(J of a Wife - BOOK 3) A FAMILY REUNITES - Page 15

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Originally posted by: catty2000

Originally posted by: andy.a

ok it means i have to wait a lot to get answers cleared

correct!
so do they solve the deugarh problem before they join their daughter

Andy - if I tell u everything now ... u won't read my updates😭.

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Originally posted by: andy.a

Hi navi,😃 Hi Andy😊

Once again I am commenting late (by a day). And I'm replying late by a day. So do I need to tell you how the update was? Of-course😃.Then what ' would be your answer na,😆

As usual it was simply super, Thank u😊.but really emotional,😭 think of reading the update at 2 in the morning, sleeping on your bed, that too the part where veer dies. It was really sad, I really felt sad reading it. but you really did apply your knowledge on human nature here. But I did give u prior warning of that update ... so , U SHOULDN'T HAVE READ IT AT THAT PART OF THE MORNING🤢!

Critically I would say the update was emotional and it did touch my heart, but the last parts were really dramatic and action filled with manveer. Will come to it soon😛 I couldn't only have rona-dhona ... that's why I put in some action in the latter part!!!!

The first part where roopa aunty described her past was heart touching, I really would love to have met the original veer, he sounded to be such a nice fellow, the miracle baby, is that not what you called him na?😃 Veer was a born HERO😳!!! I would also have liked to meet such a person.

Roopa aunty would naturally be overprotective towards veer as he is the only living soul she has with her, Her 1 and only surviving family memberI really could imagine roopa aunty and her thoughts as veer confessed his love for shivani, his desire to join the army and so on. Poor lady would have visited hell many times😭 But for her son ... she'd go there over & over!!!

I was thinking that she had stopped the newspaper and tv at home because she did not want uday to know the truth about himself, I thought she was one wicked lady separating uday from his family. 😡 Well ... u thought WRONG!But you gave me a shock of my life. Hope u didn't fall from the bed😆!She did that right from the time veer joined the army, really she is one type of unique specimen. JUst like me😎!!!

Veer seems to be a magnet for danger I think. U are right. First the incident at the army and then the limepit explosion. He is one brave soul, like our uday. Poor fellow had to suffer a lot, but he faced it really bravely. A true Hero. The part where he was suffering from insufferable headaches, the plight of roopa aunty who saw her son slipping out oh her life , her decision to help her son end his sufferings,, his death in hiss moms hands now you're making me cry,😭 I did not even cry when I read the update, though I was heartbroken. When u write it ... u feel the emotions more .Maybe I was too asleep to notice my tears.😕 I can now understand why you cried while writing the update navi. Man it's too emotional writing these things than reading, honestly. Agreed!

You know how I 'love' shivani, As much as u "love" Akash 🤣... but I honestly felt sad for her😭, her love was dead. and she never got to say "GOODBYE" 😭!!! Even uday comes to know the truth about his mother, he would naturally feel betrayed, anyone would feel so. His anger can be justified. But Manyata will make his see reason😉.

This brings me to the end of my first part of the comment Part 2 coming soon, the comment turned to be a bit long so I split it into 2 (AND I JOINED IT UP AGAIN😆)

hi navi once again,😉 Hi Andy😊

I give you a promise that this part is not as long as the last, together it would be like my update, so I split it.😆 (I joined it because I wanted to see HOW LONG IT ACTUALLY WAS!!!)

So where was i? ahh!! I was saying veer's anger can be justified. U mean Uday😉! He was suffering from many nightmares and other problem, yet he must have felt betrayed .. Ya - but he won't be for long.

I must accept it now ... my son is dead. MY SON, VEER, IS DEAD!!! Then who the hell am I? "Veer" barked ... before storming off

This was one line where I saw our hot headed uday peeping out of veer. Manyta was also her usaual self- stubborn, he he he 😆 She had to match up to Uday😉.

Then when I read the the brakes of the car was faulty I wanted to kill you. Hawww😲!!! Why did you do it? Everything has a reason. Then I saw how beautifully you brought out the remaining sounds in veer's dreams. You actually recreated that scene. Beautiful navi, really beautiful. I really admire you for that.👏👏 Thank u , thank u , thank u!!!!

The way uday wanted manyta to escape and how stubbornly she refused to do so was really nice😃 Awww😳

The line I found amusing was😃 MANYATA! VEER! Please Angel ! NO VEER! PRINCESS PLEASE! NOT WITHOUT U ,UDAY!!! I really liked this line. Me 2. I did know nothing would happen to manveer as you would never harm them. Correct! Or I would come behind you to haunt your 😆dreams. Poor me.

The final scene where uday filled manyta's mang with his blood really was just picture perfect,😛 or should I say word perfect. She was never widowed , her husband was always with her na. yes uday cannot die, he is really a superhero. Haan nai toh😉!!!

So I did reach the ending of my boring comment😕 It was NOT boring at all 😃.

Did you reach till here? Yep. Then I must appreciate your bravery😆 I want a medal😆.

The update was really emotional like the last chap of book 1, I think that 1 was worse😭. so the next update is on 23 th, good I hope my internals gets over by then. So , it's a win-win situation😉. Make it romantic na, navi, an emotinal update deserves a romantic one, I'll do my best. this is a new proverb ok😃. It's awesome👍🏼!

And when will you be updating FL, have you forgot about it?😕 Ya - i did forget about it... I have NO IDEA , where I stopped that 1😕.

Thanks for the pm navi😃 Welcome Andy😃

Love you Love u 2 ❤️

andy😃

Originally posted by: PrincessZaneb

it was an awesome update
Thanks Zaneb 🤗 omg the story was sad

Yes - very sad😭
but im happy that vere aka uday found out the truth
cant wait till their back together

That will be soon😃
one whole family

1 whole HAPPY family 😳

Originally posted by: andy.a

ok no more detective work

Yaaayy
even if u tell me i will read.

But it won't be as much fun , because you'd know exactly what's coming up😕.

I love ur writing

Awww 😳 ... I'm flattered!

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

sry navi, didnt cumnt. but i'll as time permits frm my studies. hope u undrstand.the update was as usual speechless!!
luv ya loads
hugz