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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Amazing Update Shah Didi

The beginning was superb
these lines

I'll be your dream, I'll be your wish I'll be your fantasy.
I'll be your hope, I'll be your love be everything that you need.
I love you more with every breath truly madly deeply do..
I will be strong I will be faithful 'cause I'm counting on A new beginning.
A reason for living. A deeper meaning.

I want to stand with you on a mountain.
I want to bathe with you in the sea.
I want to lay like this forever.
Until the sky falls down on me
Oh can you see it baby?
You don't have to close your eyes 'cause it's standing right before you.
All that you need will surely come

are truly beautiful
They are Amazing ...
the will power to do anything for one's lover is worth
admiring ...

The entire update was too too too good

Maya stammering infront of Veer was Cute
All their Dialogues were Awesome
Great Work Shah Didi


this part of the dialogues was very nice

Nahi.. that's..umm, not what I meant I mean .. everyone has left for Mumbai and '

' I know, we are alone' '


I cud nearly feel the room heating up whn

Veer said I know We are Alone

Haiye Mai Mar Java ...


Sad That Maya is about to leave

Fingers crossed for a happy ending

Do cont ASAP


Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

LOVED IT.LOVED IT.LOVED IT SOOO MUCH SHAHI.

UPDATE WAS DELICIOUS๐Ÿ˜ณ N MANVEERILICIOUS ๐Ÿ˜ณ


DIS UPDATE IS FULL OF MANVEER ESPLY VEER.

VEERILICIOUS.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.SO, VEER IS BACK.


WOOOW SHA, LOVED โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ THOSE LINES OF SAVAGE

GARDEN AT D BEGINING.


LOVED ALL MANVEER SCENES SO MUCH.BEAUTIFULLY

WRITTEN.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


MANYATA CANT RESIST VEER NA.VEER IS SUCH A CHARMER

๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ.


HOW CAN JAGGAT PLAY WITH Js FEELINGS LIKE DAT.HE IS

PROVED EXACTLY GIRIRAJs SON.๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก


SO MANVEER UNITED.NOW MANYATA IS LEAVING UDAY.

DAT WAS SAD.๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ


NOW WAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT.TO KNOW DAT U PLZ

CONTINUE SOON.


THANKS FOR PM N THANKS FOR THIS

LOVELY UPDATE SHA. ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

๐Ÿ˜ƒANJU๐Ÿ˜ƒ



Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Amazing Update Shah Didi Thank you anu๐Ÿ˜‰


The beginning was superb
these lines
these lines are from the song by savage garden called truly, madly, deeply. you must listen to it sometime, its an old song but beautiful and very peacful...
I'll be your dream, I'll be your wish I'll be your fantasy.
I'll be your hope, I'll be your love be everything that you need.
I love you more with every breath truly madly deeply do..
I will be strong I will be faithful 'cause I'm counting on A new beginning.
A reason for living. A deeper meaning.

I want to stand with you on a mountain.
I want to bathe with you in the sea.
I want to lay like this forever.
Until the sky falls down on me
Oh can you see it baby?
You don't have to close your eyes 'cause it's standing right before you.
All that you need will surely come

are truly beautiful
They are Amazing ...
the will power to do anything for one's lover is worth
admiring ... it is really worth admiring hearing of people who go far for that love

The entire update was too too too good

Maya stammering infront of Veer was Cute .. veer makes it impossible to concentrate on anything else.. let alone brain registering speech.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
All their Dialogues were Awesome thank you
Great Work Shah Didi glad you think so


this part of the dialogues was very nice

Nahi.. that's..umm, not what I meant I mean .. everyone has left for Mumbai and '

' I know, we are alone' '

lol.. anu๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰...

I cud nearly feel the room heating up whn

Veer said I know We are Alone

Haiye Mai Mar Java ... lol.. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†


Sad That Maya is about to leave .. yes she had too

Fingers crossed for a happy ending .. hopefully it will be where there is veer there is definitely a way.

Do cont ASAP.. lol.. will try too

thanks anu ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: annesha18

unres ๐Ÿ˜‰
yes first to comment hehehehehhe thats great anni
i love this ss jiji aww i am glad you do
thank you a zillion time for updating it you welcome
i loved it omg omg.. lol i am so glad you enjoyed it anni
poor jai haan such is life
how could jaggat use her that way yes sad reality
maya playing in the rain was super cute.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
awn veer came back yes he had too.. this is his story
i tell you he is such a demanding lover lol voh toh hain, lol thats what makes him so alluring
so good they united not only with body
but even in soul yes they are meant to be.. come hell or high water
shit maya is leaving.. yep sadly
please try to update super asap .. lol ๐Ÿ˜†
hugzz anni ryt back at ya .. thank you

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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow๐Ÿ‘...that was fantastic๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...loved all the converstion between maya nd veer...bt it was sad that maya leaving veer๐Ÿ˜ญ...bt i know veer surely find her...pls pm me next time...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

wow๐Ÿ‘...that was fantastic๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Thaks prerna.
...loved all the converstion between maya nd veer.. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰ glad you did
.bt it was sad that maya leaving veer๐Ÿ˜ญ...bt i know veer surely find her...pls pm me next time...

ok will surely pm you, please send me a buddy request.
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Posted: 12 years ago

OMG..OMG... Can this day get any better. A pm from my favourite writer with my favourite stories updated..

I have to RES. will comment and read later.
UNRES๐Ÿ˜†
wow..simply just wow sha๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
It was written so beautifully and full on manveer... ๐Ÿ‘
I cant describe in words just how much i love this ss and its only the second chapter.
So veer is back and looking as gorgeous, dark and dominating as ever.
i loved it
i could picture this whole scene, M locking the windows, the rain and veers presence
enthralling M. It was written superbly, i love te dialogues and i love that you made veer
a bad boy, so both jagat and him are also apart of the underhanded deals.
The passion anddepth with which you write can be felt so easily, it was full of intensity and damn HOTT sha ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ณ
Even would oout going into specifics of their lovemaking, it was HOTT. and the dialogues and veers presence affecting maya just superb.. i throughly enjoyed.
So she gave herself to the man she loved to soothe his pain but also knowing the more she denied it, he would never let her out of his sight. but come morning and she is leaving๐Ÿ˜ญ
veer will be devastated when he finds out but even more so he will be angry.. and i love angry veer..๐Ÿ˜† but he will find her, he has too. please sha its a such a short story dont keep them apart too long but at the same time i also dont want you to rush it.. it would spoil the element of intrigue and intensity that you have spun into the story so well.
well thats enough from me, i just cant get enough of your stories you know that. Thanks again for pm and sorry for the late reply.. hats off sha.. waiting impatiently for next episode..
Edited by ricna - 12 years ago

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