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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guyz i m so sorry for not reply ur comments ... i m litreally bizy in those day so today i have time to write a 1 chapter of fear makes love ... so guyz if u like it so plz press like button n do comment because ur comments really mean to me ... so plz for god sake guyz do comment n like both N GUYZ THIS IS UR NEW YEAR GIFT 😳😳 HAPPIEE NEW YEAR ...

fears makes love

chapter 1

dear dairy ...

i noe i m wrong but wat can i do i m changed because of him today i fight with bhai because of him ... i really care about him ? or its just i m too much thinking ? i noe this is really strange feeling in my heart when he close to me my heart beat stop beating when he look at me wid his choclaty brown eyez its i can't alborate wat is that when he say something litreally my ears stop listening n when he touch me i loose my consiousness its felt magical i noe its filmy but srsly its really happened to me i m changed ... that is not me i mean i m not any more manyta kumari i m behaving like daily soap drama queen who i hate the most ... well its not my fault its starting by him if he never kiddnaped me so i never meet him n i never changed ... when i meet him i think he is a dabang hero like (SALMAN KHAN)😳😳 when i noe he is a main boss who kidnapped me he luk like a dhoom 2 villan (HRITIK ROSHAN) 😳😳😳 for me well i don't think so he is (ABIHAKE BACHAN) 😳😳 because he is litreally too smart ... my life gone changed that day ... when i slapped that busted on his his face ... he is none other than jagat rathod in my collage every girl want him i don't noe why girls fall on him i mean he have litreally nothing he is not intelligent he iss not smart enough n he just kk nothing else he have just one thing a power of money amir baap ki bigdi aulad his dad is buisness tycon ... so wat i m yuvrani manyta of devghar no one can flirt wid me widout my permission haa nhi tho ... i never do this act i m alwayz clam but that day he crossed his limit he proposed me in front of whole damn collage its too irritating n that day I slap him i feel so good n i think he never irritate me again BUT I M WRONG...

FLASH BACK...

some one pull her wrist ...

LEAVE ME JAGAT U JERK

i can't princess i can't ... wat i want i get it

REALLY ? SO WAT CAN I DO ? (she said luk at straight in his eyez )

LUK MANYTA KUMARI U SLAP ME FRONT OF WHOLE DAMN COLLAGE N ITS MY PROMISE TO U ... I MARRY U N NO ONE CAN STOP ME !! ( he luk her straight into her eyez)

manyta brust out laugh in front of him

he luk like her like wat is funny face !!

manyta luk at him why r u not go in comedy show like kapil wid comedy nights its better to u ... n listen to me very clearly IF U R JAGAT RATHOD THAN NEVER FORGET THAT I M YUVRANI MANYTA KUMARI OF DEVGAR I M NOT A COMMNER NOW LEAVE MY HAND MR. U HAVE NO RIGHT ON ME

HE LOOSE HIS GRIP !!

manyta luk at him n said GOOD BOY !!! wid smrick

she go anther side

jagat :U R MINE PRINCESS U R MINE !!!

FLASH BACK ENDS ...

I THINK NOW EVEYTHING WILL BE ALRIGHT BUT AGAIN I M WRONG ...

FLASH BACK ...
MANYTA MANYTA MANYTA !!!

J PLZ STOP SHOUTING I M NOT A DEAF !!!

kk sorry meri maa ... !!!

ITS KK meri aunty !!!

wat AUNTY ? MAI AUNTY ? THO TU DADI JI LE !!!

J HUM AUNTY MAA DADI KA GAME BADH MAI KHEL LENGE TU YE BTA TU YHA KYA KARNE AAI THI ?

manyta he n me going a party tonight jay jump on the floor n manyta also join her wid excitment

manyta: who ??

j: akash!!! (wid exitment)

manyta stop jumping n she luk at her wid srs luk

j why r u stop ?

AKASH VERMA THAT JERK'S BEST FRND !!!

J: jerk ? (confuse luk)

manyta: JAGAT RATHOD !!!

