LOVE IS PASSION NOT POSSESION... CH-8 pg 67-28/3/14 - Page 16

Originally posted by: fireroad99

THE LAST LINE

NEVER MAKE PROMISES WHICH YOU ARE NOT SURE OF.. IT MAY BREAK YOU LATER'

BEST QUTO I EVER HEARDYEAH JUST POPPED OUT IN HEAD!!!

ITS A BIGGEST THURTH IN THE WORLD

I THINK MANYATA KNOWS THAT UDAY AND HER WILL NOT GET TO GETHER 😭

I AM DAM SURE DENSITY HAVE SOMETHING ELSE PLAN

😊😊

WAIT AND WATCHHMM... LETS'C

Originally posted by: gal.angel

Heyy Mahi finally i find ur FF n juz finish it.. HUFF SORRY I COULDNT GIVE U LINK...first of all juz want to say hats off dear u hav written soo beautifully ...AWWW THANKS ALOT esp.. d first letter which uday had written wen he was on 10 th std itz soo romantic n full of emotions...THANKSbut deriz lotz of suspense aakhir kya hua tha manveer k bich .. YO!!i want to eagerly knoe dat .. n if unnanti dunno abt Ahana den uday also dunno abt his daughter...HMMM i juz cant wait mahi coz aab manyata india jane k baad kya hoga ? MUJHE BHI NAHI PATA HEHEHEExcited for uday entry :-D soo update soon n tenxx for pm :-D

Osina XD

Originally posted by: nabs4ak

Awsum awsum concept Mahi nd amazing start 👏 👏
Ur stories r always the best..
Do update soon nd thnks 4 pm 😊

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Great Chapter 1 and Chapter 2..Mahi dear.

Loved Manyata and Uday's note. It was so well written

Update soon.

Originally posted by: Shahista01

WRITTEN VERY WELL MAHI 👏👏👏.. THROUGHLY ENJOYED IT...

LOOKING FORWARD TO UDAYS ENTRY😉

CONTINUE SOON. HUGS🤗

Chapter 3,

Unnati had already informed everyone about manyata. All were waiting on the airport desperately. Unnati and manyata finally arrived. All had tears in their eyes. Manyata was back to her motherland after 5 years. She was gonna go to them but unnati stopped her. She whispered in her ears.

Unnati: manyata please dont tell anything about dada,only you,vijay and I know about this. Manyata nodded and moved ahead to greet every1. Ds brij giiri menaka vijay and komal all were in tears..

Komal hugged manyata: manyata my baccha I missed you so much.

Manyata: I missed you too ma.i missed you all so much.

Komal kissed her forehead and then moved to greet others…

(WELL NOW M GONNA SKIP GREETING PART AS I KNOW MOST OF U ARE DESPERATELY WATING FOR UDAY'S ENTRY..)

Unnati goes near vijay and hugs him.

Vijay: how are you my dear wifey?

Unnati:very good.. I missed you so much.

Vijay: awww I missed you too.

Unnati sad: vijay do you think whatever I am doing is right?

Vijay cups her face: Unnati whatever your doing is absolutely right dear you need not worry until the great vijay dinanath chauhan is with you.

Unnati giggles. He kisses on her forehead and hugs her once again. Their trance was broken when manyata coughs. Both embarrassed.

Vijay: so manyata bhai shall we leave?

Komal: where are you all going?? Manyata aren't you coming home??

Unnati:no mom actually manyata has some work so she'll come home at evening.

Komal: but beta..

Manyata: mom please. Its really important I swear I'll be back soon.

Komal: okay beta. Take care.

They bid all others bye and leave with the driver. Vijay sits in front and both ladies sit at back.

Manyata whispers in Unnati's ears: seems like somebody is dangerously in love with my brother han??

Unnati blushes furiously at this and vijay smirks. Manyata winks at both of them.

Rest of the drive was silent. Manyata was lost in her own thought. The car came to halt.

