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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

heyy its a veryy diffrnt kind of storyy!!!!! lovingg itt!!!!! yaa a women can be loving as well as ruthless!!!!!!! will be waitng for ur nxt update!!!!!😊😊😊 srry fr being late!!😳😳

Edited by pia.raha - 12 years ago

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Hey, first of all I would like to say sorry. I am really really very sorry on not commenting on the prolouge actually my internet was not working.

the update was superb!

Loved it!

Uday a knight, wow!

Love the way uday was irritating and annoying his patner.

Uday seems to be a person who listens to his brains then heart.

Jay and manyata's bonding is lovely.

I like jay in a positive character.

I don't know have a feeling that manyata is the killer.

I just hope manyata or jay is not the killer.

I wonder how uday will get hold of the killer.

Eagerly waiting to know how manveer will meet.

Beautifully written!

Plzz do continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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MrsSSO

@MrsSSO

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Nice update Gargi !

Great start 👏

Loved it 😳

Udayveer's character has been shown very well !

His and Vedanta's conversation was funny !

But he is right ...

A woman can be a killer !

His teasing and thinking that Vedanta might fall for the woman's charm was funny ... 😆

But i have a feeling that it is going to be him who falls for HER first ... 😉

You have written Manyata's description so well ...

I liked each and every word of it !

Jai is a singer !

Continue soon ...

Thanks for the PM !

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HARSHITA

@htgcute

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Wow gargi di i don't have words to explain how beautifully u have written just loved...

Do continue soon

And thanx for the pm

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azwa

@fireroad99

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

love it and contiune soon

but i had aquestion

that how can i pm 20 people at the same time

can u teach me how

plzzz

pm me soon

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

it was awesome i mean too good
i am dumbstruck after reading this update
uday was trying to scare his friends
loved the lines

Ohh common Kshatriya Vedanta. Don't hide from your close friend ehh..We both know among the two of us only one can control his emotions and be firm, when it comes to WOMEN!!.

the dialogues were awesome
now here so manyata is the most beautiful girl
and i feel her mother is bad
but why would she do all this
thanks for the pm
update asap
and it was superb

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago