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woah that was really awesome!!!
so he couldn't save her han?? sad!!
awww manyata ka man toh pehle se hi lattoo ho gaya uday pein I guess!!
awww the flashbacks were really cute!!
update soon

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

woah that was really awesome!!!
so he couldn't save her han?? sad!!
awww manyata ka man toh pehle se hi lattoo ho gaya uday pein I guess!!
awww the flashbacks were really cute!!
update soon

heya vidhi
the second chapter was another milestone it was simply confused my mind to comment i mean i did not have words to explain my happiness after reading it so maybe that is the reason why i am a bit late for commenting . i loved the chapter but there are puzzle in my mind sorry for being so thick headed but i really am eager to know the reason why uday turned into gangster and what that flashback really meant but i have trust on you that you will answer them sooner or later please i am eagerly waiting for the update please update fast please

Originally posted by: chocohollic

heya vidhi Heyaa Mona !
the second chapter was another milestone it was simply confused my mind to comment i mean i did not have words to explain my happiness after reading it so maybe that is the reason why i am a bit late for commenting It's ok ! And about the confusion, i think it would be for some more time 😆 i loved the chapter but there are puzzle in my mind sorry for being so thick headed Believe me you are not ! but i really am eager to know the reason why uday turned into gangster and what that flashback really meant but i have trust on you that you will answer them sooner or later please i am eagerly waiting for the update please update fast please Updating !

Thanks a lot to everyone who liked and commented on the last chapter ... 😳

Chapter 3

Manyata ran till she reached a dead end. Looking here and

there, she found a caf at the nearest. Running in, she grabbed

a table and ordered a coffee. She hid herself under the table

when she saw the driver near the caf window. Seeing him

return back, she got up and straightened herself at the same time getting

weird looks from the people in the cafe.

Jumping out of the car was the brightest idea that has ever

popped in your mind, Manyata. How could you have accepted

to take that devil's car at the first place ? You can't let him

know of your existence especially your place, silly !

She kept on muttering to herself, earning more strange looks

from the waiter who brought her the coffee. She looked away

embarrassed.

But this can't go on for long Manyata. I am sure he knows you

and remembers you. Maybe he is planning something. There is

something going on in that devilish mind of his, but what ?

Whatever it is the best thing would be to stay out his reach.

She decided as she sipped her coffee. She began walking out of

the caf, still cautious, when her phone rang making her jump.

She attended the call without looking at the ID.

"When do you plan to pay the rent Manyata ? " Screeched a

voice from the other end.

Manyata cursed herself for not checking the ID before picking

up a call. Trying to think about something, she finally said, "You

have reached Miss Manyata who is busy at the moment, if

urgent, kindly leave a message. She will get back to you later."

Imitating a poor voice messenger.

I will have to buy a new sim again. She thought, sighing.

Uday smirked as he hanged up.

So she did run away. This proves it, she indeed is my princess.

He revolved on his chair while looking, sipping his drink as he smirked.

Manyata relaxed on the bed in the motel.

Great so I can't go to my house because of that oldie

screeching her head off. What did she want the rent for ? She

has got ample of money bundling with her, hasn't she ? I can't

even go to Rohan's place today, because of his band days.

Yeah Manyata, enjoy a day in the motel.

She got up and looked through her handbag for the pack of

cookies she brought at the caf, when it struck her.

Where is my diary ???

She fumbled through her belongings, scattering them all over the

bed but didn't find it.

No ! My God ! Where is it ??? Did I drop it somewhere or did I

leave it '.. No ! That can't be ! Goodness where is my diary ???

She dug her face in her palms as tears streaked down her cheeks.

Uday looked up from his drink and his eyes fell on her diary.

He smirked as he said, "My hatred leaves none, princess. Not even

you." Saying so he smashed the glass on the floor and stood in

anger.

"I am coming for you, princess." The night rang with his laughter all

over the place.

With this you come to the end of Chapter 3 !

I know the chapter was short but believe me this was the best point to

stop ... 😆

Will update in a day or two itself if i get time !

What do you think of ...

Uday ?

The storyline ?

Do tell me ...

Do leave your likes and reviews behind !

Would be waiting to read them !

short tha but i loved it ... bechari manyta gayi kaam se had hoti hai yr ... !!! chal koi nhi !!! i loved awesome story

a nice chappy but as many people have commented earlier, the confusion is increasing and i m loving it as i am becoming more curious. Keep writing and thnx for the PM

short but extremely awesome update!!!
hehehehhehe manyatas srsly weird at time!!
and Uday did sound like a devil!!.
update soon!