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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys,

Umm '. I feel really embarrassing to update after so long ' 😳

Actually have been going through a problematic phase this time LOLz

Many people kept on reminding me about the update and I thought how I can make up for the late ' or rather say VERY LATE update LOLz

Finally ' it clicked !

A double update would be fabulous '. 😃

So surprise guys here's one no two chapters today !


Chapter 4

Manyata walked inside the auditorium and immediately a smile brightened

up her face. Seeing, Rohan always lightened her mood but today was

different. Rohan jumped down the stage leaving his guitar aside and ran

and hugged her tight. Manyata pushed him away. His other band mates

walked out seeing what they called 'The Friday Drama' begin.

'Rohan, I am not speaking with you. You promised to come along with me to

dinner, didn't you ? And I felt like a fool sitting in the restaurant waiting for

two hours and then walking out after drinking gallons of water.'

Having said, Manyata walked out of the auditorium leaving a crestfallen

Rohan behind, who ran behind her trying to pacify her.

'Maddy, you know I get lost in my band practice that ... I promise I won't let it

happen again !'

'You said this last Friday, before that and even before that !'

'But this time I mean it. Ok ' I can make it up with a truce dinner, what say ?'

'Umm ' fine !'

Manyata huffed and walked ahead while Rohan thanked his stars to make

his day easier than the others.


Uday drove his car to the 'Night Owl', a restaurant, where he usually went

to grab a drink.

Handing over the keys to the valet, he walked in and sat on his usual place

with his favorite drink in hand. His main motto was to find Manyata now. He

wasn't sure about the girl being her first but her looks, her diary and finally

her running away proved it. He had alerted all his men in finding her but

somewhere in his heart he knew that he will not find her easily. That's

when the news on the TV grabbed his attention.

'The girl's dead body was discovered in the back other car. Forensics says

that she was raped and killed. The police so far have no evidences and

are clueless about the girl's identity. '

The word 'Rape' made him remembers a bit of his dark past.

'Sir she was raped.' The detective stuttered who was almost shaking

with fear standing in front of him.

Tears swelled up in Uday's eyes. This was getting harder and harder. The

more he tried to lessen the guilt that his heart was burdened with, it

increased. The more he tired to prove to himself that he was not

responsible for his sister's death, the more he was proved guilty. And now

hearing that his sister was raped was like a dragger into his heart that was

already scattered into pieces.

Uday jerked out of the memory when he saw a familiar figure pass by with a

familiar fragrance.


Manyata walked out of the restaurant clutching the shawl tighter around

her. She shivered not because of the cold but with fright.

What was he doing inside the restaurant ?

She was sure he was following her and felt guilty that she had to leave

without informing Rohan.

She turned around an alley when someone grabbed her hand and pulled

her behind the backside of the restaurant not even giving her a chance to

say something. She struggled to free herself but stiffened when she felt

her captor's hand encircling her waist. He straightened her beside the wall

and that's when she saw his face under the street lamp.

'Uday' she whispered.



Scroll Down for the next chapter !

Edited by catty2000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter 5

'Manyata' Uday said as he caressed her cheeks as the other hand

tightened its grip on her waist. He stared into her eyes, lost in them.

Manyata felt the tears burning her eyes as she stared at him. She felt

herself about to melt when she composed herself, pushed him away and

screamed.

'Excuse me mister, just because you let me go showcasing your over

generosity doesn't mean you can catch hold of me anywhere and behave

in an absurd manner and I am Manya not Manyata.'

Uday, who had stumbled back because of the push that he didn't see

coming, felt his temper rising.

The nerve of this girl ! She recognizes me. The look in her eyes says it all

but still she denies ' I know she is Manyata and I will make her accept

this tonight.

Manyata couldn't stand there anymore because she knew that if she did

she would surely not be able to control herself.

As she moved ahead, Uday caught her elbow and pulled her back, twisting

her hand behind her back. He looked at her with rage, pure rage.

Manyata whimpered as she felt the twinge of pain in her hand.

'You are hurting me' She said with tears forming in her eyes.

'It's nothing compared to what you are giving me Manyata.' Uday bit out as

he twisted her wrist slightly making her yelp.

'For the last time, I am not Manyata. You are mistaking me for someone else.' She screamed at him.

Why was he making it hard for her ? But she won't fall this time.

Uday saw the tears flowing down her cheeks and loosened the hold on her

wrist a bit.

Manyata took the opportunity and pushed him away and was about to

make a run when she heard him say.

'I love you, Manyata.'

The world stopped for her. The chirping of the birds in the trees didn't

matter. She didn't hear anything except those three words. She turned

back and ran and hugged him tight, never to leave him again.

'I love you too Uday. I love you too.' She kept repeating as she cried

bitterly.

Uday embraced her tight, moving a hand over her back, trying to soothe

her.

She suddenly felt faint in his arms.

He picked her up in his arms and looked at her face with a devilish smirk he

whispered.

'You have fallen in the devil's trap, Manyata.'


So how was it ?

Good or bad ?

Do leave behind your reviews (and likes) behind ...

Would be waiting to read them !



Vidhi

Edited by catty2000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
It was just great
Poor uday feeling sad for him
Last part was interesting
Thx for pm update sooon
Edited by Manveerangel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow di
Amazing update
Sorry for replying so late, internet problems
Wow, the storyline is so far is amazing and very interesting
Eagerly waiting for next update
Thanks for the pm
Plz continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
🤗AWESOME and nothing else 🤗 Keep it up,Catty. Sry,I sound like a teacher writing praises on the report card.Still,I am loving it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
loved the double update Vidhi
Wow So Uday wants M to fall in his trap
I wonder Why ??

COnt soon thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey vidhi
how are you?
the updates was awesome
i really loved it
omg so much of thriller
loved it thank for the pm
hugg
anni


Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow vidhi. Amazing writing. Really love it frm da core of my heart.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome vidhi loved both the parts so uday said I love u to manyata abd even she confessed her love ti him to trap her but did he really mean that even though he is for something devilish cooking in his mind... wonder what it gone happen please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Two really nicely written chapters. YAY for Manyata for excepting that she too loves Uday. But i am still confused as to what the history is between Uday and Manyata.

Thanks for the PM and good luck for the next chappy.

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