Manveer SS- Tumse Milke Aisa Laga index on page 12 chp2 on pg13 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maano_billi

Fabulous update👏 do continue soon😊

Thank u😊
Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 11 years ago
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Thank you all😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
Hey di, how you? 😊
Amazing start 👍🏼
Truly incredible 👏
Loved it loads ❤️
Superb, fantastic, awesome start ⭐️
Totally fab, loved chapter 1
Very cute n romantic 😳
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz continue soon 😃
Very eager to read next updatev 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks😃
Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey di, how you? 😊
Amazing start 👍🏼
Truly incredible 👏
Loved it loads ❤️
Superb, fantastic, awesome start ⭐️
Totally fab, loved chapter 1
Very cute n romantic 😳
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz continue soon 😃
Very eager to read next updatev 😉

Thanks dear😛
Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rabiya_Anam

when are you gonna update

today dear 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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In evening Manyata wore a red gown strapless red color gown knee length open hair she was looking decent light make applied on her face she looking like an angel she really look like God heavens unnati uday enter her room uday eyes and mouth were wide open unnati came and hug her and gives her birthday wishes and went uday close the door after unnati went Manyata blush and turned he just came and hug her from behind tightly

Uday- someone looking gorgeous
Manyata- who?
She was start teasing him both start teasing eachother
Uday- my sexy girl friend
Manyata- then go to your girl friend room
Uday- I m already in my girl friend room
Manyata turned and put her hands around his neck uday hands around her chest he make her very close
And crushed his chest with her breast
He was kissing her neck madly
He bite her cleavage near breast Manyata mourned lightly

She just push him after romance in 9:30 pm unnati,uday and Manyata reached devgarh palace when Manyata entered all lights turned on flower come down on her face uday and unnati stood behind her Manyata was happy one by one all. Devgarh family come and hug her and wish her after that party was started they all enjoyed Manyata talking guest uday sat on the bar site and drink 7 vodka shots till now

He saw Manyata stand near Jagat he feel jealousy Manyata turned and saw uday Face then she know uday didn't like him he both have enmity Jagat put his hands on her shoulders uday anger levels up now Manyata try to moved from Jagat and she did it

She want to go near uday but sudden unnati come and drags her to meet their friends uday drunk very much still he drinking vodka and whiskey non stop sudden jay came and put her hands on his shoulders rubbing her hands on his shoulders

Jay- so Howz you my janu!
Uday- I m fine and you
Jay- itna Pyar humse
Uday- kabhi kabhi unse bhi Pyar karlena chaiya Jo Pyar ke layak hi Na ho
Uday start flirting with her...because he indirectly trying to say Manyata still all girls behind him and love him more than Manyata

He drags jays towards himself jay collapse his lap both lips was inches a gap Manyata,unnati,vijay trio youngster seen all that Manyata was crying but try to control and not express but unnati and vijay understood

Manyata didnt cut a cake she lied to all and said she is not fine went her room sat on her knees on the floor and start crying badly and her heart was almost shattered and she fell in sleep

Next morning uday in his room servant came nd give him tea a bed tea after he drink tea and go to shower after shower he were went downstairs on breakfast table...uday notice unnati looking so dull

Uday- choti are you okay?
She didn't answer him
Uday- choti I m asking you something
Unnati- I m not interested to answer you
Uday- what is this what the ... I m your brother not your friend you stupid
Unnati- exactly you are my brother not casinova I think alway but you made me wrong you are a biggest playboy I hate you dada I feel shamed on me because you are ...you my brother you are such a heartless man you didn't deserve like Manyata types girl you deserve your type girl like jay,vanshika heartless
(vanshika character reveal and come soon)
Uday- oh so Manyata complaining you...good very good
Unnati- you are sill lived in your dreams Manyata didn't tell me anything but i seen all that by my own eyes how you glued with Kay don't you think how Manyata was feeling...he's was hurted very much...she didn't cut her birthday cake she was crying she was almost shattered but why you care why you are heartless play boy yuvraj udayveer Singh
Uday realize his mistake and without any talking he went dengarah palace

He greets all elders and went Manyata room
He feel very guilty but still he was bit of angry re-remember Jagat touch her princess
He was going her room but sudden jay came and held his hand tightly hugged her and touching her lips on his neck her hands moving his back and his head place on his chest
Uday try to push her but she didn't but she held her more tightly jay see Manyata come upstairs from stairs then she hugs him more tightly but uday didn't understand and didn't saw Manyata he just trying to tell her please stop doing nounsense and then in a second Manyata seen Jay and uay like hugging very closely tears rolling down from her checks her face become red pale she running and went towards her room

Jay- hmm so Howz it uday? Chit chor chit...chit your princess crying in her birthday what she think he beloved didn't love her awh so sad ...
Uday burning in angry and held jay hands firmly he tighten his grib more and more it's hurted may a lot
Uday- you gonna pay for it

She went towards her room and knock the door he listen some voice come from her room She throw all things and some things hurted her hands and legs blood oozing from wounds she hurted herself in anger she crying alots and collapse on floor she don't know why but she want to kill herself

Uday-please open the door princess please listen...
Manyata-go away you bloody bullshit I hate you...you are not a one women man you ho with jay...you deserve her and she deserve you go I hate you
Uday- don't say like that Manyata I m only yours only your I love you very much bottom of my heart I any even think to live without you
Manyata- go away chale jao yaha se jao...gooo...stay away from me

Precap-manveer become one...

Sorry for short update please forgive my mistakes...and don't forget hit like button...leave your comments
Love you all

Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
just awesome awesome
👍🏼👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.
I really really loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was a nice chapter..
thanks for the PM continue soon

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