||The Devil's Keep|| Updating ... - Page 16

Awesome update... 👏

Bt its confusing.. 😕

Why is Uday aftr Manyata...????

N y is Manyata running away frm Uday...???

Do cont soon.

N thnks 4 d pm...

SIMPLE SHORT NICE UPDATE VIDHI.

ENJOYED IT LOADS.CONTINUE SOON.

AND THANKS FOR THE PM.

gud work vidhi👏 poor manyata she thinks she can escape him easily😛 n that manya imitation of that voice msg was really funny😛 continue soon😊

short but awesome update vidhi loved it... poor manyata had to stay in the motel... if uday is going to get manyata y did he let her go in the first place wonder what is cooking in his mind please update soon and this time a long and thanks for the pm

Nice update
bichari manyata gayi kamse
thankx 4 pm n update soon

Originally posted by: priyash..

short tha but i loved it ... bechari manyta gayi kaam se had hoti hai yr ... !!! chal koi nhi !!! i loved awesome story

Originally posted by: cnibir

a nice chappy but as many people have commented earlier, the confusion is increasing and i m loving it as i am becoming more curious. Keep writing and thnx for the PM

PM me again for the next chapter.

Originally posted by: annabh

hey
how are you I am fine, you ?
thank you so much for updating You are welcome ... 😆
seriously Lolz 😆
i am a bit confused Everyone seems to be confused
why does uday hates her You will know as the story proceeds !
woa thank god she managed to run away She won't be able to run for long ... 😉
but who is oldie Her landlady 😆
and who is rohan You will know as the story proceeds !
and what happened in the past You will know as the story proceeds !
i know i am irritating you and sorry for that You are not di ... Please don't say like that 😳
anyway you are an awesome writer Thank you 😳
and i am sure that you willl find a way out I have it planned ... 😉
thanks for the pm,
update asap Will do !
hugzz