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MAHIMA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#371

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

thanks Mahi...😊..yes shaurya was always a possesive lover n anyone who comes on his way will have to bear the consequences of his wrath...but ya it will lead to many things..stay tuned to know more...

hehehehe even if I want I can't run away I'm addicted to ur story u know!!!!
and yeah sometimes over possessive lover can be a huge problem!!!

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#372

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa
superb uodate...chand is so stubborn...she was going for second marriage...i can't belive that...shaurya killed so many innocent people due to his anger...that was the cruel side of shaurya...and thanks for pm...

thanks prerna..😊...chand felt cheated n betrayed, n so wanted to go away from him...shaurya can be very cruel at times...thanks for the lovely comments dear, and keep reading😳

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: Shahista01
Great update gargi. Love it when you take us into the past.

So the foolish Chandralekha decides to teach Shaurya a lesson for being misled about his initial first marriage and agrees for her swayambar without even thinking about the consequences. She should have listened to kurwaki who knew very well the storm that was about to make its way in the form of Shaurya. Chand has always been a stubborn tough nut to crack then and even now as manyata

I liked Kurwaki's thought aloud gargi, it is so very true'..

"Kash ap samajh pati ki prem ko sabak sikhane jayengi to chot ap hi ko lagegi. Prem pana bhagya ki baat hai"..( I wish you could understand, that if you try to teach your love a lesson, its only you who will be hurt. You have to be really lucky, to get true love)

And was Shaurya on a roll gargi' seen like never before. You portrayed his character so well, his rage justified. Anyone who came in his way with have to pay the price' loved it.

Chands father is obviously not happy and very embarrassed at disgraced at his daughters disposition, and its going to be very difficult for him to accept the man he has a natural dislike for and sworn enemy as his son in law'' 😆

Looking forward to next update. Hugs' 🤗

Great update gargi. Love it when you take us into the past.---thanks shahi...glad u like going to the past😳

So the foolish Chandralekha decides to teach Shaurya a lesson for being misled about his initial first marriage and agrees for her swayambar without even thinking about the consequences. She should have listened to kurwaki who knew very well the storm that was about to make its way in the form of Shaurya. Chand has always been a stubborn tough nut to crack then and even now as manyata----Chand felt cheated and betrayed n didn't consider their marriage, to be real as it was a secret affair. she is stubborn n things would become more difficult later.

I liked Kurwaki's thought aloud gargi, it is so very true'..

"Kash ap samajh pati ki prem ko sabak sikhane jayengi to chot ap hi ko lagegi. Prem pana bhagya ki baat hai"..( I wish you could understand, that if you try to teach your love a lesson, its only you who will be hurt. You have to be really lucky, to get true love)

yes Kurwaki was always the wise one...infact i actually like her character😊

And was Shaurya on a roll gargi' seen like never before. You portrayed his character so well, his rage justified. Anyone who came in his way with have to pay the price' loved it.----that's because i was thinking about Akbar that time while writing this scene..😆...yes he is a possessive lover, and anyone who comes in between will pay the price

Chands father is obviously not happy and very embarrassed at disgraced at his daughters disposition, and its going to be very difficult for him to accept the man he has a natural dislike for and sworn enemy as his son in law'' 😆---your right, things are going to be complicated for them, and also for their future generation

Looking forward to next update. Hugs' 🤗-----thanks for the lovely comments Shahi..hugs to you too🤗

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zainab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#374

This was an AMAZING update gargi!!!
the way you wrote it was so good, the whole swamyar part was so real and wonderful.
lol poor king got his head cut. bechara!!!

what the hell is this chanderkala's problem, why the hell she cannot see his love, all kings have many wives, so why cant surya...!!!

but she made her on way difficult, i think her father will compel her to go with surya, to save his lost reputation!!!

please update soon!!
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no thanks for the pm. 😆

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#375

Originally posted by: -Zina-
This was an AMAZING update gargi!!!
the way you wrote it was so good, the whole swamyar part was so real and wonderful.
lol poor king got his head cut. bechara!!!

what the hell is this chanderkala's problem, why the hell she cannot see his love, all kings have many wives, so why cant surya...!!!

but she made her on way difficult, i think her father will compel her to go with surya, to save his lost reputation!!!

please update soon!!
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no thanks for the pm. 😆

thanks zina...glad that u liked it..chanda was different n she didn't want to be someone's second wife...she was brave and bold...she felt cheated specially when she got to know about his 1st marriage

ill try to update soon but not very sure...anyways thanks once again for still being interested in this story zina...🤗

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#376

Originally posted by: ...navina...
RES😳.

