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that when veer reached dere he didn't find unnati and raj and all the fissco... RAJ HAD LEFT BY THAT TIME AND TEH FIASCO DIDNT TAKE PLACE IN THE MARQUEE WHERE THE CHARITY WAS, IT WAS OUTSIDE, THAT WAS HOW RAJ THREW THE CHAIN FROM UNNATHI'S HAND IN AND WHEN VEER ENTERED, HE SAW IT ON THE FLOOR. 😉 HOPE CONFUSION IS CLEAR NOW
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Thank you to each and everyone of you for liking and to all those who have commented as well. I truly appreciate it... This update is a surprise update for anu on her birthday... and to all of you who have been waiting patiently. love you all...
TRULY...MADLY...DEEPLY... CHAPTER 5

'NEVER SKIP TO THE HAPPY ENDING '. YOU JUST MIGHT MISS OUT ON THE BEST PART OF THE STORY'

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Veer had said nothing all the way home. He had never been more relieved than when he found her, she had no idea just how much he loved her' He watched closely the tearful reunion when she met her baba and jai. While Brijraj looked happy to see her as she hugged him, the worry in his eyes said something else as maya had the samelook in her eyes and it was well noticed by veer turning around to walk straight into his father'. Who was standing and looking as pissed off watching the sisters family reunion.

'I see you found her'

The stinch of his cigar circling around

'I had to'.'

'Such a nice family reunion'

He said with mock sarcasm and turned coldly to look at veer

'Pretty young things would get any mans blood racing'. And many men would kill to have a piece of that'.'

Veers fist clenched as his jaw tightened and eyes raging, he turned to walk away not wanting his anger to get the better off him although his father was walking on very thin ice.

'One more thing veer'. I don't need to remind you of your engagement tomorrow. You can have your fun with this plaything of yours just don't overtire yourself'

Veer turned around and looked icily at his father.

'The engagement has been postponed until dadi is better and out of hospital'

'What, since when?' Everything has been organized for'.'

Veer cut him annoyed with his lack of consideration for his granny and his love

'Everything has been cancelled, malhotra is aware of it'

Veer smirked arrogantly and instead of walking to his room he now headed towards maya, he smiled at his mom who was standing in the hallway. Saab was pissed off.. BLOODY wh**e IS BACK AND ALREADY WEAVING HER MAGIC ON HIM.. YOU ARE GOING TO REGRET COMING BACK'.

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Ms Bruganza had been searching for Maya since early morning. Panic and worry visible on her face as she was unable to find her throughout the centre. Fatty had thrown quiet a tantrum refusing to eat, and last nights drama had left him even more disturbed, a little boy to witness such violence. It had really been quiet a night and she braced herself for what was to come today, knowing that Raj Singhania will be back' for his wife and MORE SO FOR REVENGE FROM RAHUL.

Unnathi was in no condition to go home after last night. Her heart went out to her, such a beautiful young woman to be married to a heartless monster like Singhania, she was physically drained and mentally exhausted from the abuse but the biggest shock was finding out about Fatty'.. Ms Bruganza shook her head brushing away the thought as she turned the door handle to the room she let unnathi stay in. To her surprise unnathi was up and staring out the window lost in deep thought.

She turned to face Ms Bruganza, her lower lip swollen and cheek bruised badly. She looked like she had cried a lot and knew there was only one thing to do, she knew raj and his henchmen will be here for unnathi and rahul. She didn't care about herself now, her kids will be taken care off by the caretakers she just had to get them out'. Together yes at her age she was no fool to see the unwiltered love between them. She thought rahul and maya made a couple but looking at rahuls eyes last night, he loved this women '. And she loved him

Unnathi was scared as hell when she heard what Ms Bruganza had told her, the last thing she wanted was for anything to happen to rahul because of her'.

'I cant take that chance, you don't know what raj is capable of. He will '.'

'No that's why I want you two to leave now, before they get here and don't worry about anything else'

Rahul was standing at the door listening to Ms Bruganza and Unnathi while fatty was tugging his arm.

Joseph the guard had walked in interrupting Ms Bruganza's conversation

'Sorry madam I have searched the entire ground and every block in the centre, mona didi is nowhere to be found and her clothes is still in her room'

Fear was now evident in her face' as she noticed Rahul who was baffled.

