(J of a Wife - BOOK 3) A FAMILY REUNITES - Page 85

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Navina😃 how are you?
The update was superb (i know its such a small word to describe it, it was much more than that😉)
It was nice seeing Jagat's care bringing an improvement in J😳
i hope when she fully recovers she doesn't become the old vixen she was
aww is their any limit to Uday's sweetness☺️☺️ he can make any girl go weak in the Knees☺️
That teddy scene was Super cute👏👏

what a family..Udita choosing her dad instead of mom, was so nice😃 it would have made Uday really happy, considering how Udita had resisted him in the beginning😳
kuch bhi ho jaaye Uday will always remain naughty as ever😆

The Convo between Daddy dearest and Baby was awesome..Poor Manyata got burnt in jealousy seeing their camaraderie 😆

i Wonder what is the Surprise Uday is planning😉

and last but not the least yeah ofcourse you should continue to Book Four and even beyond that if you can😃

Thanks for the PM
waiting for the next chapter😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
truly one word awesome
sorry for the late comment
i am out of station lol
i actually should not
but still i pity jai
she did get what she deserve
but still seeing her in this condition gives no pleasure to me
anyway poor jaggat he loves her so much
sacrificing for someone inspuite of knowiong that the person heart belongs to someone else is great
maybe that is what magic of love is actually
and here a love sicken yuvraaj and a over protective husband
awn uday was adorable with the teddies
he did over react but chall ta hai
i just love little baby udita in each updates of yours
he is a very good father
but in this he did not leave a chance to miss his naughty activities with his wife
please do not end it
thank you for such a treat ie this update
do continue asap
i hope your health better

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a

😃Hi navi,😃 Hi Andy😊.

iam here with my second comment😆,(back to my usual routine) That's great!

So what do I say about this update, it was just magical 😳with so many manveer moments. Just cute, awesome and lovely. I loved it. and I mean it truly.😃 Thanks Andy 🤗 .

The first part is making me nervous😕,Why? iam not at all happy to know that jai has recovered. You may think why? Correct 😆! I don't know, its just that jai brings badluck to manveer's life. And iam really feeling bad that jai goy back her speaking skills seeing uday. It's really worrying me. Andy , don't u have faith in me? Why did jaggat do it?He loves her and wants her to recover😊. ok I will stop being a drama queen now.😆 O good 😆.

The remaining update was just lovely😳. I was taken to the manveer world. Are u still there , or did u get back? Now when they went to shop for the teddy I remembered mine, tani's and jarin's convo in WC. I know , when I read your convo on W/C ... I thought : hEY , THIS IS JUST LIKE MY CHAPTER 😉! Uday bought 2 teddies one for manyta and the other for his pari too. Even I had to do the same. Oh!!!iam going of the topic, sorry. Got carried away by "my" family matters.😆 I understand😆!!!!!

Now I loved udita's behavior😆. She wanted her papa rather than her mama, but navi, even here I feel 5 months is too early a age for kids to chose bw their parents. Andy , GOOGLE : DEVELOPMENT STAGES OF A TODDLER!!!! It states there that babies as young as 3 months start differentiating between their parents , and making their preferences known!!!!!!Just taking my cousins's daughter's case again. 7 months would be ideal. 😃 Andy , I do my home-work before updating anything 😃.

Now I feel uday had overreacted😡. man, manyta just lightly gave a thump. He is gona be an overprotective dad. Yep , EXTREMELY .Poor udita, I can already imagine her life when she is in her teens and uday checking if she has bf. He would shoot the guy. Oh yeah , the boy will stand NO CHANCE😆.Sorry, once again of the topic.😕 U drift off quite often , DON'T U 🤣?

I loved this dialoge though I feel it has some hiden meaning or am being over suspicious U are being OVERLY-SUSPICIOUS🤢.

U came between me and my Princess - U DEFINATELY TOOK AFTER YOUR MAASI IN THAT REGARD

And the scene which you showed me as "promo" was just super👏. I simply loved it. Thanks😛. who is manyta triying to punish, he he. Loved the convo which followed that scene. Uday wanted something " soft" I really loved that. Hawww , u are SOOO NAUGHTY☺️! So unnathi is leaving. poor girl, I don't want her to leave but studies are important na. 😃 Right! (but I'm dissappointed in you Andy ... I thought YOU would've joined the dots of that scene together with a future track I told u about!😔)

Manveer wedding- in 2 days- W-O-W. cant wait to see what happens. Is it the ship scene which you told once to gargi?😃 No , it's not.

Now the father daughter convo was cute, man, I loved it.( forgive me for using the same words again)I forgive you 🤣!! manyata and ghost, ha ha I loved it😆. the carbon copy and the "white round bum" navi, were you planning to kill us by making us laugh so much 🤣.I really enjoyed reading it I'm glad u found it so hillarious.

Will uday allow unnathi to marry her love? Well , I don't know that YET😕.What is the surprise 😲? tell me. Tell me.😉 Guess?

I think I covered most of the update. Did I miss anything😕? Nope.

As I said earlier, don't even think of stopping the story, we want book 4, 5 6, 7, 8''.😃 No Dear ... I'm retiring after book 4😊.

And don't think iam SOAPING you, because you deserve this ok.ClapClap Thank You , Thank U ... I'll take a bow😉.

Once more this was one super update. Thank u Andy 😃.

Love you 😳 Love you 2 😳.

