Forcefully Yours Thread 4- Chap 31 (a,b,c) on page 152 and 153 UPDATED

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1171

Hi Sarah..i tried to like the 2 posts, but my net speed is not allowing it😕..So m already commenting on the update..

Brilliant update like always..well i see you have slightly changed the storyline n fast forwarded the story, since DS had not forgiven Manyata and told her never to return back to their family...So Uday had finally confessed his feelings, but you gave the ultimate climax by separating them forever. Why do you always do this😡...I am totally angry on you...Why can't we see them together atleast for once??😡...Do you want to be 2nd SA of DEK? I understand you are trying to take revenge from Uday for shooting Ian Somerhalder😆

OK enough of my frustration...sorry for so many emotions😆...but i am serious😳

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Sonia

@princessSonia

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#1172

Well m happy to see Ur updates...
Cumin to chapter 31 A...

Awesum update...

Well Unnati trying to make Uday jealous...
N her plan is working as well...😉

Damn happy seeing Manyata n Fawad togehtrness
Effecting Uday...🥳

Loved d whole update...

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veni.vijay100

@veni.vijay100

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1173

Hey sarah

hope u had a great vacation 😃but 4r 3months😡

WOW what an update

partA-ah finally got 2 see jealous uday was waiting 4r it😈

fawad and manyata seems 2 be very close frnds

ayaan loved unnati so much then ???? hapenned

please open their story a little more

partB-uday crossed the line this time

why cant he see that she cares 4r him

thank god unnati stoped manyata

love u unnati 4r bringing some sense 2 ur bro

whats manyatas plan 😕

partC-i dont have words 4r this one...was thrilled while reading it❤️

uday poured his feelings nd asked 4r remarriage

didt expect this type of confession

cliffhanger again...ur evil sarah i tell u

will b waiting and stalking 4r next update

please pretty update as soon as possible😳

Edited by veni.vijay100 - 11 years ago

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Nitya Tandon

@nityatandon

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#1174

Hey.. Sarah..

First of all..

Thanx for updating..

All parts were amazing...

I really like fawad..

He is helping Udayveer realizing that he loves Manyata...

So what unknowingly...

Even Unnati is providing so much of help...

She always does that..

And they both succeded..

Unnati's plan was really nice...

Smart girl... I tell you...

Manveer dance was so romantic...

And the song to was awesome..

Uday's proposal was so heart touching...

Every word meant so much...

The whole scene was described so perfectly..

And all the credit goes to the writer...

But what is this...

Manyata gave the divorce papers to him..

When finally he proposed to her...

I think all this is DS's plan..

And I also think..

That now Uday will let her free..

And make her fall in love with him..

And will do everything to make her confess her feelings...

Its just a guess...

Update soon..

And thanx for the PM..

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nimra malik

@mimi.maik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1175

hellowww my dear Sarah...baby how are you ??? 😊

OMG OMG OMG I think i m dreaming, finally you updated...awww i cant believe it that i had read 31st part of such an amazing and thrilling story...sarah u cant imagine how much i am greatful to u...thank u so0o0o much for updating, i know you are a student of medicle, and its so tough thing to take some free time and write but you have given 3 parts...omg 1st i fainted and then i started dancing, my sis was like WHATS GOTTEN INTO U?? hahahaha 😆 thanks again sarah.

and other thing that i know i am late in commenting, so sorry i was ill from past 4 days... accept my apology, but i have liked all the parts.😊

well the storyline is now changed, u speedily forward it, but no problem, its like a new begining...😆

so starts with part A:

The starting was great Fawad droped manyta home and then uday also came along with anger. I liked the way fawad spoke for manyata. and then unnati invited him as per she planned, and he stayed in their home...i have to appreciate his character... he made things go smooth. the lovely part was when uday was drunk and said everything that he cant bear anyone around her...awww 😭 and then the flashback of ayaan and unnati...to0o0o0o awsum... he did loved her deeply, i just cant bear whats got wrong between them 😭.

part B;