'Madam I think we should inform the police'

'No there is no need for that, I know where Mona' I mean MAYA IS and she is safe'

Both rahul and Ms Bruganza looked at unnathi questioningly as joseph shrugged his shoulders confused and walked away.

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Veer was never much of a sleeper and after last night there was no way he could sleep. It was not like unnathi to not return his call, he was even more surprised to find out she had didn't come home with their mother but his mom had re assured him not to worry raj had probably picked her up. He shook his head something just didn't feel right'.

He had a lot to do today, major one being the meeting with malhotra's daughter Ria. She had called him 10 mins ago saying it was urgent and she had to see him assuming it had something to do with him calling of the engagement. He continued to stare out the window as he watched kaka drive his father out'..reflecting on last nights events, he could not remember the last time he was that angry.

Maya had walked in, her wet hair tossed to the one side to hide the mark' she had his coffee in her hand. She smiled faintly how she did it, he will never know. He took in the sight in front of him, she was wearing a long light yellow salwaar, that was as simple and beautiful as she was... Her eyes looked so tired and puffy from all the crying, how he hated himself for being so harsh and rude with her but he had to, he just couldn't think straight after what she had told him and yet here she was pretending like nothing ever happened. She still couldn't look him in the eye, he scared her a fact he was not proud of but his anger was something he could never contain or control and just the thought of her being in some one else's arms in some one else's bed'. He gritted his teeth, clenching his jaw and closed his eyes trying to calm his almost burning mind.

Placing his coffee on his desk, she adjusted her dupatta , her chain entangled in her hair and his eyes opened instantly calming him. Her innocence so rare, so beautiful, so untainted' so sweet and priceless..He knew just by looking into her hazelnut coloured eyes that she can never give herself to anyone else, nor will she ever , she was 'NO IS MY MAYA?

As he walked towards her watching her struggle with the chain unaware that he was now in front of her. She flinched as his fingers touched hers helping to set the chain free, long tense moments passed as he stared down at her wanting to apologise that was not how he wanted it to be, how he dreamed it would be but he said nothing, she tore her eyes away from his penetrating piercing dark eyes turning her head, she swallowed hard as fingers caught her chin holding her firmly in place turning her face to meet his.

His anger last night had scared her to the point that she just couldn't bring herself to speak. He could sense and feel her apprehensions. His thumb gently caressed her lips''

'I WOULD KILL FOR YOU, GIVE UP EVERYTHING I OWN FOR YOU'.'

Maya moved away and started to walk out when he held her wrist, she closed her eyes not turning around as she heard him ''

'BUT I WILL NEVER GIVE YOU UP'

She pulled her hand and ran out of the room not seeing where she was actually running to and bumped into

'Oh ' sorry. I am so sorry'

She smiled as she looked at the young women who looked so on edge and constantly looking around, like she was scared.

'I am looking for veer'.'

Maya just looked at her

'I am Ria Malhotra, his fianc'

Maya gulped swallowing hard as she smiled faintly

'I am Maya' just' MAYA' go straight down the hallway and turn right, veer is in his office'

'Thank you'

Maya smiled and walked away while ria turned around to look at her as she walked away'. SHE HAS TO BE VEERS MAYA

Flashback previous night

She tossed and turned for most of the night unable to sleep. Her mind and her heart racing at what happened today, she turned to look at innocent jai who looked so beautiful asleep. Maya wished to see that serenity in her face always, she and her baba had talked about it and knew they had to leave as soon as possible cause saab will make their lives very difficult if not impossible. Brijraj knowing full well how veer had tightened the security and decided that they would have to wait until the engagement ceremony was taking place to leave. She was so confused, while her heart had never been happier. It hurt like hell knowing how much she has hurt veer, knowing that she can never be with him or tell him the truth. She knew Ms Bruganza and rahul would be worried when they saw she was not there, she had to speak to rahul and tell him atleast. But how? She had no access to a phone, not in her room anyway. She silently cursed herself for not wanting to learn and giving back the phone veer had got for her'. Dadi' she remembered.. Yes I will go to her room now, I know she must have been angry with me for leaving but I will explain and tell her everything and why its so necessary for us to leave.