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Fabulous update Gargi👏.

I had this whole image in my head of how the swayamvar would be presented ... and Guess What? U WENT BEYOND MY EXPECTATION 👍🏼 . The entire scene was an absolute treat to read. Poor Raja Keshav Singh ... got beheaded😆! (BTW - I visualised his torso still standing upright with his head rolling away to 1 corner🤣). Rajkumari was tricked into revealing the truth by Shauraya ... well, I'm not surprised - he is a genius😉! I wonder what the 2 kings would decide about Chandralekha's future🤔? It'll have to be something in favour of Shaurya Pratab ... or there'll be a massacre , I TELL YOU 😈!

Desperate to read more ,

please continue soon,

thanks for the scrap😊.

Fabulous update Gargi👏. ---thanks Navi😳

I had this whole image in my head of how the swayamvar would be presented ... and Guess What? U WENT BEYOND MY EXPECTATION 👍🏼 . ---hehehe...glad i could go beyond the master mind's expectation😉...i always wanted to make it more than it can be thought of...so m not very satisfied with it, but i was quite tired to make it more different

The entire scene was an absolute treat to read. Poor Raja Keshav Singh ... got beheaded😆! (BTW - I visualised his torso still standing upright with his head rolling away to 1 corner🤣). ---Navi that would be more hilarious than scary..i wanted it to be more ghastly and violent...but anyways good imagination😆...imagine if that dead n beheaded king comes haunting to M n threatening her to unite with Shaurya as he too payed the price of coming in between them😆...

Rajkumari was tricked into revealing the truth by Shauraya ... well, I'm not surprised - he is a genius😉! ----Shaurya is always good in all these tricks..He knows to get things his way😉

I wonder what the 2 kings would decide about Chandralekha's future🤔? It'll have to be something in favour of Shaurya Pratab ... or there'll be a massacre , I TELL YOU 😈!----Whatever it is like, but you will surely enjoy the upcoming chapters of the past story I TELL YOU!

Desperate to read more ,---aww thanks for loving it so much😳...

please continue soon,

thanks for the scrap😊.---ill try to continue soon😆...although you know how soon my updates are...n you don't have to say thanks dear..m always eager for your comments...😃

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#377

Chapter 6...

Present Day:

Kurwaki smiled from the doorways to the thoughtful Shaurya.

"I know what your thinking about Shaurya...Its about Chandralekha right?..."

"The swayambar thing had hurt me a lot Kurwaki. it was a shame that a rajput princess like her would think about second marriage...How could she even think of doing that...i know she loved me, but still..pheww...i could never understand that woman..." ...Udayveer shook his head in despair...

Kurwaki smirked to this and replied back...

"Why, if you could hide your first marriage from her, than why could not she deceive you?...You should have told her everything if you believed in your love so much"

Udayveer/Shaurya frowned at her and gave her an angry look, to which she again smirked back and replied...

"What?..don't give me that look, King of Love!!...my friend was very hurt when she knew that you betrayed her. It was not your marriage that hurt her,many kings had many queens in those days, but it was the fact that she came to know it from someone else other than you...She trusted you so much that she accepted the secret marriage and chose to be silent as you told her that you would come to meet her father. She felt like a fool to believe the greatest enemy King of her kingdom."

Udayveer could not take the lecture anymore.

"Alright Kurwaki ji..i got it...You must have been very happy to see us quarrel and the way things turned out after that in my favor must have shocked you.i could not learn it then as i was mostly busy in politics or wooing my wife, trying to impress her, but now am free. Tell me how much did you work hard to break my wedding with Chanda?..." Shaurya/Uday asked sarcastically and with deep anger.

Kurwaki was hurt, but chose not to reply back to his mockery and left the place.

"Kash ap humei kabhi samajh pate Maharaj Shaurya Pratap...and besides my friend knew she would not get another hero like you Shaurya. For her mind, for you and may be for me she was actually fighting with you by celebrating her swayambar, but her heart knew in what a torment she was.She did it only on her father's wish and also for the Riyasat."...Shaurya didn't reply back but listened to her as he could feel what she said..

"It wasn't me who informed her about your marriage...it was your Rajkumar Akshay, your younger brother" saying this she left a speechless Shaurya standing and staring outside.

As Kurwaki left the Uday niwas,fresh memories of previous birth came back pulling Shaurya out of the brick and concrete to a natural scenery outside, and with some dead leaves blowing in the wind and falling on his face, many lived moments came back to him, in front of his eyes.Moments which he wanted to live again, moments which he wanted to rectify, but if wounds and guilt could be undone, then half of the sorrow of this world would have perhaps been healed, penance, curse or punishments would not have been in the dictionary of mankind, and if sorrows were at all not there, people would not have hoped for happiness and would not have understood the much given value to it.

