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pooja urf pari

@parish99

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#581

awesome update dear,
do continue soon
& thanks for the pm

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#582

Nice update... U shattered my dream of hunky dory... 😔
Bt precap seems interesting... I wanna read something humorous n not tragic in next chappy...
Something like andaaz apna apna style hero n goons humor cum action. 🤣 I actually started imagining it 😆

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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#583

lovely update vibha.
loved it loads.
so manyata is in love.
and uday is hesitant to fall in love.
interesting promo.
continue soon.
thank u so much for pm

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#584

wow wonderful update Vibha.. 👏

Every part is nice from Manyata's change of emotions to Udayveer's thinking (i find that part is very well written)⭐️

Manyata's plan about hurting Udayveer fails every time

Means she is already in love with him..

And I think Uday too loves her though he doesn't know it.. hain na..😉

I think the durg dealing part ends with a fun..

Taani's feeling for Kabir very nicely written..

Thankz for pm

Update soon dear 😊

Edited by panchaali - 11 years ago

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#585

woah awesome blossom gr8 vibha

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Nibir Chowdhury

@cnibir

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#586

nicely written chapter...

i can't believe both Manyata and Uday instead of acting all lovey dovery are planning on acting cold towards each other... I guess we need some sort of complication in the story...

I am scared for both of them but let see what happens in the drug dealers house...

thanks for the PM and continue soon...

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#587

Firstly , I must say how grateful I am that u updated😃 (because I was sure your next update was only coming early next year) ... and I was very eager to read about "THE MORNING THEREAFTER"😳. And .. it was a treat to read. As I had imagined it ... u wrote it😉! I knew that Manyata will admit her feelings, yet deny it as it would mean defeat in the challenge Uday laid. Uday too had some mixed emotions, and I loved how he put up this hard exterior, so that he wouldn't need to face his true feelings. I enjoyed how Manyata proclaimed that she'd stop caring about Uday ... and then when he had his coughing-fit , she stormed off in a flash to get water for him😉! That was too sweet. Oh my😲! Drug-lords ... (I didn't see THAT coming)!!!! At 1 point, I thought the water-flask that they gave Manyata, would have a stash of cocaine in it😆. Thank God (for Uday's sake😉) ... it had water inside😆. I thoroughly enjoyed the chapter, it was superb👏. As usual - PERFECTLY WRITTEN! Eager to read about the dance and the "party". I hope 2 months fly pass - FAST😉! Good luck for your studies and your exams.

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#588

hey jiji,
how are you?
i had been waiting for this chapter
since quite long
OMG manyata is finally in love
but no fidah coz she decided to hide her feeling
at a point i am happy that she did so
Or she would really be heart broken
when she would see the cold uday
I do not understand as to why
he is still not aware of his love
even if he think its one night stand
then he has achieved what he wanted
so he should let go of her
rather than tangling her in a situation like this
as for kabeer i always knew that
he too would get a girl
and lastly Omg
what is going to happen now?
thanks for the pm
huggs

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tazeen

@tazeen.....

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#589

nice update
loved it
continue soon

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Supernatural_10

@Supernatural_10

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#590

Amazing Part Vibha

Love your writing you write in full english so amazingly will no mistakes at all.. whenever I write I have so many mistakes I'm supposed to be british here😆

why cant manveer just confess their feelings.. now they are stuck in drug business that was hilarious looking forward to the precap

Hope 2 months go fast lots of good luck on ur studies and exams🤗