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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey di, how you? 😊

hey sweets i m good
Sorry for late reply
its kk dear... 😳😳😳
Update was superb ⭐️
Beautifully written 👏
thanx alot 😳😳
Loved it loads
thanx 😳😳😳
Loved the diary part and the flashback
i m glad u like it
Thanks for the pm 😊
ur welcome

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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
hey guyz wats up I M REALLY HAPPIEE FOR UR RESPONSE NOT THAT HAPPIEE 😉😉 but i m glad u like my concept thanx alot ... so here i update next chappy yuppiee 🥳lol is that i m excited for my next chappy YO haahahhaaha so here u guyz read it ... 😳😳

FEAR MAKES LOVE

chapter 2

dear dairy ...

its just beginning when i meet him it was weird funny n romentic also firstly i m scared but when i met that choclaty brown eyez its MAGICAL ☺️ THAT EYEZ NEVER FORGETABLE WHEN I LOOK AT THOSE EYEZ I FEEL LIKE M i gone be FAINT HERE RIGHT NOW IS THAT FOR ME AWWW I LOVE IT WAIT A SEC AGAIN I M GOING TO BE A DRAMA QUEEN WELL come to the point where i m ? ya our first meeting (control manyta control she wispered to herself she take a breath in she take a breath out n again start writing ) i rember that day its dean b'day 22nd jan that everyone was ready for a party n i m GS of a collage so all responsibilty in my hands ... i do my work work n work ... but now again he was irritate me n i just ignore him like he was not existing but i never dream not in my wildest dream that he did something like this huh !! i thiink he was just irritating but NO HE IS CHARACTERLESS TOO ... 😡😡

FLASH BACK

DOING UR WORK GUYZ DOING UR WORK !!!
someone pull her waist n when manyta try to shout
some one take hancky on her mouth it was chloroform ... in a sec she going to faint

...

BHAI AAPSE KOI MILNE AYA HAI
HE WAS SITTING oN A CHAIR N LUK AT HIS PHN
KON ?

jagat rathod ...

smrick appeared on his face

ANDAR BHEJO !! (he was continuesly luking at his phn)

JAGAT ENTER HE LUK AT HIM

TUMHE MERA EK KAAM KARNA HOGA OR JITNA PAISA CHATE HO USSE DUGNA DUGA

uday didn't luk at him hewas continuesly luking at his phn

he says wid smrick

ESA KONSA KAAM KARWANA HAI JISKE LIYE APNI SAARI DOLATH LUTVAANA CHATE HO ..

HUH!! VO he try to speak but cut by uday

LADKI !!! LADKI KA MAMMLA ... he luk at jagat wid confident look

JAGAT WID CONFUSED LOOK

how u know that?

uday giggled for his question

RAGHU !!

JI BHAI !!

TUJH PTHA HAI LADKI BHOTH KAMINI CHIZ HOTI HAI he take his wisky n look at a glass ...
JAB ZINDGI MAI ATI HAI THO JANNAT BNA DETI HAI OR JAB SALA CHODKAR JATI THO JHNUM
(U NOE GIRLS LIKE A BITCH he take his wisKy n look at a glass WHEN SHE COME IN UR LIFE UR LIFE WOULD BE A HEAVEN N WHEN SHE GO ITS LIKE A HELL )

ISLIYE APNI ZINDGI MAI LADKI PE BHROSA MAT KARNA as he look at jagat (thats y in ur life do not trust any women)
jagat just smrick n say

U NOE WHAT PHELE MAI BHI YAHI SOCHTA THA PAR WO KUCH OR HAI JAB USSE DEKHTA HU THO APNE AAP DIL DHADKNE LAGTA HAI MAI KYA JAB TUM USE DEKHO GE TUMHARA DILL BHI DHADKEGA MERE DIL KI TRHA (U NOE WAT WHEN I SEE HER MY HEART IS BEATING FORGET ME WHEN U SEE HER UR HEART ALSO BEATING AS LIKE MY HEART)

UDAY VEER SINGH KA DIL KABHI NHI DHADKEGA KISI KE LIYE BHI NHI...(UDAYVEER SINGH HEART NEVER BEAT FOR ANYONE ELSE )

WE WILL SEE MR. UDAYVEER SINGH he just stand up turn to go outside when he stop ...

WAT IS HER NAME that voic come from behind

jagt smrick n say

RAJKUMARI MANYTA KUMARI

...

MANYTA OPEN HER EYEZ SLOWLY SLOWLY n she is on chair her hands tied wid rope n her legs also she try to shout but how her mouth covered wid hanky n that situation i say that she is officially kidnapped ...
manyta thought ...

WHERE THE HELL I M ? IS THAT I M DREAMING ? YA I M DREAMING !! THAT IS A DREAM NOTHING ELSE THAT WAS MY WILDEST DREAM SO CHILL SOMEONE WAKE ME UP SOMEONE WAKE ME UP WHY THE HELL I M NOT WAKEUP IS THAT I M SLEEP LIKE KUMKARAN OH COMON SEEMA WAKE ME UP ...

