OMG..OMG... Can this day get any better. A pm from my favourite writer with my favourite stories updated..
I have to RES. will comment and read later.
UNRES๐
wow..simply just wow sha๐๐๐
It was written so beautifully and full on manveer... ๐
I cant describe in words just how much i love this ss and its only the second chapter.
So veer is back and looking as gorgeous, dark and dominating as ever.
i loved it
i could picture this whole scene, M locking the windows, the rain and veers presence
enthralling M. It was written superbly, i love te dialogues and i love that you made veer
a bad boy, so both jagat and him are also apart of the underhanded deals.
The passion anddepth with which you write can be felt so easily, it was full of intensity and damn HOTT sha ๐๐ณ
Even would oout going into specifics of their lovemaking, it was HOTT. and the dialogues and veers presence affecting maya just superb.. i throughly enjoyed.
So she gave herself to the man she loved to soothe his pain but also knowing the more she denied it, he would never let her out of his sight. but come morning and she is leaving๐ญ
veer will be devastated when he finds out but even more so he will be angry.. and i love angry veer..๐ but he will find her, he has too. please sha its a such a short story dont keep them apart too long but at the same time i also dont want you to rush it.. it would spoil the element of intrigue and intensity that you have spun into the story so well.
well thats enough from me, i just cant get enough of your stories you know that. Thanks again for pm and sorry for the late reply.. hats off sha.. waiting impatiently for next episode..
Edited by ricna - 12 years ago