Walking towards dadi's room she was grateful it was across the hall far away from saabs room. The last thing she wanted to do was see him.

She knocked softly waiting a reply from dadi and grew impatient on hearing no reply turned the door knob walking in. The room was dark and she walked slowly careful not to startle dadi as she whispered

'Dadi''..

Veer was resting in dadi's chair in the darkness reflecting on the events of tonight. He was inches away from going to maya earlier as he so badly needed her but he decided to give her some time, he had increased the security and would make sure she would never leave him again'. His thoughts were interrupted by soft knocking on the door. Trying to figure out who would be knocking on dadi's door at this part of the night knowing dadi was in hospital'. Still not leaving the chair, he watched in amusement as she tip toed to dadi's bed '.. it reaffirmed one thing she really did not hear dadi calling out her name earlier, she doesn't even know dadi is in hospital' Oh Maya

'Dadi'

She felt the bed and looked around realizing that she is not in her room, switching on her bed side lamp.

'Dadi kaha gaya' probably on pilgrimage again'

She looked baffled wondering where she could be until her eyes fell on the phone on the side table, atleast now she could call '.. RAHUL

Veer watched her in fascination, her simplicity and innocence talking to herself. Her profile in the light while he sat across her, it was when she picked up the telephone and started to dial someone'..

'Soch maya, try to remember the last number'.'

She remembered and finally punched in the last number of rahuls cell'. as the phone was about to ring, the line went dead'.

Unknown to her veer had pulled out the cable and now stood a few steps away from her while her back faced him

'RAHUL' RAHUL'

She looked at the receiver confused and then spoke again

'Rahul can you hear me? '

Her breathing hitched as she saw the cables in his hand, still holding on to the phone in her hand. She closed her eyes tightly as if he would not be there when she opened them as he took the phone from her hand placing it back where it belonged. He said nothing, his eyes said it all. She opened her eyes to see him standing with a wicked glint that sent shivers down her spine. Mentally she was trying to figure out how fast she could get to the door before him, she looked at the door and he read her thoughts only to well.

'Don't even think about it'..'

She swallowed hard before finally speaking

'Veer''' I just came to see dadi.. and '

'and I saw dadi is not here '..

'so I should be going now'

She said that and was turned to leave when he grabbed her wrist, she didn't turn around. Instead her blood went racing

'Who were you trying to call maya?'

'No one ' veer I was just'..'

'WHO THE F*&K is rahul maya? '

The disdain in his voice'.she could feel his anger in his firm tight grip on her wrist. His teeth gritting and the softness in his tone was like the calm before the storm.

She tried to free herself from his grip and finally succeeded only to find herself now crushed against the wall and his body. His eyes were blazing with something she could not place as he stared darkly into her soft eyes that would just melt under their gaze. While she knew very little of veers actual business dealings , she knew very well it was dangerous and not very legal, she knew if pushed veer like his father he too could be very dangerous and not someone you want to get on the bad side off. His temper and stubborness as dadi had told her many times came from his grandfather.

'Veer'.'

'Rahul is my'..'

'Your what maya? '

'Arrhh, veer you are hurting me'

His body was crushing her as his hot breathe was on her face, his hands on either side of the wall.

'Your what maya? My maya leaves me after promising she never would, she lives her life pretending I don't exist and then she sneaks up trying to call some one else? To do what save you from prison? do you really hate this place so much maya? Do you really hate me so much? Was everything really a lie?'

His words had taken her completely, the hurt in his eyes. She couldn't see it any longer, how could she repeatedly hurt this man who has loved her so truly, so deeply, so madly'. She wanted nothing more than to caress his cheeks and calm him telling him the truth that she never meant to hurt him or leave him and she loves him with all her heart'.. but then what would happen? Bloodshed and more problems, he would refuse everything and saab was a savage man like malhotra what would they do to jai or baba?... No maya

'Veer, rahul is a teacher at the centre' we are good'

The icy look in his eyes caused her to swallow hard, and not continue any further'. HE DIDN'T WANT TO HEAR

'Do you know maya there was a time when you would never be able to stay without hearing my voice, when I was in London'. Do you remember? I would hear your voice and know exactly what to say and do to make your day better, I used to be all you knew, all you ever wanted'. If ever you had a problem you turned to me ' SO NOW WHATS CHANGED? HOW DID YOU MANAGE TO STAY AWAY FROM ME FROM ME FOR SO FU*KEN LONG?'

