TRULY...MADLY..DEEPLY - Updated Chap 5 - Pg 27

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

awesome chapter...
I really really loved veer...
hez such a pure lover...
poor Maya yar...
damn that Saab...
feeling sad fr both...
well written...
update soon yar...

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Ravneet Kaur

@Fantasyangel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Superb update shahista... it was awsm...👏it was full of manveer...yipeee😃 cont it soon nd thanku fr the pm...

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

beautifully update loved it well written they consummated and now she is leaving him how sad awesome update hope he finds out why she is leaving thanks for the pm

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

loved this part a lot... really awesome just loved it that veer came back and the scene well hot scene between him and maya were just fab god when veer wakes up he wont find his maya next to him I just hope he doesn't lose hope and gets maya back somehow because im loving this veer update soon and thanks for the pm

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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

hey shahi

comment edited on page 13

have a luk

Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Awesome update,
Can't believe how jagat used jai
Shame, I feel bad for manyata n jagat
Thanks for pm n plz update soon 😊

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

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azwa

@fireroad99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

sad that maya is abt to leave going to miss her

upload soon

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Awesome update Shahi 👏. Very well-written , each scene was perfectly described 👍🏼. Manveer scene was electric 😳 , I thoroughly enjoyed that interaction. Please continue soon, thanks for the pm😊.