Andy But , of-course 😆!!!!!!

Loved the comment Andy , thanks so much 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zina-

RES😛

first for the first time😆
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Fantastic Update Navina👏.Thanx Zainab 🤗 the first best thing that you updated two days before the given date😆. I even shocked myself with that😉!!and the second best🤔...Of course the update😆. Ahh, I waiting for it so desperately😳.Thank u Dear😃

Hailla, Jay is still alive😆, Hawww, how could u think she was DEAD?i thought she died long back🤣. Maybe , I kept her away for TOO LONG😕. and she still is obsessed with uday😆.Well, aren't WE still obsessed with himEmbarrassed??? i wonder if uday will go to help her and manyata will not like this. Maybe!!Then , stop wondering , I'LL TELL U : he's not going to do anything for her! lol, jagat still thinks that he can have a chance with jay, I think now we can call him MAJNU also😆. I always called him "MAJNU"😆!!!for the first time i am feeling pity for jay😭. poor girl. I hope she gets her love in jagat and gets to know that uday was never meant to be hers!!😳From YOUR MOUTH TO THE WRITER'S EARS😉.

I just love this possessive father he cant even bear a thump.Not if it will give even the slightest pain to his babyEmbarrassed!!!!! 😆Manyata needs to be very careful with the Father and Daughter. Haan nai toh! uday got beaten up from his wife🤣.Poor guy , and you're laughing😡. I hope his BOO BOO is okay now😆, It's fine now. i remember my cousin was small and whenever she got hurt she used to say that BOO BOO😆.Hmmm, we still do that with kids. I loved each and every part in this chapter.I'm really happy about that😃. this part was too funny: We have the same eyes, ears , nose , fore-head, lips and we're the same colour. You know ; your Mamma is TOO WHITE , sometimes she looks like a ghost! Lucky u turned out NORMAL like me!😆. Ya , it was very funny , LOvely Chapter. Thanx ,sorry for editing late!!No problem😊. i was out of town for the day!!😳LUCKY YOU!

Update soon.Yep , on Wednesday
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No Thanks for the PM🤣U found the update on your own ... what was the need for a pmOuch? (so , i didn't send 1😆)


Awesome comment Zainab ... thank you 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Asyalover

OMG...Who does Unnati loves... That , will be revealed in the next chapter😉. aww the Family scene was so cute. I'm glad u thought so😳. ..and yaay!!! Jainandani is back Neha , i think you're the first person that's happy about her recovery. i hope she wont turn negative now/ Well , we'll just have to wait and see.!!! ...u know ur story now reminds me of the show called Amrit Manthan on life ok ...as in Relationship of Manyata and Jay - Nimrit and Amrit...and they are princesses too Oh , thanks for telling me ... I never watched that show.


Cont soon Should be next wednesday😊

Thanks for such a lovely comment Neha 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey navi... Hi Nitya😊. I hope I can call u that... Of-course , it's MY NAME😆! The update was as always long,Should I shorten it😕? awesome and full on manveer... Thanx Dear 🤗 .

So now ultimately udita has accepted her father... About time , won't u agree😉? accepted kya a toh puri peeche pad gayi hai... Hmmm😳!!
Aur rahi baat book 4 ki toh tum agar book 100 bhi likhogi na tobhi I'll support u... Awww, such sweet words ... Love you!

Loved the comment Nitya , thanx a lot 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Awesome Update Navi dear

Very well written
Thanks Anu 🤗 .
Such a cute update
with lots of " AWww..." scenes
And you're making me "AWWW" for saying that😳!

Do Cont soon Sure , on Wednesday.
And i Would love a book 4
I shall consider it strongly now😃.

Loved the comment Anu , thanks so much 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

awesome update.. Thanks Prerna 🤗 . .this was full of manveer.. Yep 😃. .udita shows attitude to her mom becoz she didn't talk to her other night...A thorough-bred Rajwada ... who holds a grudge 😉!!!!!!! uday nd udita convo was superb...i loved that cute family scen... Awww , I'm glad u enjoyed that😳. manveer second marriage is on the way... ... Yeah😕!!!! unnati choosed a guy already...who is he... That will be revealed in the next update !!! lovely update...i loved it.. Thank you!.

Loved your comment Prerna , thank you 🤗 .
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Posted: 12 years ago
i edit my comment on pg. 113
n plz tell me when u update nect chp??
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Posted: 12 years ago
I LOVED IT NAVINA...U know ... U DON'T LOOK NICE when u apologise. Uday smirked at her statement : does that mean ; I don't have to sleep on the couch? No - U don't , she replied ; earning her a broad smile from Uday ... but his happiness was short-lived, You can sleep in the guest-room! , she completed. He wrapped his arms around her waist and whispered in her ear : But I was hoping to sleep on SOMETHING SOFT tonight! Manyata's eyes opened wide and her mouth shaped into an "O" . Uday just placed his lips over hers , when ... ND After carrying out Manyata's instructions to the T ; Uday decided that it was time for some naughtiness : Princess. Hmmm. Udita has something of yours! Manyata suspected what was coming next, but risked it anyway. What does she have? A cute , rounded , white bum! Halkat , Vede , Khasmanu khane , she began hitting him ... Tum kabhi nahi sudhroge! THESE WERE AWSM...LUVD CUTIE UDITA..SHE IS A SWEATHEART...😃 AND DONT END IT PLS...

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