This is what the real anger is about, he is letting out what he has suppressed for the past year, oh veer if only I could tell you just how much I have needed and missed you everyday. It was not easy for me, I am so sorry for your pain I would take it all back if I could.

She just couldnt help herself as she reached up and gently brushed her fingers against his cheek, he looked so vulnerable so incredibly gorgeous as his eyes reflected the depth of his soul that only she could see. Without thinking she stood up on her toes and leaned in to kiss his forehead, his eyes closed as she kissed both his eyelids, the tip of his nose, either side of his cheek before pausing looking at his lips hesitating. He leaned in dismissing any thoughts as he captured her lips, the sensuous softness of her lips were so soothing and calming, its her sweetness and untainted innocence that makes her all the more priceless to him. He consumed and savagely claimed her mouth as she gave in. He broke the kiss harshly leaving her breathless as his eyes now reflected something she didn't quite like. She was still leaning against the wall unable to feel her legs, he reached out cooly pulling out his phone from his pocket and dialed a number while still not breaking eye contact with her.

'GET ME ALL YOU HAVE ON RAHUL???

He was looking at maya as he prompted her for rahuls surname, maya said nothing creasing her eyebrows as fear now crept into her'. Realizing just where his mind had unraveled to

'Veer' please'

He shook his head slowly and she knew it meant he didn't want to hear. His eyes not leaving hers'he continued back on his call.

' Actually lets make it even better, I don't want his details, I want him here tomorrow '. Make it happen' yes its RAHUL, I don't give a F*#K about his surname, his from the'..Golden Era Care Centre. I want him'

He ended the call, while his eyes never left her face. She now saw that ruthless streak that can and will go to any lengths, she was scared for rahul. When veer was like this it was very hard to talk to him but now she had an excuse for getting away for jai, baba and herself and she knew rahul will be safe, veer will never harm anyone that she claims to love? Love? Maya are you seriously going to do that to him now? Make him believe that its rahul you love and not him??? It will kill him? And a hurt veer is a very dangerous veer'.. NO MAYA!! VEER WILL NEVER HARM YOU OR RAHUL ONCE YOU TELL HIM THAT YOU WANT TO MARRY HIM. Just do this maya for everyone, veer is better off without you and think what this is doing to jai being back here with jagat around and baba having to constantly hear his daughters insults'. No you have to do this

She battled with her inner mind and thoughts before finally deciding to speak

'Veer we need to talk'

'Do we now maya?

His smirked as he looked at her, his expression blank

'Veer please listen to me, you cant hurt rahul?'

'Really are you asking me or telling me what I can or cant do?

'Rahul is a very nice guy, he has a good heart and was there for me when I needed someone and we '..'

She paused before continuing further and mentally tried to talk herself into going further, she didn't know how to look into his eyes.

Through gritted teeth he leaned in inches away from her face ' ' AND YOU WHAT MAYA''

''and we' we'.love each other and will be getting married'.. ahhh'

She yelped in pain as she felt his fingers dig into her arm, his eyes strained with anger and madness as she was forcefully pressed to the wall.

He was barely containing his anger initially and hearing those words come out of her mouth made him lose control'..W*F?? REALLY? WHAT NEW BULLSHIT IS THIS? SHE LEAVES ME TO FIND SOME ASSHOLE AND CLAIMS TO LOVE HIM AND MARRY' F*#k'. NO

'arrrggh, veer you are hurting me'

'NO MAYA YOU DON'T KNOW THE MEANING OF THE WORD HURT AND PAIN? YOU HAVE MADE A MOCKERY OF MY LOVE FOR YOU, I ALWAYS HELD ON TO THE HOPE THAT I WOULD FIND YOU AND SET THINGS RIGHT BUT YOU NEVER WANTED TO BE FOUND, YOU F*#K WITH MY HEAD AND MY LIFE AND NOW YOU WANT TO MARRY SOME ONE ELSE?? WHY MAYA IS HE BETTER IN BED?