J:comon manyta he fall on u first day of collage n u never gave attention on him !!

manyta: because he is nothing for me he is just a jerk nothing else !!

j: comon he is hawt stuff !!!

manyta: luk at her wid confuse luk WHO THE HELL R U TALKing ABOUT JAGAT OR HAWT ? HAWT WORD NEVER SUIT ON HIM HE IS JUST JOKER FOR ME

J: THAN WAT KIND PRINCE CHARMING U WANT ? PRINCESS !!

HIS CHARM WOULD BE LIKE IAN SOMERHALDER

IN OTHER SIDE...

bhai kaam ho gaya ... sab kuch vvesa hi hua jese aap chate the
GOOD !! his eyez will be visible choclate brown eyez ... he luk at him n said ab vese hi hoga jese mai chata hu par bhai adu bhai ke gang ke admi humare adde pe ana chate hai BHAI app bolo tho salo ko vahi tokh dete hai !!!

ABHI NHI !!! MAI UNHII KE ADDE PE JAKE UNHE THOKNA CHATA HU .. now hhis hand will be visible who is resting on his knees

IN OTHER HAND ...

tho tu chati hai ki log us bande ka charm dekh kar behosh ho jaye !!

manyta: ha esa hi kuch !!!

or vo SALMAN KHAN ki trha DAMBANG hona chaiye !!!

j: or vo kisliye ?

manyta: kyu ki us JERK JESE LOG MUJHSE KAFI DUR RHE

IN OTHER HAND ...

BHAI YAHI HAI VO BANDA JISNE ADDU BHAI KI GANG KO HUMARE ADDE KE BARE MAI BTAYA HAI

mujhe maaf kardo bhai mujhe maaf kardo ...

his face was not visible because if dim light n said teri akhri kwaish kya hai ?

BHAI MUJHE MAAF KARDO ... !!

a man who was standing coming on his way n take his collar n shout on him

BHAI KO DHOKA DEGA TU BHAI KO ...

he put out his gun

yahi thok dalunga tujhe ... !!!

RAGU !!! (THAT VOICE MAKE STOP HIM )

PAR BHAI !!!

CHOD USE ... !!

HE LEAVE HIS COLLAR !!!

IN OTHER SIDE ...

OR ?

BAS YR VO JESE BHI HO SIRF MUJHSE PYAAR KARE (she said in a sweet voice)

IN OTHER HAND

SMRICK WOULD BE APPEARED ON HIS FACE N LUK AT THAT PERSON WID EVIL SMRICK

he stand up n go close to that man n suddenly his face visible


UDAY VEER SINGH KISI KO BHI 2ND CHANCE NHI DETA ... !!!

NOW I M DONE WID 1ST CHAPTER HOWZ IT GOOD OR BAD DO COMMENT N LIKE ... N IF U WANT 2ND CHAPTER SO PLZ ITS A HUMBLE REQUEST DO LIKE BUTTON THAN I WILL UPDATE 2ND CHAPTER ...

KRITZ 😳😳😳







Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really nice update Kritika!

"Udayveer singh kisi ko bhi 2nd chance nahi deta", i loved this line... SUPERRRBB
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice chappy Kritz...I loved ur concept n also the story title..Uday ko Prince dekh dekh ke bore ho chuki hu...Good tht he is a gangster..A HOT GANGSTER😉☺️...Ummm..Yummmy!!😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update yar loved it loads
specially Uday!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnx fr d pm dear... superb update... waiting for mamveer moments... n tht jerk jagat is mad or what... ghamandi kahi ka... update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey tis is amazing...
luv it...
very inrteresting...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey dear the 1st chappy was so0o0o great...i really loved it 😃

manyata is a very dreamy girl...while reading i felt like i am reading myself 😆jay is also amazing in this SS . and jagat is intrsted in manayat 😡 and uday is a kind of don. but seriously u did a very great job...enjoyed it to the core. 👏
thanks 4 the p.m and do continue so0o0o0on...love u and hugs. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I JUST LOVE UDAY'S LAST LINE AND UDAY AS GANGASTER NICE I LOVE IT
THEIR LOVESTORY IS GOING TO BE UNIQUE CAN'T WAIT FOR THEIR FIRST MEETING
I HOPE ITS SOMETHING LIKE HOW THEY MET IN THE SHOW

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