N SOMEONE SHOUT

RAGU BHAI CHIKNI UTH GAYI

MANYTA THOUGHT

CHIKNI ... HE CALL ME CHIKNI HOW DARE HE? I M RAJKUMARI MANYTA NOT CHIKNI CHAMELI ...HUH!! HOW HE CAN CALL ME CHI...K...NI HUH IDIOT !!!

RAGHU: THIK HAI BHAI KO BTA DE

MANYTA THOUGHT

AB ISKA BHI BHAI HAI EK MAA NE KITNE BACHE PAIDA KIYE HAI ...HAD HAI .. AB PTA CHALA INDIA MAI ITHNI POPULATION KYU HAI ?

...

BHAI LAdki KO HOSH AA GAYA HAI !!

FINE MUJHE USE MILNA HAI !!

JI BHAI ...

...
RAGU OPEN HER MOUTH

ye le khana kha le

WAT DO U MEAN KHANA KHA LE PYAAR SE NHI BOL SAKTE ORDER KESE DE SAKTE HO MUJHE ... OR MaI TUMHARA ORDER KYU MANUGI ... HUH STUPID !! as she luk at another side

dekh khana kha le ...

HUH !! JAB TAK TUM MUJHSE PYAAR SE NHI BOLTE NA KHANE KO HATH TAK NHI LGAUNGI

DEKH DIMAG KI DHAI MAT KAR

WHAT TUMHARE DIMAG MAI DAHI BANTI HAI EWWW !!! MAI YHA KA KUCH NHI KAHUNGI JAB DAHI DIMAG MAI BANTI HAI THO KHANA KHA BANTA HOGA !!!

HE SMACK HIS HAND ON HIS FORHEAD ...

HE THOUGHT SAHI KHETE HAI BHAI ladkiya pagal hoti hai inka dimag sirf makeup pe chalta hai or kahi nhi
dekh tujhe khana hai tho kha nhi khana tho mat kha teri marzi ...

he turn his face

FINE I EAT THAT ...STUFF

wat u call this

ragu : WADAPAO

MUJHE YE SADAPAO NHI KHANA KUCH CHINES LAO

ABEY OYE !!! TERA BAAP KA RESTRO KHOL KE NHI BETHA HU YHA PE !!!😡😡😡

AYEEE BAAP PE MAT JANA .. SHE LUK AT HIM WID ANGRY LUK

he control his anger

JO MIL RHA HAI KHA LE VARNA VO BHI NHI MILEGA JO MIL RHA HAI

FINE MUJHE PANI CHAIYE !!

he gave a bottel to her

IS THAT MINROL WATER OR NORMAL

he just smack his hand on his forhead
...
WHERE THE HELL WE R GOING ?

PICNIC PE JA RHE HAI NOW JUST SHUT UP ragu was litreally irritated ...

he put her down her eyes were closed couz he tied some hanky on their ...he go out of there manyta was resting in bed manyta was not move couz her hand was tied n her leg also she try to open that rope but still fail ...suddenly a voice come is that someone open the door manyta try to seat but fail ...
uday was standing front of door n watching her all action he go toward her manyta's heart beat faster like more than normal beat is that she noe's someone coming toward her ...he seat closed to her he open her leg when he touch his leg is that some current pass their manyta shivered for once n here he closed his eyez actually he just control himself he open her hands softly when he try to open it there lips were inches a part uday just again closed his eyez ... when he open her eyez he met a brown big eyez who was looking him so innocently n first time ever ...

dhak dhak dhak dhak his heart is beating

uday's thought wat is that ?



KRITZ 😳😳😳




















Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64


🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣...It was really funny...so many bhai..thatswhy India has so much population..🤣🤣...n also that Dahi part...


But this was very less..Itna chota update...this is cheating..next time long update hona chahiye...😡😡😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
oh my god... such a good update kritz 😊

i like that over population dlog 😳

n tht statemet to mind blowing agar dahi dimag me banta hai khana kaha banta hoga 😆 that was hilarious 😆

wadapao sadapao 😆

raghu now gone... 😃 wd tht tantrums of RAJKUMARI MANYATA 👏

i liked how Uday reacts when he touched Manyata 😳😳😳😳

nice update again 👏👏👏👏

thnx fr d pm... n update soon...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊


Edited by marium-zamamii - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
love it
its amazing was the uday's heart was beating
so i had a question we are reading manyta's diary right?
this is the flashback
like telling us how uday and manyta meet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
hey tis is amazing...
luv it...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Wow graphics
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
awesome update...hawty uday is a gangster & he has been assigned with a task of kidnapping manyata that too by that jerk...😡...but I guess uday will be ultimately his saviour & will save manyata from that jerk...manyata & raghu scene is damn funny...😆...& I am very eager to read manveer scenes after reading that both are affected by each other's touches...😳...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
gr8 job...ur a gr8 writer yaar...keep it up...aur tu mujhe aise hi pm karte rehna...ok ...
most cute part was uday and manyatas part...loved the part of their lips inch apart😳☺️
a big hug🤗for tera work

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