thanx yr 😃

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kritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: tazeen...
Superb update

thanx 😳😳😳

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kritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Nash..
hey kritz, please dont mind but i think your present title is also awesome," Fear makes Loves". It very compelling and appealing. So please isse rehne do and Don toh already UV is. A hot dashing DON.

PS: once again," Awesome Job"

thanx alot still mai iska naam nhi badal rhi kyu ki isse acha response aa rha hai 😛😛 so naam badlne wala screen cancel huh 😉😉

PS: thanx a lot dear ... 😳😳

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kritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: fireroad99
I JUST LOVE UDAY'S LAST LINE AND UDAY AS GANGASTER NICE I LOVE IT
THEIR LOVESTORY IS GOING TO BE UNIQUE CAN'T WAIT FOR THEIR FIRST MEETING
I HOPE ITS SOMETHING LIKE HOW THEY MET IN THE SHOW

i m glad u like it ... thanx alot bhena 😉😉 last line yup that was my also fav line uday as a gangster for me litreally a hwat stuff love story its like unique but u love it for sure huh their first meeting more than funny not like that but something mixture n u really like it 😉😉😉 tum logo ka taste pta hai mujhe 😆😆