LOVE IS PASSION NOT POSSESION... CH-8 pg 67-28/3/14 - Page 5

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Awesome prologue, loved it
Plz add me to the pm list n do continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: priyash..

nice concept mhi meri jaan esa kya hua ...5 year se use bath nhi kar rhi i m hell confused now plz plz mahi mujhe bhi pm list mai daal de love u 😃

Originally posted by: preya_radev

awesome mahi just loved the prologue thanks
it is really interesting and now I cant even wait for the first chapter some really different please do pm me whenever u updateyes will surely do...

also please do try and continue ur other two stories please I know u have lost interest as u were not getting that much good response but please try and continue for those readers who are still interested in it pleaseyeah i'm gonna dear... actually i just took a small break cuz i wasnt able to think how to move the story forward...

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Eng is easier.y did u decide 2 write in eng?usually u write in hindi.rt?yeah i do...but then i thought why not try in english.. it will help me to improve my writing skills!!😉

Character sketch

Udayveer singh :

As the name itself indicates rise of sun so was he. The most powerful and no.1 buisness tycoon of world. Married to manyata raizada his childhood sweetheart. For world he was a rough and tough spoilt brat but only his wife knew what a golden heart he had. He was truly madly and deeply in love with his wife.

Manyata raizada/manyata udayveer singh:

A happy go lucky girl.. married her childhood sweetheart uday. Sweet caring lovely person. Loves uday a lot. Can sacrifice anything for him but only if he is right. Very supposrtive and encouraging. The main reason for uday's success. But things changed drastically as uday started to step towards his success'

Unnati singh:

uday's sister loved her brother and manyata a lot. Sweet, caring, innocent and a lovely personality. Falls in love with vijay dinanath chauhan, manyata's cousin and marries him.

Vijay dinanath chauhan:

A very sweet personality. Loving caring funny partner of uday in many of his industries and top business tycoon after uday. after uday handles all his Indian chains of industries. He is very caring towards his sister manyata and jai. Loves his wife unnati

A lot. Can get aggressive when any1 harms them.

Jainandini jagat singh rathore:

Manyata's sister. Loves her a lot. Got married to jagat a year ago. Very sweet but revolts strongly against bad things. Very aggressive when someone talks or behaves bad with her family. Loves jagat more than er life and is a great wife. Lives in London with jagat and manyata.

Jagat rathore:

Top business tycoon. Uday's and vijay's third partner. Handles his own and uday's international chains of industries. A great husband and a loyal friend.

Uday's rest family:

parents died in car accident when unnati was born.

So brought up by his uncle .

Uncle: viyaan sahay.

Aunt: maya sahay.

Rahul:uday's brother/best friend.

Manyata's rest family:

Parents: komal and bridraj raizada

Grandmom: mrinalini raizada.

Aunt: menaka chauhan(vijay's mother)

And last but not the least

Introducing the little angel cum devil of this story'.

AHANA UDAYVEER SINGH:

Daughter of manveer. Though manyata is free from uday. She didn't want to snatch away away uday's name from ahana's life so it was ahana singh instead of raizada. Non of the fmily member knew about her apart from jai and jagat. Manyata always told her daughter good things about uday.she always wanted ahana to get her father's love.

Chapter 1

Dear diary,

What am I doing? I just don't know' am I right?? Will it hurt me again?? What about ahana??

Oh god I just don't know what should I do.. J will be so angry if she comes to know about it. So much happened but still I am ready to go to him. Help him. Why?? Why does my heart love him so much? Why it pains when someone calls him a beast?? What if he recovers? Will ahana get her father's love?

What if he turns back to the same person he used to be 5 years ago? Will I get my uday back?? Will he love me??

"mumma mumma" ahana came chirping inside the room and sat on manyata's lap.manyata quickly closes the diary and puts it in the drawer. She hugs her daughter with all her might.

At that time that was the only thing that could have soothed her inner turmoil. She moves back after ahana starts complaining that she couldn't breathe. Manyata moves back and smile at her daughter'

Manyata: ahana baccha did U enjoy with jagat mamu??

