(J of a Wife - BOOK 3) A FAMILY REUNITES - Page 14

Originally posted by: thejazzgal

Firstly congos for Book 3

Thanks Jazzy 🤗 .
Hayeee such a painful prologue

Ya - it was 😔.
happy to read that UV is back! Finally!

He was away for the whole of book 2 😭 , it's time he got back to where he belongs😉/
Ahh the separation for 1 year the pain of missing him poor Manyata
But the year long separation dint make them stanger to themdelfs its just a lil tym discomfortness
Koi nahi they fall in love all over AGAIN

Or rekindle that forgotten love😳.
They'll start a new life with UMS
They'll marry AGAIN
A new understanding in thier relation..

Right!
I'll say this 1 yr separation will make them more close to eachother than before..

Correct👏!
The past cannot b changes .. He cant fill up his year long emptiness in her life that too when she needed him.. But a fresh n beautiful start is the only way wich will bring more love , happiness,togetherness to them..

Well said 👍🏼
Very well written prologue Navi.. Manyata's emotions were described very well
Thanx

Poor Uday he was amnestic he did miss her her but dnt feel her absence..

He was oblivious to everything.
Love d prologue

My cmnt for part 1 of Book 3 cmg soon

Waiting🥱

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

Very well written chapter Thanks Vibha 😃.

the first part was so emotional Yes - I did say that there was a very sad story behind all the pretence😭!
the real 'Veer' was so brave...and how much pain Roopa Aunty must have endured in silence felt sad for her... Ya , now she's ALL ALONE😔!
Glad that Shivani heard everything 😊 would she try to seperate Manveer now? No , she won't come between them. There is 1 more scene left with her, then her part ends completely.
and the car scene was so thrilling 😲 Uday is stubborn as ever 😆 Just like HIS OTHER HALF😳😉!!

excited about the next chapter
do continue soon 😃 thanks for the PM Welcome😊

(P.S : i did all that you had asked, deleted all the old PM's...'like'd the update and thank you note too )

Awww ... that's so great!!!

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Thank u Iqra 🤗 ... for this truely splendid comment😃!!!

Originally posted by: angelina6

hi navi once again,😉

I give you a promise that this part is not as long as the last, together it would be like my update, so I split it.😆

So where was i? ahh!! I was saying veer's anger can be justified. He was suffering from many nightmares and other problem, yet he must have felt betrayed .

I must accept it now ... my son is dead. MY SON, VEER, IS DEAD!!! Then who the hell am I? "Veer" barked ... before stoming off

This was one line where I saw our hot headed uday peeping out of veer. Manyta was also her usaual self- stubborn, he he he 😆

Then when I read the the brakes of the car was faulty I wanted to kill you. Why did you do it? Then I saw how beautifully you brought out the remaining sounds in veer's dreams. You actually recreated that scene. Beautiful navi, really beautiful. I really admire you for that.👏👏

The way uday wanted manyta to escape and how stubbornly she refused to do so was really nice😃

The line I found amusing was😃

MANYATA! VEER! Please Angel ! NO VEER! PRINCESS PLEASE! NOT WITHOUT U ,UDAY!!!

I really liked this line. I did know nothing would happen to manveer as you would never harm them. Or I would come behind you to haunt your 😆dreams

The final scene where uday filled manyta's mang with his blood really was just picture perfect,😛 or should I say word perfect. She was never widowed , her husband was always with her na. yes uday cannot die, he is really a superhero.

So I did reach the ending of my boring comment😕

Did you reach till here? Then I must appreciate your bravery😆

The update was really emotional like the last chap of book 1, so the next update is on 23 th, good I hope my internals gets over by then. Make it romantic na, navi, an emotinal update deserves a romantic one, this is a new proverb ok😃

And when will you be updating FL, have you forgot about it?😕

Thanks for the pm navi😃

Love you

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Loved the comment Vidhi ... thank you 🤗 .

Originally posted by: thejazzgal

Heyyy naviii jiii Hi Jazzy 😃. BTW - u don't have to call me "JI"😆.
thanks for thid wonderful bday present.. Muuuwaah 3RD kaise😕?
Awesome updatee..Thank u 🤗 Finally Uday is backkk! Hmmm😳!
roopa aunty got selfish for a whole year.. But she did had an emotinal story on her side to please the viewers nd we give her forgiveness... Awww ... so kind of you😉.
aww she killed veer to ease him from pain.. An emotional side to
melt our hearts... Yep , really sad 😭.
theres some kind of magical impact of magical Veer on mee *winkk* U and ME (both)😉
Poor shivani.. I pity her.. I advice u.. Pair up shivani with aditya :P Hawww😲 ... how cruel.
'NOT HAPPENING!, she crossed her arms over her chest and stayed stubborn. I'm begging u Angel. She shook her head in a NO. MANYATA! VEER! Please Angel ! NO VEER! PRINCESS PLEASE! NOT WITHOUT U ,UDAY!!!'
.. Awww i loved this part shooo muchhh. Awhh my arguing lovely couple <3

And the bickering starts again😆.
He called Princess.. The very first word after his memory returned! Appropriate ... hai na?
'A small
amount of blood oozed from the wound on his
shoulder. When Manyata hugged him , the blood
from his cuts smeared onto her fore-head , and marked her empty maang. I thought I lost u , Uday. Not in this life-time , Princess!' the limelight of theis update.. Had to end on a HIGH😉.
U always end d updates on cute n lovely Notes.. Awww , thanks for noticing😳!
Loved this update
Muuuwahhh
Do cont sooonnn.. I knw ull update nxt on 23 march.. But uss se pehle can i req u to update nxt part of ur other SS

I forgot where I ended that 1😕 . Need to go back to the "drawing-board" for that
Did i miss anythingg ? NOPE

Originally posted by: andy.a

Hey navi

Hi Andy😊
this doubt is disturbing me

Then ask away😆
in the promo in bk 2 u gave a scene where uday admires manyatas legs and she tells she is a mom

Actually , she was NAKED when he was admiring her and then she tells him that line. That part is within the next 2 chapters so , u'll get your explanation there.

It is on another occassion where he is admiring her legs ... THAT IS WHEN EVERYTHING IS BACK TO NORMAL BETWEEN THEM😳😃.
that time she did not have any problem to be intimate with uday
then why does she behave to uday in such a way in the prologue
Be patient Andy. And u will see for yourself.

what changed bw them

A hidden emotion decided to resurface
please help me

Okay ... I'll send the FIRE-BRIGADE over 🤣!!!