... FEAR MAKES LOVE .... manveer ff chapter 3 new update pg 17 _^

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azwa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

LOVE IT

CANT SEE HOW THEY WILL FALL IN LOVE

JUST LOVE IT

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Very interesting...
luv it...
amazing...
do continue soon n do pm me...
thx fr the pm...

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MrsSSO

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Interesting concept !

Looking forward to it ...

Do continue soon and thanks for the PM !

Sorry, the LIKE button isn't working ! Will try again in a while !

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sanah12

@sanah12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Hey the concept is wow!
I was laughing while reading that uday is a gangster coz I was trying to imagine him speaking gangster type language which is funny.
I really love the prologue, cs and the concept.
It totally awesome.
Jaggat loves manyata but she rejected him, I guess maybe he is the one who told our gangster uday to kidnap manyata.
Eagerly waiting to read the 1st chappy
So do continue asap
Thanks for the pm :)

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Aliza

@ChamakChalloO

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

loved it alotz

amzing concept

please update soon

thnx for the pm

pm me sure

continue asap

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kritika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Jane523
awesome update

thanx 😳😳

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kritika

@-Kritika-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: marium-zamamii
hey girl from where u get such ideas????? nice intro... but m shocked when i read tht jay is manyatas friend heheheheh... continue soon... n yea thnx fr d pm tooo...

lol don't noe may be i m creative 😆

yo she is manyta's best frnd n in this story she is in positive charector ... !!! 😳😳