LOVE IS PASSION NOT POSSESION... CH-8 pg 67-28/3/14

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: nishaya...
First of all a big "SORRY" for commenting late mahi its ok
Now letz come to the chappy,it was mindblowing and specially that Manyata's filmy picturisation was so very funny, i am eagerly waiting to know there past
Thanx for the pm and please please please continue soon!

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: preya_radev
awesome loved it and the determination of manyata to cure uday the first bit of the past was awesome really loved it and now cant wait for the next part please update soon and thanks for the pm

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: huma12.
awsssmmm mahiii thank god kaminii u r alive 😆

yes i'm mein kaha gai thi heheheheh!!

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: Surish

awww thanks alot glad u liked it!!😃😃

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: ...anju...
AWESOME MAHI.NICE UPDATE .ENJOYED IT LOADS.

POOR UDAY WAS TORTURED.DAMN DAT POLICEMEN.

DEN FB PART WAS SO CUTE n FUNNY.

WANA TO KNOW MORE ABOUT PAST.

CONTINUE SOON.

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: sanah12
Awesome update!
Loved it loads!!
Poor uday he beared so much pain.
I hope he gets well soon.
Manyata is really nice in your story the way u potray her is awesome.
Love the starting of their lovestory.
Wait for the next update.
Do continue soon and thanks for the pm.

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: fireroad99
LOVE IT
AND I LOVE THE FLASHBACK
PM SOON

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: humairaa1
Loved the update
Especially the flashback ⭐️
Shame, poor Uday had to go through so much of pain n torture
Hope he gets well soon
Love Manyata's character
It's soo sweet
Thanks for the pm n plz update soon 😊

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

oh my!!!!!!!!
thats really really shocking!!!!!!
55 likes??
was it that good srsly???
thank u thank u so much guys!!!

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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 5:
THE DREADFUL PAST
(Well guys now the story of her manyata's past is been told by her to doctor!!!)
Days passed Uday and my friendship grew more. Luckily the friend about whom dad had been telling me came out to be uday's uncle and so we did visit each others house frequently! We became like inseparable magnets. We always used to be together. Where Uday manyata has to be there and vice versa! We knew each and every thing about each other. Gradually our friendship turned out to be something more. At the end of std 9th Uday proposed me. Yes we were madly in love with each other. Soon we completed our boards and went to college. I thought Uday would leave me now, as I didnt stand anywhere near where uday's looks did! I was simple and Uday the most handsome. The whole college use to drool over him! Even boys used to admire him. But no he did not leave me. He didn't pay any heed to those stupid bimbos who drooled over him! He was madly in love with me so was I!
At times he used to get possessive and we had small fights over that too but that never became a major problem for us it was like tom and jerry!
But all of a sudden he started behaving weird! He used to get furious when he saw me talking to any guy in the college. This started bringing differences among us. It was during our graduation days that Uday unnati left their uncle's house due to some disputes. He was totally shattered. He only had his sister and me with him. Leaving my love in that condition would have been the most disgusting thing I could have ever done. He was a bit over possessive but he was the best for me. As soon as we finished our studies my parents decided to get us married. 14th Feb 2003, a day I could never forget in my life, the day of my marriage. The day I changed from manyata raizada to Mrs. Udayveer Singh. The first night I spent with him. THE PURE BLISS, THE POOR LOVE I FELT AS IF I WAS ON CLOUD 9th! I changed from a girl to a women to a faithful wife to my love, my husband, my Uday. Initially we had financial problems. Dad led his helping hand to Uday but he refused as he wanted to be independent. He even suggested me to live with my parents till he finds himself a job. But me being stubborn went with him while unnati stayed with my parents. We rented a flat in an old apartment. The moment we entered the flat, a smile crept on my face not cuz of happiness but knowing how tired we were going to get after cleaning that flat. But Uday really made that flat cleaning romantic for me. And also vijay and unnati's help the work became fun.
Uday soon got a job in big company. He did not allow me to work. I had to do typical housewife work. We used to go out for romantic outings almost every week. Slowly Uday started to climb the steps of success and soon he built his own empire MANVEER GROUP OF INDUSTRIES.. I was really very happy little did I know this was going to be start to end of my happiness. Uday started drinking. I used to shout at him for this and gradually our shouts started turning into huge fights. He was in a bad company. He wasn't the same Uday I loved. We started drifting away. It was uday's success party. We all were enjoying. In that I found one of my old classmates rohan. We were good frnds during school days. We were talking when Uday came and excused me from there looking at me with rage. It was weird for me. I asked him what's the matter but he didn't say anything. So I just ignored him thinking I would talk to him at home. The party came to end and while going home I just gave rohan a good bye hug. The drive afterwards to home was a silent one. When we reached home he literally dragged me upstairs.
Me: Uday what's the matter??? Leave my hand... Ahhh! Ur hurting me Uday.
Reaching inside the house he literally banged me on the wall.
Uday: what shit was that with that rohan manyata????
Me: what?? Uday rohans just my old classmate.
Uday: oh really that's the reason you were hugging him so tightly letting him touch u god knows where!!
Me: shut up Uday! Ur drunk plz stop your nonsense you know I love you hez nothing to me. Why don't you understand??
Uday: stop lying manyata!
Me: you know what Uday go to hell.
'Baam' came a slap right across her left cheek. Manyata was shattered but the what happened next was even more shocking. Uday pulled her hair and held her by her cheeks piercing his nails.
Uday: no one apart from me can come near you manyata. You are mine only mine. I'll kill any person that comes near you do you understand me??
Tears flowed endlessly from my eyes. Uday left me there on floor crying all shattered.