"No matter how much i get angry on you, no matter how much you hate me, i still loved you Chanda..My my...what had you done on me..What affects you had on me rajkumari. You completely changed a king like me...and i still can't stop thinking about you. The more i see your new self as Manyata, the more you remind me of you!..." What will i do?..how will i win this battle love?...But one thing you have made me realize today...i'll have to win this battle, to get our love back, for those dead souls, and most importantly, to defeat those scheming villains like my brother." his face grew harder as he uttered the last words, and it seemed as if the sky too roared in his support and then started pouring heavily.

Shaurya cooled his anger and his inner pain with the rain water that fell on his beautiful face and muscular physic, which would have made any young woman go crazy over the sight.His ego and anger evaporated and all that remained was love and purely love for the one woman, that destiny had bestowed to him in more than one form.

A very famous and beautiful song from twilight can complete those feelings that Udayveer/Shaurya bore in his heart from a long time.

Heart beats fast

Colors and promises
How to be brave
How can I love when I'm afraid to fall
But watching you stand alone
All of my doubt suddenly goes away somehow
One step closer

I have died everyday waiting for you
Darling don't be afraid I have loved you
For a thousand years
I love you for a thousand more

Time stands still
Beauty in all she is
I will be brave
I will not let anything take away
What's standing in front of me
Every breath
Every hour has come to this
One step closer

Just then he felt a hand on his shoulder. As he turned back he was speechless. Chandralekha was in front of him and although he knew she was just his illusion, he somehow did not want to come out of it.That beautiful smile in those luscious lips, that ghagra-choli with the jewelry in which she looked the best. She was standing at a distance with her both arms open with all the love in her eyes...Uday came closer to her and the world seemed to have stopped for him. He touched her face, her fragile yet captivating body, that slender milky-white waist, with every touch of his fingers, he felt blissful and longed, that the time stands still forever. He hugged her tightly and tried to re-live every moment. Emotions flowed endlessly and with every intensity rose his inner feelings which brought his lips closer to hers. As he closed his eyes and was about to kiss, the illusion of Chanda broke bringing him back to reality and loneliness.

I want to bring you back in my life right away Chanda, whether you want it or not. But the promise I made to myself can't be broken. Its the promise of a king and if my love is true, you will surely come back to me one day, with your own will. Until now

let me just see you for a last time before i go back to England.

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Precap:

Dadi Sahab: He is a liar Manyata. That book is not true. Its only to divert your mind and hate your own people. I am your dadisahab. Why will i lie to you tell me?...i want the best for you, and he is an enemy to us, he was, and will always be. He brought disgrace to our kingdom ages back, and he wants to play that game again, to take the revenge of destroying his kingdom. We have survived very secretly Manyata and also conveniently. Please let us all live peacefully. Don't try to think about him again.

Frenz my Lappy is crashed n m updating from my cousin's lappy. So kindly like n comment. Ill rely back after i get back my system...Sorry for the short CHapter but i have no ways of working...Sorry for that...

Edited by sweet_gargi - 12 years ago

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huma

@huma12.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#378

Love the update gargi

Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#379

Thank you to all the people who liked and commented on Chapter 5 of The Dark Love Story🤗

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Edited by sweet_gargi - 12 years ago

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SNOWWHITE83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#380

AFTER A LONG UR R SHOWING D PRESENT.LUVED UDAY KURWAKI TALK. SO IT WAS AKSHAY WHO SCREWED MANYATA TELLING HER ABOUT SHAURYAS FIRST MARRIAGE .DAT PROVOKED HER TO AGREE FOR SWAYAMVAR .SHE THOUGHT UDAY BETRAYED HER. SO WE CANT BLAME MANYATA ALSO.

LUVED UDAYs VISION ABOUT D PAST .DEN HIS ILUSION ABOUT CHAND WAS SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN. SONG FROM TITANIC WAS SO APT FOR D SITUATION TO SHOW HIS FEELINGS. LOVED EVERY BIT OF D CHAPPY SO MUCH.

INTERESTING PROMO PART.Y DS WAS BLAMING UDAY. MINDBLOWING UPDATE GARGI.ENJOYED D CHAPPY SO MUCH.NOW CANT WAIT.UPDATE SOON.BY D WAY WEN MANVEER WILL MEET...GARGI.

Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago

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