' Veer please try to understand, I never meant to hurt you, I ' it.. WHAT?'

Her mouth closed in shock the minute she registered what he had implied, she had never seen veer this angry and it scared the hell out of her. He was so blinded in his rage that he couldn't see how his fingers had bruised her arms so badly or even care to hear anything else from her now. Now she was seeing that dangerous side that she often heard the other servants talk about.

'ENOUGH MAYA'.. DON'T GIVE ME THAT BULLSHIT ABOUT NOT WANTING TO HURT ME. EVERYTHING THAT HAS EVER HAPPENED BETWEEN US WAS A LIE. TURNS OUT DAD WAS RIGHT, EVEN THOUGH I REFUSED TO LISTEN TO HIM. HE WARNED ME ABOUT YOUR KIND, WHO POSSESS THE ART OF SEDUCTION AND ONCE THEY HAVE THEIR FULL, MOVE ON TO THE NEXT BED'

His jaws clenched, eyes raging as he banged his hand hard against the wall almost like it pained him to say those words. Tears streamed down her cheek as he said those words.

'Aww my beautiful maya, crying. TSK TSK' NOW that's not good, but don't worry I am sure we can work something out and I can try to ensure that your friend'. Hmmm RAHUL yes that rahul actually lives'..'

Maya had never expected things to go so far, the fire in his eyes, the anger in his words. She drove him to the edge. Now it was his turn to hurt her with his sarcasm and brutal words.

He looked at her and she almost saw him soften up for a bit when he leaned in and licked away her tears, she closed her eyes not wanting to look at him as he pushed her head to one side exposing her neck, and before she knew it she felt his teeth grip and bite into her soft skin with such force.

'ARHHH'

'sshhh maya'

He quickly quietened her screams with his lips on her mouth.

'v'eeer please'

He licked his lips pulling away as he stared at her swollen, shaking lips, her eyes were closed and tears poured out, he stared at the mark on her neck. Bold and big enough for everyone to see'. YES SHE IS MINE AND NO RAHUL OR ANY OTHER F*&KER IS GOING TO HAVE HER. While it pained him and took a lot of will power to hold himself back from soothing her pain and brushing away her tears, he had to stand his ground. She was running around in circles and if he gave in she would pretend and then run again and that is something he will never allow again, she was not going to run away from him again.No matter what she said, he could see his love in her eyes, so why is she denying it? Or was he mistaken? NO EVEN NOW HER EYES BETRAY HER, ITS LIKE SHE IS FIGHTING SOME KIND OF INNER BATTLE

'Veer listen to me'. '

'Why should I listen maya so you can pretend and then the minute I turn my back you run again?'

She shook her head, she couldn't blame him after the last time. She suddenly felt sick to her stomach and weak from all the drama and not eating the entire day. She was emotionally and mentally drained, her veer was looking at her like she was some kind of a dirty cheap women, she had caused him nothing but pain when all he ever gave her was love and happiness. His life would be so much better if she was never in it, if she was not around''everyones life would be better

'You will never give me up, will you veer?'

The look in his eyes said it all as it burnt into her soft pained eyes that was pleading with him

'Don't ask questions you already know the answer to maya'

'Please don't hurt rahul' '

'Hmmm, me not hurting him that all depends on your choices maya'..'

And before she could reply or respond, his torturous mouth was on hers again. His kiss was dangerous, hypnotic and pleasurably painful. He bit her lip when she refused him access to her mouth and devoured her tongue, claiming his right on her mouth. Like his kiss claimed on her body and his words on her soul

'SO MAYA WHAT WILL YOU DO FOR ME IN ORDER TO KEEP YOUR LITTLE RAHUL SAFE?.. I AM OPEN TO COMPROMISE PROVIDED MY REQUIREMENTS ARE MET AND NEEDS SATISFIED'

He smirked as he caressed her cheek and brushed his thumb against her swollen lips, she shut her eyes as tears poured out uncontrollably, falling to the ground'.. she couldn't look at the man'. AT THE DEVIL she had unleashed.