Manyata looked out the window. It was a huge hospital named SANJEEVANI MENTAL ASYLUM. The words mental asylum pricked her heart like anything. They were going inside the hospital while manyata's foot got rooted on the floor seeing the scenario in front of her. There were many types of people. Some were running around, some were playing, but it was clear that they weren't well(all were mad basically)

Unnati:what's the matter manyata?

Manyata nervously: I don't know Unnati..i I am just scared to go inside to face him again.

Unnati holds her hand: I know you're nervous manyata,its okay everything will be alright.

They go inside. Unnati knocks at the door of the doctor's cabin.

Doctor: come in please.

Unnati: hi shriya.

Doctor: oh unnati, vijay please come in. and this is(she points towards manyata)

Unnati: manyata, and manyata this is shriya shaha uday's doctor and my very good friend of mine.

Doctor: ofcourse come on have a sit.

After getting comfortable with eachother finally shriya started.

Shriya: look manyata I know this will be hard for you infact I insisted Unnati to call you. Uday has suffered through lots of things after you left. This has highly damaged his brain nerves. I don't know how he will react after seeing you. I also don't know how will you react after seeing him. Just please be strong.

Manyata: when do I meet him?

Shriya: I guess you can meet him now. It would me more safe anyway he must be sleeping.

They go near uday's room. Manyata enters the room while the other three watch from the glass window. Uday was sleeping peacefully on the bed. His health was weak. He had becme thin, beard grown a bit shabbily, his hair all untidy and a yellow toy car in his hand. Manyata at first was shocked. She wondered the man who once was the most handsome man in the country, who had no competition in terms of looks was in such a state all because of her. She caressed his cheek. Her touch woke him up.

At first he didn't react. But then suddenly pushed her back. Manyata was taken aback by this reaction. She saw that he was shivering in fear. He got out of bed and went away from her.

Uday shivering with fear: who… who are you?? Why ar..aree you here??

Manyata starts walking towards him: don't get afraid. Its me manyata uday your manyata.

Suddenly he let out a scream.

Uday:NOOO… you can't be manyata you you go away.. my manyata died she died because of me you go away. I know I know some somebody has sent you to kill me na… somebody has sent you.

He suddenly went towards her and held her by neck.

Uday: who are you who are you tell me or I'll kill you.. fast..

Manyata was getting suffocated. Thank god to dr.shriya she came on right with two ward men.

Manyata was shocked would be an understatement. She took a deep breath. She was so shocked that her trance was broken when she saw objects coming towards her. Her eyes moved towards uday to see that he was throwing objects towards her. A vase hit her hand and blood started oozing out. But manyata did not pay hid to her. She stood rooted at the place. Her inner pain was more than the pain her hand was causing. She never knew it had affected him so much. Dr.shriya gave uday sleeping dose. Uday slowly lost his consciousness and the ward men put him on bed again and tied his hands and legs to the rope. Manyata still gave no reaction. She didn't knew how to react. Uday thought she had died. But how?? When?? Why?? All questions aroused in her mind. Shriya had to literally drag manyata outside to bandage her wound. Manyata was just sitting like a dead body. It seemed as if her body had stopped reacting, as if her life was sucked out of her. Unnati vijay got worried for her. After bandaging her hand shriya went to Unnati and vijay.

Vijay: shriya is manyata alright?

Shriya: don't worry guys she is fine. She is just shocked. She just needs little time to digest what just happened. Take her home let her rest for sometime. I hope she would be alright by tomorrow.

Unnati and vijay took manyata home. Everybody was tensed seeing her state but none knew the reason.

NOTE: HEHEHEHE GUYS SO FINALLY UDAY KI ENTRY HO GAI... I HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT. PLEASE DO COMMENT.

~MAHI~

update was so emmotional mahi.loved it loads.loved udays entry.

so manyatha and unathi reached india after five years.

vijay bhai is so understanding pati.loved d bond unnati-vb share.

udays condition is so pathetic dat he not recognicing manyata.

felt so bad for him.y did he said dat manyata is dead .y he think so.

n someone had sent her to kill him.poor manyatha got injured.

and d shock she got seeing udays condition. pooor girl.

loved d chappy so much.now luking forward for next chapter.

try to continue as soon as possible.