Ahana: yes mama you know mamu ij vely shweet. He gave me lotsh of chocolates. I love mamu sho much'

Jagat from door: mamu loves you too angel'

Seeing jagat ahana exciteldly goes near him and hugs him'jagat picks her up.

Ahana: mamu whele ale my balloons?

Jagat: angel I have brought ur ballons don't worry they are down'

He kisses on her cheek and was about to say something when suddenly J storms in the room'

Jagat: hey J wats up!!

J: jagat plz take ahana outside with you' I want to talk to jiji'

Jagat: ya sure dear..

Jagat leaves with ahana.manyata notices j's behavior..

Manyata: whats the matter J?

J: whats the matter you took such a big decision nd did not find it necessary to tell us jiji??

Manyata: what are you talking abou j??

J: Unnati is down.. she told me everything. Jiji why are you risking your life again? Why are you doing this?

Manyata stammers: j I' i'dnt know..

J: you don't know? How the hell can you be so confused jiji? You will not only be risking your but also ahana's life god damn it'

Manyata: J I know, but what if he recovers and what if ahana get's her father's love..

J's temper rose hearing this. She knew there was no use fighting with her jiji. She calms herself down.

J: fine jiji do what you want to do. But if ahana's hurt even if a scratch I would never forgive you.. does unnati know about ahana?

Manyata: no..

J: you should go down unnati's waiting for you.

Manyata nods and without a word goes down. J frustrated..

J: this is wrong jiji' you are risking two lives.. I hope just hope that everything goes well'

Down in hall unnati was moving back and forth impatiently.

She sees manyata coming down. Hugs her with al her might literally dancing..

Unnati: manyata manyata you seriously don't know how happy I am' thank you thank you thank you so much'

Manyata breaks the hug and fakes a smile.

Unnati: I just wish dada recovers back soon and you both come together again..

Manyata's face suddenly turns grave. This doesn't go unnoticed by unnati..

Unnati: what happened manyata?

Manyata: I wil come back to india but I have 1 condition unnati.

Unnati: go on..

Manyata: after uday recover's I would come back to London. I wouldn't stay with him..

Unnati was hell shocked: what why?? No manyata don't do this you know he won't be able to live without you..

Manyata: that's the thing Unnati. I don't want that. I want him to leave without me. I don't want him to return to that beast..

Unnati: no manyata are you gonna help him just to give him the punishment of his previous deeds??

Manyata smiles: no unnati I'm helping him because I know he would be a great father to our child..

Unnati confused: father ? what?

She was about to continue when ahana comes rushing towards manyata..

Ahana: mamma mamma you know jagat mamu alsho blought me lots of balloonsh with many many telly beals(teddy bears).. he'j vely nishe..

Manyata: acha so did you say him thank you??

Ahana: oh no I folgot that.. I'll shay him.. who's this aunty mumma??

Manyata smiles and looks at unnati' and finds her lookin at her as if she had grown an extra head'with her mouth shaped in a big O'

Manyata: unnati this is ahana' AHANA UDAYVEER SINGH. And anu this is your unnati bua remember the one I told you about'

Ahana: yesh I lemembel.. hi bua..

Unnati just couldn't reply . as if her voice was stuck in her throat. Her eyes popped out of her sockets.. seemed as if she could faint any moment'..

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Originally posted by: Surish

Originally posted by: snowdream

<font size="4" color="#cc0066">It was an awesome start mahi..👏</font>

<font size="4" color="#cc0066">.J is so true in her words😕</font>

<font size="4" color="#cc0066">but then why did M said that she would leave him after curing ...😲</font>

<font size="4" color="#cc0066">Poor Manyata seems like she underwent a lot...😕</font>

<font size="4" color="#cc0066">but probably ahana can do a lot to Uday and also between Manveer,,😊</font>

<font size="4" color="#cc0066">Continue soon😊</font>

<font size="4" color="#cc0066">iam desperate to read more😊</font>

<font size="4" color="#cc0066">thanks for the pm😃</font>