That was the first break in our relation. I should have stopped him right there and then but I didn't. I was a fool a real fool to love him so madly!
From that day everything changed between us our lovely heaven became my living nightmare. Uday started coming home all late and most of the time drunk. He did not allow me to go anywhere alone. He used to force himself on me. Those nights no more were pure bliss, no more pure love, they were just his pleasures. There was no more love in our relation. A fine day I found out I was pregnant. I told him expected him to be happy but no he just came to his own conclusions. He thought it was not his child. I was shattered all over again. I was having pain in my stomach. Uday did not pay any heed to it so I went all by myself. By the time I reached home Uday was already home all furious. I was scared first time,scared to death. He saw me with rage.
Uday: where were you?? With your boyfriend han???
Me: Uday please! I went to doctor I had pain in my stomach.
He slapped me left and right.
Uday: you s**t stop lying.. I know I know you were with your cheap boyfriend because of whom you have this baby inside you. You b***h.
Me: stop plz! Plz Uday I'm really tired of your accusations. It is your baby. Its yours! I love you and nobody else! Its better I die rather than listening your dirty assumptions daily!
Uday: die you want to die?? Sure! Don't u dare put this i-m-so innocent act infront of me.
I slapped him tight and that was the biggest mistake that I did. He dragged me to a room. Tied my one hand at the side of bed with rope. He put wooden planks on the window so that the light doesn't enter the house. He removed his belt and beat me black and blue.
Uday: from now on ull stay in this room. I'll show you what means death. What are the consequences of cheating your husband. You are own by me manyata Singh.
Me: uday plz I never cheated you I love you. Plz leave me. What about my family??
Uday smirked : don't worry I can tell your family that youvhave went to london with unnati to help her settle there they won't doubt me would they??
Me: Uday leave me please...
He ignored me and went from there.
From then my life was worst than a caged animal.
He used to give me food only once a day. Sometimes didn't even give me anything for 2-3 days. Daily used to come home drunk, beat me, raped me and enjoy my pain. He let me change my dress only once in 3-4 months. I never saw day light. I stayed in dark. I got only a glass of water for whole day. I was loosing my mentality. At times I used to get so hungry that I ate paper bits bed sheet cockroaches whatever I get. My family tried to contact me but Uday very easily convinced them that I ran away with my other boyfriend. My body was all bruised with teeth marks, belt marks and sometimes even iron rods. I was 5 month pregnant at that time. He came home drunk as usual untied me and beat black and blue, threw me with such force that the bed rod hit my stomach. The pain was so much that I couldn't bear it and my eyes closed. When I woke up I found myself tied to bed. A doctor was standing in that room. Fear clearly evident on doctor's face. May be Uday had threatened him too. The doctor pitied me. Lowered his eyes and just said " mam you have lost your baby".
That came as the most dreadful shock to me. I went in depression not able to stand that pain. Still Uday didn't stop. He continued his torture. Time passed and I was pregnant for second time still Uday didn't believe me. By mistake Uday once forgot to lock the door. I did not want to loose this child was the only thought that came to my mind. I gathered all my strength cut the rope with nearby glass piece and slowly crawled outside the room. As I went in the day light it seemed as if the sun was burning me alive. Some how I was able to come out of the apartment. I crawled out on road endlessly begging for help. Soon some ladies came to me seeing my state. They asked me my name from where was I etc etc but I could only whisper my name MANYATA... MANYATA
RAIZADA and soon my eyelids got heavy.
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When My eyes opened. I found myself in a white room. There my family was standing looking at me all shattered well I could understand their pain seeing the apple of their eye in such a state. The police soon entered and asked me questions. At first I wasnt able to answer but then I gained all my strength and finally told them. The police arrested Uday soon and I was sent to London for treatment. I had only one hope in my life and that was the little angel in my stomach I had to live for it. Soon ahana came into my life and all the new pieces started replacing the broken pieces in my heart.
That's it doctor that was my dreadful past.
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By the time manyata concluded shriya(doc) was literally crying. She herself couldn't imagine the pain this women had went through. She held manyata's hand
Shriya: you are a great women manyata. You suffered so much still u are ready to help that beast why????
Manyata: because his love is still pure. You must be thinking I'm mad but no he's not a beast he's only a lover that forgot the line between passion and possession of love. Every 1 in life gets second chance. And I give him this chance of making him a good human.
She concluded as she wiped her tears smiled at shriya and left the room with a new confidence.

-mahi-
Hufff guys
My back is paining like hell.
Oh my I guess this is the longest update I ever gave.
Sorry for language
But it was necessary
I hope I get huge comments and likes

Edited by MAHI1198 - 12 years ago

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