LOVE IS PASSION NOT POSSESION... CH-8 pg 67-28/3/14

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SO GUYZ BACK WITH ANOTHER CONCEPT...
ACTUALLY I KNOW I HAVE TO COMPLETE 2 MORE STORIES
BUT I SERIOUSLY LOST INTEREST IN THEM AS THEY WERE NOT GETTING GOOD RESPONSE...
SO I THOUGHT TO START A NEW CONCEPT...
HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT...
WELL I WANT A GOOD RESPONSE FOR THIS STORY OR ELSE I'LL END IT...




LOVE IS PASSION NOT POSSESSION...

Well we see,

The title itself indicates what the story is about'.

It is about the love which has its own passion'.

It is about a person who crossed the fine line between passion and possession'.

When there's passion you cant posses'

And when there's possession you cannot love'..

Prologue

She twists and twirls on the bed'

She wanted to shut her thoughts, her mind, but all in vain'.

He was there'

He was there in her heart'

Her mind'

Her everywhere'.

Even after those 3 years of hell she missed him'

She wanted him'.

The previous day drifted in her mind as she recalled her meet with Unnati'.

Unnati: see manyata I completely understand, I can't even force you but plz plz listen to me just once'..

Manyata: once? Unnati do you have even the slightest idea of what your asking me to do??How can you ask me such a thing unnati' you want me to return back to that hell???To that beast???

Unnati: no manyata im not'. I just want your help'.just think about it manyata. Its been 5 years now. My brother who used to be the top most business tycoon of the world, who had everything'Where is he now??? In the mental asylum???

Manyata: yes he's there because he is mad unnati'. He is mad you get that??

Unnati: yes I know his mad manyata. He's madly in love with you. My brother never meant harm to you.He just forgot the line that existed between his passionate love and possession' I just want my brother back manyata'please help me get my brother back to his worldPlease help me get my successful business tycoon back to this world' please manyata only you Can do it'.Not able to take anymore of her inner turmoil manyata jerks off the bed and stands near the window.

She was struggling between her heart and her brain. Her heart wanted to soothe him, to love him but her mind said a big NO'both were correct in its own way. Finally her heart won and she dialed her phone.

Manyata: hello unzie.. I'm ready' we'll get the business tycoon back' We'll get him back to his real world'.

hope you all like it...😃

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Edited by MAHI1198 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyc concept Mahi👍🏼 do cont soon and pm me whenever u update nxt😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its an awesome concept mahi...👏👏👏
A over possessive husband is indeed a difficult thing to manage but then they r still lovable...Actually ur concept seems matching with my thoughts..Once i loved the character of Virat in Saubhagyavati bhava...and i used to always think ki why can't a wife change her husband's view..A husband madly in love with wife is a curse at the same time a blessing..atleast he won't go behind another women in ur presence😊..
Really looking forward to see how will Manyata helps in Uday's recovery and his return as a business tycoon...seems to see some cute manveer scene...
Thanks for the pm and do continue soon mahi😊
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey maahi u story looks promising u will surely gonna get good response
i love intense love story
uday is mad? omg pls reveal the mystery soon
pls pm me when u update its my first ff on the forum so im looking forward to read it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept...pls update soon...nd pm me next time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice nd awesome concept update soon nd pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mmm sounds interesting mahi.

A different concept with passionate
love.

but uday in mental asylum.oh no.
bc he loved manyta madly.

and manyata loves uday but dont want to go him.bc he love her madly.

so his love is the problem.

loved it dear.do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the concept Mahi...update soon
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awesoem
sorry for the late comment
but omg waiting for soem bombbastic ss
he is in mental hospital
coz he is madly in love
thanks for the pm
and update asap

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