LOVE IS PASSION NOT POSSESION... CH-8 pg 67-28/3/14

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: catty2000
Nice update Mahi !THANKS
I thought the same about the past ...
An obsessive lover and his obsession ...

But you wrote it very well ...
Great going 👍🏼

Manyata has got a big heart to forgive him !

Continue soon ...
I didn't get a PM this time ?OH M SO SORRY MUST BE SOME PROBLEM!!EXTREMELY SORRY WILL SURELY PM U NEXT TIME

THANKS ALOT GLAD U LIKED IT😳😳

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: humairaa1
Hi di, how u?ME ALL F9 U SAY!
Glad u updated, really missed your updatesYEAH FINALLY
Sorry for replying so lateITS OK
Really felt bad when I read Manyata's story
Uday is soo mean, I can't believe he did that to her
Thank god he forgot to close the door and Manyata escaped
Thanks for the pm
Plz update soon

THANKS ALOT GLAD U LIKED IT😳😳

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: Shahista01
Very well written mahi. 👏THANKS

I know i am late in replying as i have been so inactive but just wanted to say

throughly enjoyed the last 2 updates.ITS OK TAKE YOUR OWN TIME SHAHI

Showing the pain and humiliation that manyata had to endure was extremely sad

even worse knowing the man you fell in love with is capable of things like that.

possesion coupled with alcohol spells disaster.

even uday had to suffer his fate...

I guess its true what they say 'Falling in love is easy, it happens everyday but living up to that love and keeping it alive now thats the difficult part'YEAH AND THATS WHAT MANYATA'S TRYING TO DO

but we are all human and mistakes and bad judgements are part of life... looking to udays recovery and coming to terms with his actions and life afterwards...

thanks for pm

hugs

THANKS ALOT GLAD U LIKED IT😳😳

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monalisa mukherjee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

Tell me is this Uday a MONSTER
I mean this is not love
I really feel sorry for manyata
But I hope in the coming chapters
We see a good Uday
Please do update asap

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: chocohollic
Tell me is this Uday a MONSTER
I mean this is not love
I really feel sorry for manyata
But I hope in the coming chapters
We see a good Uday
Please do update asap

yes for manyata he became a monster!! that was his mentality!! yeah even I hope we get to see a good Uday!! will update soon!

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monalisa mukherjee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
yes for manyata he became a monster!! that was his mentality!! yeah even I hope we get to see a good Uday!! will update soon!

Ok i am eagerly waiting for you to update

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: chocohollic

Ok i am eagerly waiting for you to update 

yeah will try and update soon!

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: chocohollic

Ok i am eagerly waiting for you to update 

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#329

OMG OMG OMG GUYS THANK YOU SO SO MUCH!! WELL I KNOW MANY OF U ARE DAMN ANGRY ON ME PLEASE FRIENDS NO JHOOTAS!!

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U KNOW BECUZ OF UR WISHES MY EXAMS WENT QUITE WELL!! THOUGH SOME OF IT WERE TOUGH! AND THEN AFTER SEEIN THE LIKES AND COMMENTS FOR THIS STORY I LIKE ALMOST FORGOT TO UPDATE MY OTHER TWO STORIES WELL IM REALLY SORRY FOR THAT BUT THEN IVE DECIDED I'LL COMPLETE ALL MY STORIES IN A MONTH OR TWO AND THEN STOP WRITING! ATLEAST UNTIL MY 10TH IS OVER! BUT I WONT WRITE! BASICALLY I DONT GET TIME TO WRITE! I UPDATE LATE MY READERS GET UPSET AND IT JUST FRUSTRATES ME MORE AND THEN M FORCED TO WRITE AND CUZ OF ALL THIS M LOOSING MY INTEREST IN WRITING! I DONT BLAME ANY1 OF U ITS ALL BECUZ OF MY STUPID 10TH IM REALLY SORRY IF I HAVE DISAPPOINTED ANY1!! AND A HEARTY SORRY! WELL NOW ENOUGH OF MY BORING BAK BAK AND YEAH ANNI M REALLY SORRY I DIDNT GET TIME TO WRITE DOUBLE UPDATE!! ILL TRY AND GIVE DOUBLE UPDATE OF WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE!!! FOR NOW ENJOY THIS UPDATE GUYS!!

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#330

Love is passion not possession chapter 6...

