TDLS(Dark Love)-Bk 2. Imp note on Pg 93 - Page 36

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Awesome update
Amazingly written 👏
Loved it
Thanks for the pm n plz update soon 😊

Originally posted by: andy.a

Great and awsome update gargi👏

chand is so stubborn, i was surprised that she went for a second marriage just because she felt shaurya hid the truth fron her

i agree with kurwaki, doing this hurt her more than than shaurya

saurya's entry was shocking😲

it was brutal, he killed innocents

and when he beheaded that prince with his sword, i felt so shocked...i felt fear

sharya can be scary when he wants

but i feel it was chand who was responsible for bringing this crual side of shaurya

now she has to bear the brunt of her arrogence

wasn't the whole kingdom brought to shame because of her??

what decision will the her father take??

i dont think it will be anything positive...

looking forward for what happenes next

update soon😃

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Great and awsome update gargi👏---thanks andy...😊welcome😛

chand is so stubborn, i was surprised that she went for a second marriage just because she felt shaurya hid the truth fron her---yes she is too stupid at times...but she wanted to go far from shaurya, so thought marriage would be the best decision for a new life but it turned to be the worst one in her life, a totally devastating disaster

saurya's entry was shocking😲---i wanted to shock everyone😆and we are shocked too beyond belief

it was brutal, he killed innocents

and when he beheaded that prince with his sword, i felt so shocked...i felt fear

sharya can be scary when he wants---Yes Shaurya is very cruel at times, but the intense part of his is yet to be seen...You will find him more shady in the next chapters umm!! i like an evil shaurya... iam looking forward to see him more evil

but i feel it was chand who was responsible for bringing this crual side of shaurya--yes she was responsible, but to an extent even Shaurya was to be blamed...he should have told her the truth of his 1st queen before but they lived in 16 th century na, its not a crime that time to marry more than once is it?

now she has to bear the brunt of her arrogence

wasn't the whole kingdom brought to shame because of her??----Yes it is a disgrace to the entire kingdom...That is the punishment Shaurya decided to give her for not obeying him its too crual a punishment

what decision will the her father take??----Well that you will know in the next chapter..😳i guess i have to wait then

i dont think it will be anything positive...Lets see..anyways it won't be positive for anyone of Naugarh and it would be positive for shaurya??

looking forward for what happenes next

update soon😃------------Yes andy...i promise for a early update everytime, but i fail.😕..so won't promise this time...but still you can hope after 2 weeks or may be before that, which ill see after the response i get from this chapter

take your time to update, i know how difficult it is to write an update to please everyone, its not easy... i guess i wil have to wait

but thanks a lot for this wonderful comment...It was so encouraging andy🤗

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Thanks kritika...glad ki tujhe acha laga...ill read ur story soon...m back now😊

Originally posted by: panchaali

Shaurya's Rage is described very nicely!!!!!

Very nice update...👍🏼

(But a Rajput woman never thinks of a second marriage...thinking about a second marriage [even if in rage] is equal to losing her dignity...if she poses enough self respect also she will never do that[coz a to Rajput woman her husband is her self respect]{history says this darling, its not what i think!!} 😕...What Chandra did that is very right act in this case but Rajput women never does that...they were fighters like their men that fact is very nicely shown in Chandra's character) 😊

Originally posted by: priyash..

padh le bhen mujhe tho nhi lagta meri story mai kisi ko intrest hai but mujhe teri story mai bhoth intrest hai 😳

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

dob't be disappointed kritz...story ko recognition late se milta hai...n try to write in english...tab ull get more readers, as there are many who don't understand hindi very well