AWWW manyata send lemonade 4 him...and fawad is gone, 😭 😭 😭 i was shocked about whatever uday said to manyata, about her character...but i can understand, he is a man who is jealous to roots, OMG manyata was going to leave the house... thank GOD unnati stopped her. manyata was so0o0o hurted by his words, feeling etremely bad for her. and then the convo of unnati and uday...i m with unnati, whatever she said was truth and i liked it, this opens the heart of uday. awww finally uday asked her for dance, lovely.

part C:

Well for this part i have no words, i m speechles, 😭 how could you write such a lovely proposal...i was damn lost in the chappy...i cant believe uday said all the things...if i were on manyata's role i would definitely say yes...but i can understand manayata, she had suffered alot. but sarah you ended this chapter on the very climax...she gave him the divorce papers which uday signed by mistake when manyata came to his office...😭 😭 😭...why this happen. i pity on uday, when he tried to kiss her, she didnt respond. 😭 oh my my, sarah u left us alone in a dessert seriously...i want to read more and more...do write when you got time ok... u always comes back with a bang and i know the future updates will also be a nuclear bomb... i enjoyed each and every word of this chappy.

thanks thanks thanks sarah...i love you and i m great fan of yours. thanks for updating. GOD bless you, take care and i m dying to read more 🤣 but i wont force u to write sooon. do take ur time and then update, i will always be here to read but please dont discontinue it ok...love u and hugs 🤗 🤗 🤗

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DaddyzPwincess

@DaddyzPwincess

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1176

Omg amazing update , love it to the core
Uday's confession was amazing the best confession I've ever read
The ending was sad i can't see uday hurt , please have manyata and uday become one
And can't wait until the next update !!!!!!!

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Jane

@Jane523

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#1177

naya thread start kar do na dear

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alina.mahar

@alina.mahar

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1178

hey dear sarah,,, whats up dear, i m so sorry i m late in commening, so sorry, actually i m totally inactive on india forums, my cozin informs me that u updated and now i m hear hehehehe 😆.

a very great and fabulous work by you dear, i wholely loved all the parts...how can u write that much awsum 😃 the last scene takes my breath away, manyata gaves him divorce papers 😲 well i didnt think it in my wildest dream 😭 😭 😭...i hope everything will be fix sooon. but sarah thank u soo much for updating, you made my month 😆 yeah. Keep it up, do continue soon, i cant wait to read more this part was thrilling. 👏

thanks for the p.m. hugs 🤗 and take care.

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priyamvika11

@priyamvika11

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1179

Sorry 4 commented u late actually I dont know that u updated it since 4'5 days becz u dont send me the link of that chp about chp I hav no eords to say I actually hav no words to express my fellings this chp fill the 3 months. Of our waiting thanks that udhy realize its ture love but divoce paper its sad I hope that story bagan to romantic like before hope manveer together again I also hope that u update next chp sooon becz I deadly waiting 4 that
Tons of love and hugs

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#1180

Originally posted by: ...navina...
Comment for ch31/ part A

I'm speechless😕!

Fawad has become a permanent thorn in Uday's side😭. He is there in order to reunite Manveer , but he is grating on my nerves (as I imagine he is doing the same to Uday too😡). I'm not surprised that Uday is staying stubborn ... he's an immensely stubborn character, he'd rather destroy himself than admit his true feelings. OMG - 1 month , THAT UNWANTED VISITOR has stayed🤢. Hope Uday doesn't suffer a major breakdown 😔 { I'm currently having trouble with Unwanted guests ... therefore I'm taking my frustration out here😆}

hey navina first of all thank you so so much for commenting... your comments means alottt...
lol uday got a breakdown 😆

Manyata has gotten the idea, that Uday was jealous when she held Fawad's hand ... therefore she's playing her own little game with Uday ; but I think she's going overboard , I mean she's staying out till late with Fawad ... when she's supposed to be a married woman!

yes she did played why you will know😉

U know , right from the time I knew of a jealousy track - I never dreamt that it was a plan made by Unnati. That was immensely surprising😳.

I liked the flash-back😃. Ayaan genuinely loved Ria😲 , I initially thought that he was toying with her, but he was really in love with her😳. Then what went wrong😕? Did DS push him to marry Kripa🤔?

PS - I could not post a LIKE for Part A, as the button was not working for me😡!

COMMENT FOR PART B - is below 😃. (scroll down😉)

thank you so much navina i love your comment ... 🤗

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