... FEAR MAKES LOVE .... manveer ff chapter 3 new update pg 17 _^

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Hey di, how you? 😊
Sorry for late reply
Update was superb ⭐️
Beautifully written 👏
Loved it loads
Loved the diary part and the flashback
Thanks for the pm 😊

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: nishaya...
Really nice update Kritika!

"Udayveer singh kisi ko bhi 2nd chance nahi deta", i loved this line... SUPERRRBB

thanqu so much its really mean to me i m glad u like it alot

n ya that was my also fav line uday veer singh kisi ko second chance nhi deta its he luk like hawt stuff ...DON n i think i should change my story title for ... him as he luk like sharukhan in don n he is a sexy Don ... 😳😳😳

ps: thanx for comment sweety ... its really mean to me thanqu so much for read this story 😳😳

Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Nice chappy Kritz...I loved ur concept n also the story title..Uday ko Prince dekh dekh ke bore ho chuki hu...Good tht he is a gangster..A HOT GANGSTER😉☺️...Ummm..Yummmy!!😆😆

hey gargi thanqu so much love i m glad u read it n take a time for my story aaww thanqu so much u like my concept n story title but litreally i told u something the story title its really difficult for me i mean i m litreally confused 😕😕 wat should i take a name for this story its like GANGSTER VS YUVRANI n in this story uday didn't luk like a munna bhai mbbs he luk like don2 like sharukh khan ... 😉😉 n than my mind bulb on n than i think gangster mean fear every one scared of gangster so this title just stuck on my mind FEAR MAKES LOVE ...

PS: U NOE WAT GRAGI I ALSO TIRED WITH PRINCE SO I TAKE MY ALL FUSTRATION IN THIS STORY 😉😉

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Jane523
superb dear
continue soon

THANQU SO MUCH SWEETY 😳😳

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
awesome update yar loved it loads
specially Uday!!

AAWWW THANX MAHI I M GLAD U LIKE MY HAWT GANSTER 😉😆😆

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: marium-zamamii
Thnx fr d pm dear... superb update... waiting for mamveer moments... n tht jerk jagat is mad or what... ghamandi kahi ka... update soon

AWW ITS KK SWEETY THANQU SO MUCH ... well just wait n watch how they meet lol he have just attitude he want manyta couz she never gave attention on him n that was his ego problem that he never accept her rejection ... n in next update u really thank full to him 😆😆

ps: thanks for comment sweety

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Surish

THANQU SO MUCH

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: huma12.
Fantastic kritzz

THANQU HUMA 😳😳

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Nishaya

@Nash..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: -Kritika-

thanqu so much its really mean to me i m glad u like it alot


n ya that was my also fav line uday veer singh kisi ko second chance nhi deta its he luk like hawt stuff ...DON n i think i should change my story title for ... him as he luk like sharukhan in don n he is a sexy Don ... 😳😳😳


ps: thanx for comment sweety ... its really mean to me thanqu so much for read this story 😳😳

hey kritz, please dont mind but i think your present title is also awesome," Fear makes Loves". It very compelling and appealing. So please isse rehne do and Don toh already UV is. A hot dashing DON.

PS: once again," Awesome Job"

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
hey tis is amazing...
luv it...
very inrteresting...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

thanqu so much for liking this ... wow i m happy u waiting for my chappy 😆for sure i will pm u 😃😃😃