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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nityatandon


You will face a problem Aneesha reading my reply... bcos can't change the colour... I told you na operating from mobile... But I have put this * mark against my recent replys... I hope that'll help..


thank dear i did comment back too
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow nice update
hate uday to cheat manyta
bt i hope sabkuch thik ho jaye
thankx 4 pm n update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

thank you so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
When will you update.
Pls waiting eagerly
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anaghasinha

When will you update.
Pls waiting eagerly


this sunday dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Ayesha di, how u?
Wow,amazing, superb, fantastic update
Sorry for the late reply, I have internet problems
Loved the update
OMG, now I understand y Manyata was completely heartbroken in the starting
Can't believe Uday did that to Manyata
Finally he realised his love for her n told her
But he said it at the wrong time
Wonder what Manav is going to do to Uday
Thanks for the pm n plz update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago

*~Helping Hands~*

There was a complete silence , manyata was aware of the anger building up inside manav da, as she fixed her gaze down , while uday eye were fixed on her beautiful face , finally manav said to uday in a stern and demanding tone

Why are you here?

He was neither scare nor afraid and spoke boldly

To get back my love to make your sister mine FOREVER

He could see manav hands into a fist as he crushed his teeth and said

If you loved her so much why did you leave her all alone it is of no use you should return back my sister is engaged to a person who will never toy with her feeling the way I did

But does she loves him , you are too blind to see the sorrow in her eyes and I really do not care even if she was married I would hold on to my and love and would not regret even once before killing her husband

There was no more of talking as manva hand flung to his face into a punch but uday was equally angry and a fierce fight between them started , both were of equal strength , not willing to give up and determined to fight , they were both injured and a pond of blood below them as manav could see uday 's eyes filled with anger as they left hold of each other ,uday was the one to be injured most as instead of raising hands and disrespecting manav he simply defended himself , he was bleeding from each possible side , he crumbled down and fell on his knees but manav could see the will in him to fight for his love , those eyes reminded manav of a person he used to be when he was madly in love with arthi as he extended his hands towards uday and said

Look at your self like a fool you want to fight but you are bleeding from each part of your body it is just because my sister loved you onces that why I am sparing your life and not killing you

He gave his signature smirk and said struggling

Do not worry I am not going to die as my life is more precious to someone else

Manav knelled down to him as wiped off his blood and said with a smile

So you really want her don't you?

He nodded his head like an innocent child as manav continued

I will help you but do not break her heart ever again

Saying this manav stood up and said coldly

I will not help you but I will neither come on your way win back your love if you can lover boy

He left the room as uday saw his leaving he buried his head in his hands , the whole night he twisted and turned in his bed , he needed a way to get his love back over again and there was almost no time left , it was the ball tomorrow and jai also planned to help him , so they decided at that the theme should be fairy tale , the main motive was to remind manyata of there first prom party , so the next day was quite eventful, uday took the day preparing for the party though he tried always managed to steal gazes at , but she was gone after last evening she was so disturbed that she left and started to stay in hotel along manav and arthi that was the information he got from jai , manyata was really scared she did not want to fall for his charm again as she feared of ending up breaking her heart again so she distracted herself by calling ayaz and it helped a lot as by the end of the day ayaz was successful in cheering her mood , though he himself had a feeling of insecurity in his heart after learning that uday proposed to her but he trusted his love , the evening crept by as manyata dressed herself into a beautiful white grown and a pair of beautiful shoes ,

her dress

her shoes

she covered her face with the pink lacy mask , she stepped in the party room and froze it was exactly like her first prom , lone tears escaped her eyes she tried to escape just before her hands were held back by jai and she was taken to the dance floor , each couple danced to the tune of music as memories of the past came to her mind , she turned away just when her wrist were held back by a strong muscular hands as she struggled but his grip was much more stronger she turned back as her eyes meet his and that smirk on his face , she knew she had to escape before she looses control over her emotions , she knew this was nothing but again a prank for him but this time she was not so helpless to be felt pity as she spoke under her breath

What are you doing

Well I did not do anything yet but if you give me a chance I can do a lot

She rolled her eyes and continued to struggle and said

Leave me I said

If I had to leave you than why would I hold you in the first place

What do you want

Just a dance and it's not a request but an order

Saying this he dragged her to the dance floor


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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am first to comment ... 🥳

Nice update di !
Well written ... 👏

Loved it 😳

I think the story is proceeding in a nice way !
I liked Manav's decision !
Hope it brings ManVeer closer ...

Waiting to read more ...

Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !
Edited by catty2000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Anni. Manav took a good decision.
Hope Manveer are reunited soon😳.
I have a feeling that Ayaz is going to show up at the ball!
(hope I'm wrong though!)
Eagerly awaiting the next part,
please continue soon,
... thanks for the PM😊.

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