TDLS(Dark Love)-Bk 2. Imp note on Pg 93

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Great and awsome update gargi👏

chand is so stubborn, i was surprised that she went for a second marriage just because she felt shaurya hid the truth fron her

i agree with kurwaki, doing this hurt her more than than shaurya

saurya's entry was shocking😲

it was brutal, he killed innocents

and when he beheaded that prince with his sword, i felt so shocked...i felt fear

sharya can be scary when he wants

but i feel it was chand who was responsible for bringing this crual side of shaurya

now she has to bear the brunt of her arrogence

wasn't the whole kingdom brought to shame because of her??

what decision will the her father take??

i dont think it will be anything positive...

looking forward for what happenes next

update soon😃

Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#342

i loved it maza aa gaya ... mai describe nhi kar sakti bhoth awesome tha i have no words yr !!!

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: ...anju...
lol first to comment...

NICE update GARGI...AMAZINGLY written.loved it loads.enjoyed it.

OMG manyatas swayamvar and shaurya in angry mode.

bc of manyatas foolishness to take revenge for betraying her so many lost their lives.

shaurya is sooo intelligent.loved how he made manyata spit d truth.

now d whole world knows about manveer secret marriage.

wat manyatas father want to talk to shaurya.

wana to know more wat happened in d past.plz include d present also in d next chappy.

luking forward for next chappy.continue soon dear.

Thanks anju for the grt comments...yes it was Chanda's foolishness for which she had to pay...She had to suffer the humiliation..well shaurya is always smart, but he did bad things by not being able to control his anger

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: priyash..
i loved it maza aa gaya ... mai describe nhi kar sakti bhoth awesome tha i have no words yr !!!

Thanks kritika...glad ki tujhe acha laga...ill read ur story soon...m back now😊

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Awesome update!👏

Loved it loads!!

Chanda is really silly she she wanted to play stupid games.

Poor chanda's father had to be embarassed because of her foolishness.

Shaurya's anger is wow

Shaurya is really a charming prince,

I wish could meet this prince charming.

Love the way.u potray his character and all other characters.

Beautifully written.

Do continue asap.

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

awesome update gargi

Soo chand decides to teach a lesson to shaurya ,.nd he inreturn hurts her
shaurya is soo cruel !
Cont soon

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Awesome update
Amazingly written 👏
Loved it
Thanks for the pm n plz update soon 😊

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: sanah12
Awesome update!👏
Loved it loads!!
Chanda is really silly she she wanted to play stupid games.
Poor chanda's father had to be embarassed because of her foolishness.
Shaurya's anger is wow
Shaurya is really a charming prince,
I wish could meet this prince charming.
Love the way.u potray his character and all other characters.
Beautifully written.
Do continue asap.

Thanks sanah...Chanda behaves stupidly at times for which she will have to pay...Shaurya is charming..aww you can meet him in my FF😳 if you want to...Yes the entire naugard ha to be embarassed becoz of her...His character is going to develop further..Hope you like it

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: sweetshab
awesome update gargi

Soo chand decides to teach a lesson to shaurya ,.nd he in return hurts her
shaurya is soo cruel !
Cont soon

hey shabs...thanks for liking it. Yes chanda decides to teach a lesson but is instead taught one...😆...If you find Shaurya cruel here, then what will happen in the further chapters?😲...You are yet to see his bad side..stay tuned for that😳