The ride home from hospital was silent. Manyata was lost in her own world while unnati vijay were at loss of words. The moment the trio entered the house manyata retired to her bed saying she was tired and wanted to have a wash. After the wash she came and stood in front of the mirror lost in the bitter sweet memories of her past!
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Manyata was drying her hair wen her naughty husband hugged her from back and started kissing her neck.
Manyata: ummm... Uday what a..are you doing.. Plzz plzz leave me don't do this..
Uday turned her around trapping her between his hands and the hairdresser. He moved the wet strand of hair seductively that lingered on her face.
Uday: what am I doing manyata?
He whispered huskily minimizing the distance between them. Manyata's lips began trembling due to his closeness. The butterflies in her stomach felt as if they were doing African dance. This made Uday smirk. She tried looking everywhere apart from his eyes. He held her chin and pulled her closer so that her gaze could directly meet his, their faces just inches apart!
Uday: you didn't tell me han..
He kissed her right cheek..
U: what m I doing??
He kissed her left cheek
Manyata's voice was as if stuck in her throat, only word that escaped her mouth was a PLEASE..
Uday kissed both her eyes
U:Please what manyata???
Manyata shyly pushed him a back little only to be back hugged by him again pressing her towards the dressing table. He continued giving wet kisses on her back. Shiver ran through her spine.
Manyata: Uday please please leave me. I have to go and look for your breakfast or else you'll get late!
Uday: oh really sweetheart? But m already having my breakfast!
Manyata: Uday leave me or!!!
Uday moved closer to her. He bit her earlobe. Manyata moaned in sweet pain.
Uday sucked that place to reduce her pain
Uday whispered: or? or what wifey?
Manyata: or you won't get your dinner.
Uday: oh is that a threat my wifey?
Manyata: whatever you think a threat a request a warning your wish!
Uday pretends to be angry: fine bye...
He leaves her and goes. Manyata turns to stop him only to be banged on the harsh reality. There was no one in her room .It was her brains trick.
She crumbled down on floor crying. To world she portrayed she was strong, but only she knew how weak she was. The more she wanted to runaway from her past the more her fate brought her close to it. She was tired of the pain she had been suppressing!
" what went wrong Uday??? Why did you do this to me??? Whhhyyy????? Why did u turn my life a hell?? What had I done to u??? Just made the mistake of loving you??? I feel disgusted to love you Uday still you own my heart! You had such an impact on me that m not left capable of loving anyone anymore I hate you Uday do you hear it??? I hate you"

Why why did you do this to me, I loved you so much
But you just left me..
I thought you loved me
But was wrong and made fool of me.
You broke my heart to pieces.
Pieces that cannot be joined together
Used and then left me.
What had I done to you?
Just made the mistake of loving you?
You taught me to trust
You taught me to love
See what you have done today
You taught me never to trust,
You taught me never to love
Once you made me capable of loving everyone,
But you shattered me so much,
That now!
Now am not capable of loving any1...

Listening to her shouts unnati who was in the next room quickly came to manyata only to see her crumbled down on floor. She hugged manyata as tightly as possible. No words at moment could soothe her inner turmoil. Unnati cursed herself for giving manyata such a pain. Tired and exhausted of crying manyata went to sleep.
Unnati soon went to her room after adjusting manyata on her bed. She felt disgusted for being so selfish. In no time her eyes flooded with tears. Vijay who had just entered the room rushed near unnati.
Vijay:unnati what happened??
Un hugs vijay: its all because of me vijay. I shouldn't have brought her here. Unnati explained him what all happened. She isn't that strong as we think she is vijay. All because of me she is suffering all again. I became selfish I asked her to help me cure dada.
Vijay: no unnzie please don't blame yourself. See the pain she has now might turn in joy tomorrow. We just need to be strong. Uday will be alright very soon and our manveer will be together all over again.
Komal who had just entered the room was shocked would be an understatement.
Komal shouted: what are you speaking vijay?
Vijay: mom...
But before he could say anything komaal went down and shouted for all the family members to gather. The usually most calm women of the house being in such a state shocked every1. Manyata woke up and came down.
Manyata: what happened ma? Why are you so angry?
Komal held manyata by shoulders.
Komal: angry? You are asking me that? After taking such a step??
Brij: komaal what is the matter?
Komal: ask your children and daughter in law what all stuff they are doing.
Brij: manyata vijay unnati will u plz tell me what's the matter!
All three looked at each other helplessly while mrinalini devi thought best to be a silent spectator.
" I will tell you dad." Said J who had just come from London with jagat and Ahana.
Brij went to them. Komal hugged both jagat and J.
Brij: J, Jagat when did you come and who's this with you?
Ahana was asleep.
J: dad we came just an hour ago. And as long as concerned with her she is Shana. Your grandchild. Daughter of Uday and manyata. Ahana udayveer Singh.
This was a huge shock to whole family. J gestured jagat to take ahana to bed so she doesn't get up. While all just try to digest the fact they just got to know.
Brijraj: manyata why did you not tell us about all this? What is all this?
Manyata: dad its true. She is my daughter.
Komal went towards her.
Komal: were our relations so week manyata that you hid such a big thing?
Manyata: mom no, its..
Enough... Komal interrupted
Komal: not a word more manyata. Vijay unnati you both know what state we had found her and still you both..
Brij frustrated: please on the earth would anybody tell me what's happening in this house???
J: dad manyata jiji is helping Uday.
J told brijraj what all hapened in London.
Brij: what?
J: yes, she came to India to help him. Vijay and unnati helped her..
Before j could complete brijraj stormed towards vijay.
Brij: vijay is all this true?
Vijay bowed down: yes dad.
Before any1 could say anything a tight slap was placed on vijays right cheek.
Brij shouted: what kind of a brother are you? Don't you know your sister has already suffered allot and still you..
He held vijay by collar..
Why dammit why????
Knowing the matter was getting worst finally D's decided to step in.
D's: calm down brij.
Brij: calm down??? How could I mom. This all is rubbish.
D's sternly: manyata I want to talk to you alone and my given decision will be final. Not a word against it. Manyata come with me.
Manyata: jee dadi.
Manyata gulped down in fear as anyhow she had to convince her to let her help Uday.
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Huff finally we reached the end.
Well I hope guys I havent bored you all much!
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