TRULY...MADLY..DEEPLY - Updated Chap 5 - Pg 27 - Page 21

Well sha what can I say about the update? More like what can I say about your writing that you don't already know?? Words often fail me when it comes to the way your mind works. I loved it immensely, after a while to get an update from you packed with so much veer and maya and his anger and his crazy madness for his love. I told you before that I just love this veer of yours, flaws, anger, negativity, everything and his passionate moments. He really is something else. His rawness and maya's innocence combined, gosh what a couple.

As for that saab, by god I swear I can wring that mans neck with my bare hands. He is the height of evil, he really needs to pay for his deeds badly. Poor maya happy to be with her jai and baba yet living in fear of saab and what he might do to them. That scene when she goes to dadi's room unknown that veer was sitting in the darkness was just to cute especially when she talked to herself. She is really caught up badly and then came out the fireworks and boy did veer light up the sky with his boiling passionate anger… daydreaming here…. Love it. While I admit he was harsh, his reasons were justified. He loves her and yet all she does is want to get away from him, her reasons are also justifiable sha you need to give these guys a break now. Veer has hurt to much so has maya, I love that line…'and a hurt veer is a very dangerous veer'. Veers dialogues were brilliant.

Poor rahul, his a nice guy. Now that jerk raj wants him and even worse veer, please don't let anything happen to him. He is perfect for unnathi and she has really suffered a lot, if anything that douchebag raj and his slimeball father in law need to meet their doomed fates soon. And my favourite fatty missing maya and traumatized from rajs terrible behavior. He is Rajs son???? I am sure of it that is why he was so scared and said unnathi came to the centre to spy on him?? The bloody evil jerk, how I wish I could punch him hard in the face.

One more thing what did maya actually agree to do or has done? Because from veers thoughts 'that was not how he wanted it to be, how he dreamed it would be but he said nothing', What exactly was he talking about that he didn't want it to be that way??

I loved the quotes that fitted very well with insanity of veers crazy love and this beautifully intense love story of yours sha.

You have a great eid. Will be waiting for you to get back sooon