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OK Guys that was Chapter 5... hope you guys enjoyed. please continue with the support and love and i might surprise you guys sooner than you think. i know i havent replied to the comments but i will as soon as i get a break... Please excuse any spelling and grammor errors, my life is always a rush... lol
oh yes and to all celebrating eid... EID MUBARAK AND HOPE ITS A SPIRITUALLY BEAUTIFUL AND ENLIGHTENING ONE.
Stay Safe... try not to forget me..lol
love you all.🤗
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Edited by Shahista01 - 12 years ago
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Thank You for the awesome b'day gift Shah didi


Such a lovely Update
Thanks for updating soon for me


The starting Quotes were great
as usual U chose Quotes that fit ur current story line
U hav a knack for that ...

I m glad that Maya is back
Giriraj does nt seem too happy
Please please let sumthing bad happen to Giri
Lol



I do hope Rahul and Unnati relationship
blossoms
I hate Raj
he is nt worthy of Unnati

Loved these lines

she was 'NO IS MY MAYA?


'I WOULD KILL FOR YOU, GIVE UP EVERYTHING I OWN FOR YOU'.'

'BUT I WILL NEVER GIVE YOU UP'


Veer's attitude is great
Sacrificing type of love is depressing to read at times
But the love Veer has for Maya is Great
He vud never give her up
Like Udayveer in DEK
the saying " If U love something let it go "
Jus isnt meant for a few love stories


SHE HAS TO BE VEERS MAYA

Wonder what Ria knows about Maya
she doesnt seem to b a threat to manveer relationship
at present

Flash back was beautiful
U managed to weave your magic with well
chosen words and singular dialogues that stood out


Another good quote



I m sure both Veer and Maya feel about each other this way
We all have that one person in our life who means the world to us

and if v dont ... thn life abhi baaki hai boss


Thanks for such a beautiful Gift

Love You

Hugs

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WOOW WOOW WOOW I WANT TO TYPE 100s OF WOWS FOR DIS UPDATE SHAHI.BUT I AM LAZY. BEFORE GIVING THANKS TO U,SHUD THANK ANU FIRST.OTHERWISE U MIGHT NOT HAVE COME AND GIVE US DIS UPDATE.

SHAHI I REALLY WANT TO TEACH DAT SAAB A LESSON SO DAT HE WONT COME AGAIN IN WAY OF MAYAVEER. UV IS INTELLIGENT. HE POSTPONDED D ENGAGEMENT & I THINK HE HAD TOLD EVERYTHING TO RIA.

OMG THERE IS ALREADY ONE VILLIAN NAMED RAJ WHOM RAHUL HAD TO DEAL WID .NOW, MAYA BY SAYING SHE LOVES HIM WILL CREATE VEER ANOTHER VILLIAN FOR RAHUL.ONLY GOD KNOWS WAT WILL UV DO TO HIM.

OOO MY GOD VEER IS ON FULL ANGRY MODE .DEN HE HAD D SHADES OF JEALOUS, POSSESSIVE MAD LOVER. YUVRAJ OF DEKHA WAS MY FAV. BUT DIS VEER CAN GIVE TOUGH COMPETITION WID UV.

LOVED ALL MAYAVEER SCENES SO MUCH.IF MAYA HAD NOT LIED TO VEER MAY B BEAST INSIDE VEER HAD NOT CAME OUT. NOW WAT IS HE GOING TO ASK MAYA FOR NOT DOING ANY HARM TO RAHUL.

MINDBLOWING SUPERB FANTASTIC UPDATE SHA.ENJOYED EVERY SECOND I READ DIS CHAPPY.LUKING FORWARD FOR ANOTHER ACTION PACKED CHAPPY WID LOADS OF VEER.TRY TO CONTINUE SOON. DANXS FOR PM.

U SAID DIS SS HAVE ONLY SIX CHAPTERS. SEEMS LIKE IT WONT END IN 6. WE WILL GET SOME MORE. VERY GOOD. DANXS SHA FOR TAKING SOME PRECIOUS TIME FROM UR BUSY LIFE TO GIVE US DIS UPDATE .

EID MUBARAK TO U TOO SHAHI.ENJOY WELL & COME BACK SOON.NEXT TIME PLZ UPDATE D or R.
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